Oh I like the start. :)
I like your writing style
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like the writing style, because I know some people will hate it!
Merry Christmas!! Thanks for the up-date. Keep t up.
Author's Response: You too! :)
oh yeah... i think harry at least shud have sided wid teddy.. dat DA dude is really off his rockers.... i mean he was the one who told teddy to go.... i think he was in love wid tonks.. m rite isnt it?...(as if ur gona giv me a straight answer!!)
its like snape n lily!!
Author's Response: You'll see. :)
awwwwww... dat was small..... but hey its christmas... so i ges dats understandable....
but dat was really small.... i didnt want to review so sooonn....
wat the heck.... updae sooon... n dis time a longer one plz.... pretty plz with sugar lumps on top?
Author's Response: Sorry, but I will not force my chapters to be longer when they don't need to be. There are natural breaks in a story, and that is where I make the chapters. It has nothing to do with Christmas, as I have had this chapter written for quite some time now. I appreciate that long chapters are nice to read, but, wouldn't you rather read a short good chapter than a long rubbish one? I appreciate the review, though, so thank you for reading my story. :) ~Evie
I can't believe Harry! I'd think he of all people would understand teachers who's goal in life is to make students miserable. *cough* Umbridge *cough*
I don't think Tonks and Lupin would have been disappointed in Teddy. I can picture Tonks rushing down to the school to give Dermot a piece of her mind! ;-)
Please, update soon!
Author's Response: Lol, so can I! Harry thinks that Teddy is over-reacting, as everything he's heard about Dermot has been about his job as a Hit-Wizard, and it's all been very positive. ~Evie
I loved the part where Teddy remembers what happens after Bill tells the kids a story about the final battle. Especially the line that goes, "Harry was furious with him, because loads of the little kids started sniveling and getting scared that there were Death Eaters under their beds, and then Hermione took me aside and asked me whether I “was okay” and “wasn’t upset” in the sort of voice that made me wonder if I was terminally ill."
I wonder what's the problem with Dermot? What's he got against Teddy/Remus/Tonks? He sounds an awful lot like Snape to me.
Oh, the part about Teddy wanting a dog was cute. I loved how he wanted to name it after Padfoot!
Great chapter! Please, update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! What a brilliant review! **Gives E-cookie** ~Evie
Haha, I thought this was one of those fics where two people write it. great chapter, a little short tho. Merry Christmas! I see a snape repeat in Dermot, also, i stick to my theory that he was in luv with tonks. update soon!
Author's Response: lol, sorry about the length, but there was a natural break in the stoy there. Well, he's not quite a Snape... ~Evie
Just saw your story today. It's remarkably good so far; Ted's rather believable.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Oh! what has this prof got to hate teddy for? You tease so well! : ) Continueing to love your work! Grandma Beth
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Why shouldn't we stick to this fic.?It's AWESOME!! It's one of the few fics I've been following that is written in first person, and you've done a really good job with that. Keep writing!
Author's Response: :D Thank ye! :D
Thanks for the update; I hope to read more. I think I've mentioned before, the first person POV is a nice change in most of the fan fiction.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Makes it stand out a little, no? :)
Dermots a jerk but the chapter was good! Merry Christmas Evie and Kevin!
Evie (and Kevin) this is wonderful. I love every part of this fic. As I think I said before, the first person pov is so great. You see such a more personal view of Teddy.
I think that Dermot bloke is turning out to be like the Snape-Harry hate-relationship in SS/PS. I really don't like him! Hehe, good though. This is probably intentional to show how Teddy relates to Harry, yet is still different.
As for the Hit-Wizard part, that was beyond scary if I was an eleven year old in that class! Do the ministry really have these?
All in all I really liked this chapter and I am sad because the next hasn't yet been validated.
Author's Response: **hugggles** What a lovely review, dear. ;) Yes, it is similar to the ~Harry/Snape relationship, but there's a bit more to come. ;) I do believe in one of the books, Hit-Wizards were mentioned. ;) ~Evie
long review........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................good chap................
OK, Kevin (I adore inanimate objects with names!) Here's your review:
I ABSOLUPOTIVILY LOVED IT!!!!!!
The story was fascinating. You captured the personality of an eleven-year-old boy perfectly! I would like to meet Ted. Keep updating quickly!
The only thing I would suggest (and only because I'm an ultra-stickler for these things, it's nothing personal!) is to watch punctuation, especially apostrophes. But I know how it can get when you're in full creative flow; you sometimes miss those things.
Author's Response: Yes, I am sorry about my grammar. I am actually PI acred, and I can spot errors in other people's writing easily, but when it comes to my own... I do have a beta, but for the first few chapters I didn't, so those are probably the worst. ;) I'm glad you liked the story! ~Evie
Author's Response: good review
Wow, this Dermot guy is a pain, but I suppose it wouldn't be Hogwarts if there wasn't at least one insufferable teacher hanging around. Great chapter, the bits about teddy's friends were especially funny/interesting!
Author's Response: Lol, true, but there's more to Dermot than meets the eye. ;)
Oh, I know that feeling. Is your computer ganging up on you?
This dada teacher seems like a jerk. Ooh, I hope we see more of him!
Author's Response: No, I actually got a new computer and it's lovely and shiny and fast. **huggles computer** I mean everything is going wrong by way of beta's, canon disagreements, constant rejection letters, a difficult POV, characterization issues... I won't bore you. The point is, the story is in my head, but it's difficult to explain what's going on in my brain cell sometimes. Glad you like the story - yes, Dermot is a very big jerk, and there is a whole lot more of him!! :D ~Evie
Professor Dermot...not sure what to think of him! Reminds me a bit of Umbridge, ha! You're doing a great job with this story, update soon!
Author's Response: No, he's a bit more scary than Umbridge... well, I'm not sure, but he's a different type of scary. ;)
yay an update! this story continues to be intersting, i felt like this chapter read alot like a diary entry. can't wait for more!! sorry that things have been going wrong latley for you i hope things improve :)
Author's Response: So do I!! Glad you like it! Thanks for R&R'ing!! ~Evie