I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it.
Aw, this was a really nice story, with a fabulous ending. The grammar needed some work, there didn't appear to be many question marks when there really should have been, but it was a lovely concept, and Harry hugging Teddy in the rain was a very touching scene. I think the writing needs a little more care, mostly stuff that could be fixed with some proof-reading, but overall it was really nice. So thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I know I missed a few grammer things, and I proof-read it twice, and then some one actually did beta it for me, but I'm sure some things were still missed. Glad you liked the ending, it seems a lot of people did.
I could fell the emotion. Keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Author's Response: Thank you. I was hoping I would get the emotions believable.
WOW! That was wonderful! It was tender, loving and very much the way I could see Harry being in that situation. Excellent job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I had hoped I would get Harry right.
Good story. I like how the story flowed. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
This is really good !
I loved the portrayal of Harry & Ginny's kids - they were exactly how I pictured their personalities after reading the epilouge.
Good job :]
Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah, I've been picturing them that way to. I wasn't sure how people would take me making Albus a Ravenclaw though, for some reason he just struck me as one. Don't know why. Happy that you liked the fic.
*sniff* good story!!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Wow that was awesome. I think it would have been more sad if only one of them died. You know you're into a book when you're sad thinking about it months after. :P 10/10 baby!
Author's Response: Yeah. I've still been grieving over Sirius' death in the fifth book, and it's been years. And poor Fred! Thank you for the review, glad you liked it.
Awesome one shot. I think this was a interpretation of Teddy later on life is pretty good. I really liked this one alot!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It took me a while to figure out how to accurately potray Teddy.
Aw, this was really sweet! *huggles Teddy* It portrayed Harry's doubts and fears well, and Teddy reacted accordingly (kudos to him for getting Victoire as well *smilecry*)
But I noticed several typos. There were at least four or five instances where you put a comma in the place of a question mark, such as:
"How do I know if that’s true,”
When you're describing Lily, you say 'Ginny to' when the 'to' should have two O's.
The very last line also had a minor typo:
“What happen to my vase in the living room?”
When it should be happened. (excuse me for being nitpicky...V_V)
Other than that, it was really well-written!~
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing those out. I go over the chapters several times and siitll I seem to miss things. But glad you liked Teddy and Harry.
it was really touchy. jkr shouldn't have killed both of teddy's parents. :(
Author's Response: Yeah, I agree that she shouldn't have killed them both.