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Name: FullofLife (Signed) · Date: 11/06/07 13:41 · For: Look At All Of The Lonely People
Ooo, nice story, most definitely. I liked the characterisation of Eileen, though she didn't seem very Slytherin to me. But not ever Slytherin will fit into the mold... a quote I enjoyed:

“Yer’ sis’ got married?” he asked in a scratchy voice.

Why? Becuase I've always imagined Severus's father to be very... sophisticated... clear, trim, perfect language... etc. :D Great job again!


Name: BeatleManiac (Signed) · Date: 09/15/07 7:48 · For: Look At All Of The Lonely People
i LOVE it


Name: pwcapone (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 23:22 · For: Look At All Of The Lonely People
Sad story. Very good, but very sad too. Nice work.


Name: slytherins_queen2 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 18:53 · For: Look At All Of The Lonely People
Beautifully written, really. A wonderful story. You wrote it so well, so beautifully that it really drew the reader in. I got a little teary towards the end as well.. Poor Elieen such a hard life...=( Keep writing!


Name: Crows (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 15:22 · For: Look At All Of The Lonely People
Oh so sad...poor Sev.


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