Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/15/08 18:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, that was very powerful. I'm ashamed to admit that while reliving Snape's memories I too felt like performing the AK curse on his father. You have a great talent for projecting the feelings of the characters you write about into the readeer as well as pulling the reader into the scene itself. I could hear the cabbiage roll across the floor, hear the static from the TV set and feel the grime of the room. Well done.

Reviewer: RavenclawDiamond
Date: 01/17/08 14:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

Absolutely amazing. It was dark but very affective and I loved the way you wrote about his childhood, it made me feel really sorry for Snape. By far the best piece I have seen on Snape's past!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review... much appreciated!

Reviewer: staples
Date: 11/28/07 17:10
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very ,very good. That was the best I have read about Snape's past. Short and to the point, but not lacking any details. It was great.

Author's Response: Well, I could have elaborated... but I wanted to keep it short - it creates a harder, more striking affect. Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: phantom phreak
Date: 09/17/07 0:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

the single best piece i have read about his past. chilling, emotionally driven, and beautifully written. thank you.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks a lot for that. And thanks for enjoying it.

Reviewer: snapefan2007
Date: 09/10/07 16:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

amazing.

Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate your compliments.

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 09/09/07 18:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow. Beautifully chilling.

Author's Response: Thanks. It was chilling for me to write too.

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 09/09/07 15:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was really good.

Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate that. I wasn't sure how people would respond to it, considering the nature of the work.

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