Love it! I was so tempted to do Dobby for the challenge, but I wound up with Creevy. Still, this is AMAZING! The toasters have a real chance now :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I look forward to reading your entry as well. Go Toasters!
That was quite a lovely story. The depth of it all was intruiging, and I loved how you chose Dobby of all people to accompany on his journey to death.
I loved how Lucius was portrayed like that; it was interesting symbolism you chose to have, since Lucius was evil, after all. That was a nice touch.
What I really liked the most was the part about death ferrying people over, and how they got scared of him occasionally and came back. The fact that Dumbledore is on that boat, encouraging people to come across, was very like him, and it was very clever of you to think of that!
It was a very sad, sweet story that gives insight to the hopes of a not-so-minor character. Great job!
Author's Response: I have to admit part of the reason I chose Dobby is because for some reason his death was the one I sobbed over in DH. I was deeply saddened by several deaths but I just broke down over Dobby. Thank you for your in-depth review!
This story made me cry. (In a good way)
If I could make any suggestion for making it even better, it would be that
I would like to see the people actually thanking Dobby, rather than being told about it. It would improve and already good story...
Nice touch, byt he way, having the Devil Appear to Dobby as Lucius...
Author's Response: I'll definitely look into your suggestion but as I'm writing another (and considerably longer) entry for the Autumn Challenge, it will have to go on the back burner for now. As for Lucius, he's just so perfectly devious that I couldn't resist. Thanks for the review!
A beautiful story and very well done. Thank you!
Author's Response: And thank you for your review!