Reviews For Beginnings
Reviewer: -Rosette_Potter-
Date: 10/26/08 8:03
Chapter: Beginnings

Aww...
It was sweet! I liked it!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/09/08 14:01
Chapter: Beginnings

I thought you did really well integrating the OOC behaviour. It could make sense though, many obsessive and controlling partners appear perfect to outsiders. For all we know Dean could've been that way, not that i want him to be of course. Anyway, I like the bit at the end too, where Hermione sees a turning point for both her and Ginny. It was also interesting to see Hermione gauge Ginny's mood and Handle her from what she knew of her character, I like in depth stuff like that. All in all, great fic!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: cyt_potter
Date: 09/19/07 19:52
Chapter: Beginnings

Ginny and Dean might of been a little ooc but I still liked this fic! It was well written, and I liked they flow of the story. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate your review.

Reviewer: Wicked_Quill
Date: 09/10/07 8:05
Chapter: Beginnings

good. Dean was a bit OOC though.

Author's Response: I thought so, too. But the idea for this fic came when I thought, "What if there's this whole different side to Dean than everyone knows?" Everything kind of took off from there.

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