Reviews For Teddy
Reviewer: SingingBird
Date: 05/11/08 18:59
Chapter: Revelations

Nice chapter! I'm glad everyone came to talk to Teddy. It would have been bad if he woke up and none of them were there. I like the idea of the charity for the families of werewolves and their families.

Author's Response: Thanks! I was worried about how people would react to that. >.<

Reviewer: emLILYEVANS
Date: 05/11/08 17:59
Chapter: Revelations

hi kevin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Kevin: Hello. :) Thanks for feeding me.

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 05/11/08 17:50
Chapter: Revelations

I love it! I can't imagine how frustrating that would be to have people be so insanely prejudiced against you because something that you and your family have little control of.

Author's Response: Well, be grateful for that! Glad you like it! :D

Reviewer: KDTheRavenclaw
Date: 05/11/08 15:59
Chapter: Revelations

Nice chapter! Prejudiced people annoy me. Can something not horrible or life-threatening but funny happen to Edith soon?

Author's Response: Well, not soon, but in time...

Reviewer: Leah_Lovegood
Date: 05/11/08 14:37
Chapter: Revelations

Oh my god that's SOOOOOOO good! I

Author's Response: I what? I what?! Thanks for reviewing anyways! :Drnrn~Evie

Reviewer: moony 4eva
Date: 05/11/08 11:08
Chapter: Revelations

great chappie! poor teddy! he's having a really hard time at hogwarts! he reminds me a little of sirius cross remus. keep up with the good work! :):):)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/11/08 10:39
Chapter: Revelations

Interesting chapter!!! I wonder who spiked Teddy's drink!!?!?!? Loved reading this :-)

Author's Response: Yes, you really do need to think about who spiked it! It's rather important!rnrn~Evie

Reviewer: Sev and Lily
Date: 04/29/08 19:51
Chapter: Learning Prejudice

aww poor teddy. i am so happy to see this story updated again :) :) excited for more!

Author's Response: Good to hear!! There is a new chapter in the queue, but there's a bit of a blockage, at the moment. :(rnrn~Evie

Reviewer: taytay
Date: 04/20/08 22:20
Chapter: With Love, Hugs and Warnings.

what I like about the story:harry and andremeda share teddy
what I hate about the story:teddy knows about the mission that hary went on
what wouldnt help:harry being gangster

Author's Response: Um, is Harry a gangster? No...rnrn**is confused**rnrn~Evie

Reviewer: emLILYEVANS
Date: 04/20/08 19:02
Chapter: Learning Prejudice

omg im so upset im begining to cry but thats a good thing;(

Author's Response: lol, there are chapters coming up which will make you cry even more!

Reviewer: Rowanhood_in_China
Date: 04/19/08 5:33
Chapter: Prologue

thank you dear friend

Author's Response: um... no problem?rnrn~Evie

Reviewer: Kif
Date: 04/18/08 14:48
Chapter: Learning Prejudice

Thanks for a great chapter! I wasn't sure if this fic would get updated again, I'm glad to see that it has! I will keep a close eye on it.

Author's Response: I promise it will! There lots more chapters to come!

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 04/16/08 14:12
Chapter: Prologue

ooo this is getting interesting. adding the fact that remus was a werewolf and all the predguduces that come with it. poor teddy.

i like when you added teddy about to write to his greandmother and then harry but thn he starts mistrusting them. i like how he starts to think thet maybe his dad wasnt that great. this will make it very interesting. great job! plz update soon.

Reviewer: Andromeda_Tonks
Date: 04/16/08 9:05
Chapter: Learning Prejudice

I like the way that you've written that chapter. I don't know if that is where you're going, but you could work it up into a distrust of Andromeda and Harry. If you were to do that, you are definitely going the right way, because you haven't taken it two quickly, but there are little seeds of doubt. Sunlight here, a splash of water there... Still, I'm randomly speculating and you could head off in a completely different direction. I love this story, because I haven't seen anything else like it and you write it well. It's one of my favourites that I always want to see at the top of the list because it has a new chapter. Update soon, please, I'm really curious.

Author's Response: Yes, there is going to be some mistrust and a rather large arguement in future chapters. I'm so glad you like the story, thanks for such a lovely review!!rnrn~Evie

Reviewer: Rowanhood_in_China
Date: 04/16/08 8:10
Chapter: Learning Prejudice


Author's Response: hee hee, thank you! I do have a chapter in the queue, but it may be three weeks before it's updated. :(rnrn~Evie

Reviewer: Leah_Lovegood
Date: 04/15/08 17:20
Chapter: Learning Prejudice

Hi kevin. here's some virtual cookies:
(::) (::) (::)


Author's Response: Kevin: Thanks, but I don't eat cookies, I eat comments about the story. Nice offer, though.rnrn

Reviewer: magic_pen
Date: 04/15/08 16:02
Chapter: Learning Prejudice

We all love you Kevin!!!

But anyway, back to the review.

YAY!!!!!! It's so adorable. I love how he doesn't change his eye color, but keeps them like his dad. *squeel!!*

So hurry up with the next chapter (we don't want to starve Kevin, do we?)

Author's Response: No, we don't. ;)rnrnThank you! I was worried about how the eye colour thing would be recieved. >.

Reviewer: geminiginny
Date: 04/15/08 14:26
Chapter: Learning Prejudice

AWW! Poor little squit! he feels so unloved in this cold world. i feel all sad now (in a good way)

Author's Response: awww! Don't feel sad! Well... inside, I am very pleased I can make you feel that way! :p rnrn~Evie

Reviewer: sheltered_ambitions
Date: 04/14/08 20:34
Chapter: Learning Prejudice

aww poor kevin! i don't think i've ever fed him!!! :O
great story, i absoloutly love it! your characterization is down to a tee! great job!

Author's Response: Thank you!! :Drnrn~Evie

Reviewer: hjudd
Date: 04/14/08 17:43
Chapter: Learning Prejudice

sooo good!! Exactly as I would have pictured things!!

Author's Response: thanks!rnrn~Evie

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