Reviews For Australia
Reviewer: Adeyla
Date: 11/17/08 1:27
Chapter: Chapter 1

i always wondered about Hermione's parents, because we never get a description of them, we never even get their names! i wonder how strong Hermione's memory charms are...

Reviewer: astridkelley
Date: 09/16/07 13:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

chilling, truly.

Reviewer: Rhias
Date: 09/11/07 1:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

I think its good, mabey you could do a similar story, from when Herminone first modifies their memories, what they do in Australia, who they meet and end with Herminone comming for them. just an idea

Author's Response: Thank you, Rhias! I think that your idea is very promising. But it seems to me as an idea for a big chaptered story, and I’m not feeling like writing another one at the moment – I have two WIPs right now (sigh). Lazy me…

Reviewer: KaileeA42
Date: 09/10/07 15:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was really good. Good job on your first fic. I always wondered about Hermione's parents.

Reviewer: KaileeA42
Date: 09/10/07 15:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was really good. Good job on your first fic. I always wondered about Hermione's parents.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I never imagined that so many people were also worrying about them. And I am so glad to find that I was wrong…

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 09/09/07 15:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow. this is really interesting. I've wondered a lot about hermione's parents since reading the seventh book, and it usually comes out rather humorous. but your story is more manic and frantic and paranoid. I wonder what they're like when hermione takes the spell off.

Author's Response: Thank you! I agree there is a lot of stuff in the HP that is perceived as funny at first, but then you start thinking… and it is not so funny after all. But I think that there is a chance for a humourous fic in the case of Hermione’s parents – I mean when she lifts the spell and they are happy… But alas, I’m not the writer for this job; I just cannot write humour at all…

Reviewer: MF Luder
Date: 09/08/07 23:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is gorgeous. You did an amazing job. The writing style makes the reader feel just as disjointed and disoriented as the characters must feel. The story isn't just told, it's experienced. Great job. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It is exactly what I was trying to achieve with this story. I really feel sorry for poor Hermione’s parents; even though I know that she meant no harm for them.

Reviewer: beautyfades
Date: 09/08/07 23:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very creative and refreshing. I had forgotten about that small detail mentioned in the book and I think it's very creative that you chose to continue on with it.

You did a very interesting job of bringing up things that seemed to constantly remind them of their daughter and then the voice in their head would point them in a different direction. Lovely, lovely.

And this is your first fan-fic, too? Well good luck on future ones as well. From the way your writing style was displayed in this one, I would say you defanitly have a knack for this.

I hope you also get lot smore reviews since they do seem to be so desired by we authors, don't they? Thank-you for the entertainment.

~Beauty Fades

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your support! It is indeed my first fic on this site – even though it’s not the very first overall. I have been writing for quite a long time already; I’m just lacking experience in writing in English (it is not my native, you see). I’m still having a language problem, but now it’s getting better, I hope :) I must confess that this story is rather unusual for me. I decided to write this fic because I was really struck by Hermione’s actions. They just felt so wrong to me, even creepy. And then I noticed that in the Wizarding world it is a very common practice to alter human minds – the ‘good’ guys do it as often as the ‘bad’ ones – which is rather disturbing, to my opinion. So I just ought to write it.

Reviewer: crazy_person
Date: 09/08/07 23:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

I..dont really get it.And im Australian.And how did that have to do with Harry Potter.
Maybe its just me but...I dont get it

Reviewer: crazy_person
Date: 09/08/07 23:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

I..dont really get it.And im Australian.And how did that have to do with Harry Potter.
Maybe its just me but...I dont get it

Author's Response: Well, it was just a small moment in Deathly Hallows, when Hermione tells Harry that she put her parents under a memory charm, so that they would forget her and move to Australia. It is Hermione’s quote in the summary, in fact. And this fic is about their feelings. Australia here is the symbol rather than the real place…

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 09/08/07 22:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

... amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you! I’m so happy that people liked it!

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