Reviews For Partings
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/14/07 10:23
Chapter: Partings

Nice chapter. One thing it should have been surprise insteead of surprised in the paragraph about Sirius ordering Firewhiskey. I liked this one shot very much. As you can tell the Marauders are my favorite characters.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I had some fun deciding how this scene should go. :) I'll go change that typo, thanks! Cyns

Reviewer: Cwiddy
Date: 09/13/07 21:07
Chapter: Partings

This is a great view of how James may have told Remus about them going into hiding. It shows the distrust that had started to erode on the Maurader's Friendship...and just how powerful Voldemort's hold was on people of the time! :) Enjoyed your story Sis!


Author's Response: Thanks sis. I'm glad you felt I caught this moment. Cyns

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 09/13/07 19:48
Chapter: Partings

it was soo touching
u could turn dis into a chapter story
i would luv dat
anywayz it was a very gud one shot

Author's Response: Thank you! This will most like stay a one-shot, but I've written other stories that say some of what happened later! Cyns

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