Reviews For The Cause
Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 09/25/07 22:03
Chapter: Trendsetters

Oh, that was hilarious!

Again, loved the Marty Quote at the beginning. Believe it or not, I would be interested in the cheese dream (it sounds invigorating! :D). Remus' dream was just way out there, though, highly realistic.

“Oh, James,” he says, in a voice which is rather more high pitched than I remember, but unmistakably his. “It’s Ev — Lily, James! Oh, James, hold me! Hold me, you big hunk of man!”

“I didn’t know you thought of James that way, but I’m sure ... um ... oh, the whole school would be pleased to find out, wouldn’t they? Sirius Black, self proclaimed ladies schmooze, whatever that is, carries a burning flame for his best friend and Quidditch star, James Pot—”

Now these are my two favorite quotes from the beginning. So utterly funny; I love Remus' secret witty side. :D

One down — one hundred and ninety nine to go!

Marty is so dedicated!

“Was that Sirius Black, James Potter and their friends just now?”

“Why, yes,” I say, smiling at the boy. “It was.”

“Oh,” the boy says, smiling back. “Then can I sign whatever it is they did?”

I blink. “Do you want to know about the issue you’re raising awareness for?”

“No thanks,” he says. “I just want to sign it.”

Trendsetters. Don’t you just love them?

Now that was too funny. Now if only we could get trendsetters to gain some intelligence...:D

Great chapter! I can't wait for the next update. Do I see a little Marty/Remus action on the horizon? Probably not this early, but one can hope. Best wishes! :D

Author's Response: Well ... time shall tell. Thanks for the review, it was great! I love to know what people think of each bits, so thanks very much. It should be updated soon ... ish.

Reviewer: siriusblack1440
Date: 09/25/07 16:55
Chapter: Trendsetters

that was so amazing and they got marty attention which is good but she acts like she has major ocd with the mauraduers

Author's Response: Yeah ... she really does. =D She just finds them fascinating, and (let's be honest) doesn't have any real friends, so has a lot of free time (even with her various campaigns). I mean, if you had to be obssessed with anyone, you'd choose the Marauders, right?

Reviewer: Idiot of ravenclaw
Date: 09/25/07 16:08
Chapter: Trendsetters

ahahaha this is very funny, sorry I didn't comment the first chapter, i am really busy with school and stuff, but yay Remus!!!

Author's Response: It's fine - believe me, I understand! Thanks for taking the time to review, and yay Remus indeed!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 09/25/07 14:45
Chapter: Trendsetters

I feel so bad for Marty. Is she Luna's mom? I luv ur story! Sirius is just hilarious in it. Keep writing!

Author's Response: No, she's not Luna's Mum - the thought crossed my mind, but I'm pretty sure she's not. But she certainly has Luna-like tendancies! Just because characters have similar traits, doesn't mean they're related, though, it's just a coincidence. Thanks for reviewing, though!

Reviewer: LadyCassandra
Date: 09/25/07 14:21
Chapter: Trendsetters

I just love this story. It's such a great chapter. I love the part that happened in the dorms with Sirius talking to James in his sleep.

Author's Response: =D Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Chomione
Date: 09/23/07 6:21
Chapter: The Plight of the Pixie


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 09/19/07 21:11
Chapter: The Plight of the Pixie

I loved the interview at the beginning. It gives an excellent insight to Marty's character, as well as her excerpts.

Which brings me to my next favorite thing. I like how you switched the POV. Marty' is now shown (and definitely makes me want to read more) and Remus' wittiness is quite refreshing. Which brings me to my favorite quote:

“Wormtail!” he cries, a little too loudly, standing up in a ‘eureka!’ moment of clarity. Well done, Sirius. You get fifty Nutter Points.

And now everyone I know will be given a certain amount of Nutter Points... :D

Great job. I can't wait for the next chapter to be validated. Best wishes!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the interview at the beginning! There will be interviews / notes at the beginning of every chapter, sometimes relating to what will happen / is happening, some just random filler (hopefully of the amusing kind). I'm also very happy to hear you liked the "Martiness" (excellent way of putting it) and Remus' witticisms, which I'm sure he thought all the time, just never said aloud. Hope to see you next chapter, anyway!

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 09/15/07 0:15
Chapter: The Plight of the Pixie

You never fail to make me laugh. Marty is amazingly developed already, being weird and stalkerish, but just enough to make me love her instead of running away. And Horny ... priceless.
Well done! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: *grins inanely* Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Weird, stalkerish but loveable is exactly what I wanted from Marty. So yay!

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 09/14/07 19:15
Chapter: The Plight of the Pixie

I am so sorry I haven’t been here yet. I have been working on my Challenge entry, and reading a lot of other ‘Claw stories. However, I am here now, and I will impart my exalted opinions on your chapter. *giggles *
Do you realize the name changed from Mary to Marty? Or is that the Interviewer named Marty? I’m just a tad confused by that, but to continue…
Working for the Cause, and being slightly flighty, so far, is the description of at least one girl in every school in every country, in the world. You are doing a great job with her.
The Remus part was so funny I could not stop laughing. I say again, you write the Marauders so well and I adore the ways and means you employ to have James rhapsodise, and Sirius acting like a fool, Remus, so sweet and smart, and Git, gitty.
“Not that I’m a stalker or anything,…” Hilarious.
All right, I think I get it now, Marty was interviewing Mary. Sometimes I embarrass myself with my denseness.
Ambereyes? Snarler? Psychotic… oh yeah. Fleas, oh I think I need to laugh for a moment… Ok I’m back. I love how they came up with the nicknames. MWPP, are the infamous Marauders, and you have given plausible explanations as to how they came to have them.
Well do you really need me to say it? You do? OK fine, I loved it, and I am looking forward to reading more of it. And you know it is going on my fast expanding favorites list. One other thing… ‘Claws for the Cup! See ya next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, the Mary/Marty thing is a bit confusing ... Mary is a canon character, we know from DH that she was a girl in the same year as Lily, and I'm pretty sure she was Gryffindor. And when I was trying to think of a name for Marty, and came up (obviously) with Marty. Then later, I realised Marty and Mary were kind of similar, but ... I dunno, I couldn't think of her as anything else. Anyway. I'm glad you liked it! Go 'Claws! Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Hedwig with a quill
Date: 09/14/07 17:40
Chapter: The Plight of the Pixie

Marty should get together with Xenophilious Lovegood!

Author's Response: *Gasp*! You picked up on the Lovegood factor! I deliberatly made Marty a little bit Luna-ish! Yay!

Reviewer: KneazleWeazl
Date: 09/14/07 15:33
Chapter: The Plight of the Pixie


Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: x_lily_evans_x
Date: 09/14/07 3:21
Chapter: The Plight of the Pixie

Oh my gosh, this was so funny! Loved the way you introduced the characters and how they got their names, and I think you've got Remus' character down pat. Please DO NOT abandon this story, no matter what! :D

Author's Response: I won't - I promise. I never post a fic unless I fully intend to complete it. So don't worry on that score! Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: goGinny_84
Date: 09/13/07 19:09
Chapter: The Plight of the Pixie

Why yes, I do like this! Remus's part is very nicley done. All of the maraudes are in character. Good work- keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! And that the Marauders are in character - It's one thing I always try to achieve! So thanks!

Reviewer: siriusblack1440
Date: 09/13/07 16:51
Chapter: The Plight of the Pixie

oh god this fanfic is so hilarious please continue and seriously sirius needs to watch his tongue cause that girl hears everything

Author's Response: Oh yes, she certainly does! I'm glad you liked it! =D

Reviewer: oceanianow
Date: 09/13/07 15:27
Chapter: The Plight of the Pixie

Yay, another story! I'm so ecited for this one. I hope you will continue soon!

Author's Response: I will! I'm glad you're looking forward to it! So am I!

Reviewer: LadyCassandra
Date: 09/13/07 15:02
Chapter: The Plight of the Pixie

The story was extremely funny especially the parts from Lupin's point of view.

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so! There will be more soon ...

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