Reviewer: FullofLife
Date: 11/06/07 13:41
Chapter: Look At All Of The Lonely People

Ooo, nice story, most definitely. I liked the characterisation of Eileen, though she didn't seem very Slytherin to me. But not ever Slytherin will fit into the mold... a quote I enjoyed:

“Yer’ sis’ got married?” he asked in a scratchy voice.

Why? Becuase I've always imagined Severus's father to be very... sophisticated... clear, trim, perfect language... etc. :D Great job again!

Reviewer: BeatleManiac
Date: 09/15/07 7:48
Chapter: Look At All Of The Lonely People

i LOVE it

Reviewer: pwcapone
Date: 09/11/07 23:22
Chapter: Look At All Of The Lonely People

Sad story. Very good, but very sad too. Nice work.

Reviewer: slytherins_queen2
Date: 09/11/07 18:53
Chapter: Look At All Of The Lonely People

Beautifully written, really. A wonderful story. You wrote it so well, so beautifully that it really drew the reader in. I got a little teary towards the end as well.. Poor Elieen such a hard life...=( Keep writing!

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 09/09/07 15:22
Chapter: Look At All Of The Lonely People

Oh so sad...poor Sev.

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