Reviewer: IXIHawkeyeIXI
Date: 04/15/06 22:16
Chapter: Sugar and Spice

Once again, you give us a great chapter. I hope that you will be updating soon, as I have grown used to reading this story and wish to know where it is going. The characters have developed so much since your first chapter, and I am constantly checking to see if there is a new chapter, to see what you have in store for these characters next. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Chris_04
Date: 04/13/06 10:33
Chapter: Sugar and Spice

This is such a cute story! I'm not sold on G/D, but you've been pulling it off great :)

Reviewer: Ginny Harry Lover
Date: 04/02/06 20:55
Chapter: Sugar and Spice

Love the chappie!!!

Reviewer: loony_nat
Date: 03/29/06 6:27
Chapter: Prologue

Sorry, I mean story!!!

Reviewer: loony_nat
Date: 03/29/06 6:26
Chapter: Prologue


Author's Response: I'm dreadfully sorry that I've kept you all waiting such a long time. =( You'll be satisfied knowing that the end is near and more chapters are coming...well...eventually.

Reviewer: Sarahkool
Date: 03/21/06 14:46
Chapter: Sugar and Spice

I love this story but you need to UPDATE!

Reviewer: loony_nat
Date: 03/18/06 5:30
Chapter: Prologue


Reviewer: loony_nat
Date: 03/18/06 5:28
Chapter: Prologue


Reviewer: slumbery_sunshine1
Date: 03/07/06 0:57
Chapter: Sugar and Spice

Good story! I love it so far, write some more! Quick!

Reviewer: dreaming
Date: 02/22/06 16:15
Chapter: Sugar and Spice

looooooooooove it! great story! i want to have a masquerade now!!!

Reviewer: little_kitty
Date: 02/11/06 17:38
Chapter: Chocolate Hearts

hey, great stuff! Loved every bit of it! You really have talent when it comes to words and this chapter was o cute! The Hogsmeade Trip sounded a lot funner than it's sometimes portrayed in the books, I think. Seamus is nice, I've never really pictured him with hermione, but he seems decent so far. This is so awesome, I'm putting you on my favourite author's list! Hope you enjoy your place there!

Reviewer: Courtney22
Date: 02/11/06 15:02
Chapter: Falling

I have really enjoyed your story thus far. I like that Hermione didn’t rush into liking Harry and that she dated someone before him. I thought it was an interesting twist that her boyfriend was cheating on her. I thought that she had fallen for him so hard and so fast was a little out of character as she didn’t even seem to know him that well before they started dating. I like how she has eased into her feelings for Harry though as we don’t always notice when we like our best friend. Though a masquerade ball is a little cliché I like that you at least tried to have a plausible reason for there being one. I like all the details you put in about the ball.

Reviewer: little_kitty
Date: 02/09/06 16:56
Chapter: Beautiful Disaster

Hahaha...I thought this was funny. Okay, I totally take back what I said about Seamus...such a player. Ugh. Anyway, the spider repellant was hilarious! Well, that's something I'd do too. Oh yeah, and now it seems like Harry's decided to take over the "overprotective" role from Ron, I guess, because it's kind of like how Ron tries to protect Ginny. Great stuff!

Reviewer: little_kitty
Date: 02/09/06 16:49
Chapter: A Question Of Heart

Hey, some great stuff! I just wanted to point out that Muggles is capitalized, or I believe it is so. I liked Malfoy's character here...oh is he going to pair up with Ginny? Hm...oh well good job!

Author's Response: -sheepish grin- Yes, you're correct, however, by the time I discovered my mistake, I figured that it would take way too much effort to fix it. Thanks for pointing that out, though. =)

Reviewer: little_kitty
Date: 02/09/06 16:43
Chapter: Blissfully Unaware

Wow....just wow. Your story is fantabulous! I have honestly thoroughly enjoyed reading every chapter so far. And that's saying a lot, considering that I usually read a chapter before I lose interest. But your story has managed to catch my attention. I think your characters are great, and somehow, your story reminds me slightly of one of my fics, Fatally in Love, since there's the situation with Harry and Ron, but Hermione with another dude. But yours progresses a lot faster, and you use Seamus as Hermione's b/f. But yours is way better than mine. I think the reason why I like your story so much is because we don't really get to see the other side of Hermione, and here you have it all written out. And yet it's still so believable. Seamus is such a nice guy! I want him for my b/f...nah I'm kidding. Well, I sincerely hope you update again soon, because I'm going to go read the rest of it now! Lovely work, 10/10!

Reviewer: cheeks023
Date: 02/08/06 21:27
Chapter: Sugar and Spice

I'm new to fan fiction. I Have read many stories over the last few days. This one is one of the best I've read. Definitely keeps truest to the characters. I am most excited to have another chapter...SOON!!!

Reviewer: cheeks023
Date: 02/08/06 21:26
Chapter: Sugar and Spice

I'm new to fan fiction. I Have read many stories over the last few days. This one is one of the best I've read. Definitely keeps truest to the characters. I am most excited to have another chapter...SOON!!!

Reviewer: maschan
Date: 02/05/06 23:55
Chapter: Anxious in a Good Way?


Reviewer: KoolGirl
Date: 02/05/06 20:48
Chapter: Sugar and Spice

aw what a cute story! i love it! udate as soon as u can, please! 10/10

Reviewer: elaraluna
Date: 01/28/06 4:08
Chapter: Sugar and Spice

PlEEEEEEEEESEEEEEE update..... i'll burst if u make me wait any longer.... awesome job.... love ur story

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