Wow, that was very powerful. I'm ashamed to admit that while reliving Snape's memories I too felt like performing the AK curse on his father. You have a great talent for projecting the feelings of the characters you write about into the readeer as well as pulling the reader into the scene itself. I could hear the cabbiage roll across the floor, hear the static from the TV set and feel the grime of the room. Well done.
Absolutely amazing. It was dark but very affective and I loved the way you wrote about his childhood, it made me feel really sorry for Snape. By far the best piece I have seen on Snape's past!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review... much appreciated!
Very ,very good. That was the best I have read about Snape's past. Short and to the point, but not lacking any details. It was great.
Author's Response: Well, I could have elaborated... but I wanted to keep it short - it creates a harder, more striking affect. Glad you enjoyed it!
the single best piece i have read about his past. chilling, emotionally driven, and beautifully written. thank you.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks a lot for that. And thanks for enjoying it.
Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate your compliments.
wow. Beautifully chilling.
Author's Response: Thanks. It was chilling for me to write too.
That was really good.
Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate that. I wasn't sure how people would respond to it, considering the nature of the work.