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Reviewer: Osced
Date: 12/06/07 13:42
Chapter: Chapter 2: Better Now Than Never

Great Chapter,maybe little short! James and Lily as friends, just like i think.
Keep Up The great Work!

Reviewer: Osced
Date: 12/06/07 13:30
Chapter: Chapter 1: James Saves Severus, Part Two

Intersting chapter, but how did Snape know that James is a animagus? I dosn't relly make sense, why didn't he tell Dumbledore about that?
Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: trulylily
Date: 11/28/07 15:47
Chapter: Chapter 1: James Saves Severus, Part Two

omg! love the story, and my name is Brittany! idk, i just got sooooo hyper when i read that!

Reviewer: siriusblackhead
Date: 11/14/07 20:36
Chapter: Chapter 3: Lazy Summer Days

This is really good so far! Keep it up!

Reviewer: BRITTD25
Date: 10/29/07 12:09
Chapter: Chapter 3: Lazy Summer Days

I am loving this story! You have done an excellent job thus far, can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: JamesNLilyLover
Date: 10/28/07 23:39
Chapter: Chapter 3: Lazy Summer Days

Hopefully, you will update as quickly as possible, because this story is really interesting!

Reviewer: quick_quotes_quill
Date: 10/28/07 4:21
Chapter: Chapter 3: Lazy Summer Days

very good
and sansus - from roman mythology?

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 10/28/07 2:15
Chapter: Chapter 3: Lazy Summer Days

Oh cute! Good update.

Reviewer: Hermionelookalike101
Date: 10/28/07 1:13
Chapter: Chapter 3: Lazy Summer Days

Bravo! yet another good chapter. Well done. Can't wait for the next one!!! How long do you think we have to wait?? (not that im impatient, because i know you're probably busy. lol)

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 10/27/07 23:47
Chapter: Chapter 3: Lazy Summer Days

a roman god?! clever idea having sirius's middle name be the roman god of loyalty and honesty and wht not. it totally matches his personality :) do i win? lol. great chappie! its funny how james is like trembling wen he gets a leter frm lily. that totally amused me! the writing was awsome! UPDATE!!!!!!

Reviewer: Hermionelookalike101
Date: 10/25/07 19:49
Chapter: Chapter 1: James Saves Severus, Part Two

Sorry. I didn't realize there was a second chapter. It was great!!!! Please don't get me wrong. I loved it!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: No worries, no worries. There are just some minor points to work out with my mod regarding the third chapter, and it should be up in a very short time.

Reviewer: Hermionelookalike101
Date: 10/25/07 19:48
Chapter: Chapter 2: Better Now Than Never

That was great!!! WIill you update????

Reviewer: Hermionelookalike101
Date: 10/25/07 19:37
Chapter: Chapter 1: James Saves Severus, Part Two

That's it???

Author's Response: Care to elaborate?

Reviewer: whitefur
Date: 10/24/07 9:59
Chapter: Chapter 1: James Saves Severus, Part Two

UPDATE!!!!!!!! oh pls update ASAP!!!!

Author's Response: I seem to be getting double-posts on all my reviews =P Does this mean you're doubly happy? Or I'm doubly stupid? Either way, thanks for reviewing and keep reading!

Reviewer: whitefur
Date: 10/24/07 9:55
Chapter: Chapter 1: James Saves Severus, Part Two

UPDATE!!!!!!!! oh pls update ASAP!!!!

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 10/20/07 21:11
Chapter: Chapter 1: James Saves Severus, Part Two

Nice opening! As far as I'm concerned the more chapters the better :) you've got a good base to build the characters off of and you've established where the story left off quite nicely:) good job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm doing my best to keep everyone "real" (and since when did Rowling ever imply that Sirius Black was a man-whore? You won't find him one--well, not that much of one--in my story).

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 10/20/07 21:11
Chapter: Chapter 2: Better Now Than Never

That's so cute and potentially awkward! I love it! This is going in my favs your writing is absolutly brilliant! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!I'm not one for waiting patiently :D

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 10/20/07 21:06
Chapter: Chapter 2: Better Now Than Never

That's so cute and potentially awkward! I love it! This is going in my favs your writing is absolutly brilliant! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!I'm not one for waiting patiently :D

Author's Response: If you like awkward, just wait until Chapter 4 =P

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 10/20/07 20:47
Chapter: Chapter 1: James Saves Severus, Part Two

Nice opening! As far as I'm concerned the more chapters the better :) you've got a good base to build the characters off of and you've established where the story left off quite nicely:) good job!

Reviewer: kittykat
Date: 10/18/07 19:13
Chapter: Chapter 2: Better Now Than Never

i love it...update!

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