Reviews For The Cause
Reviewer: Idiot of ravenclaw
Date: 11/30/07 17:04
Chapter: The Annexe

aawwww chapter too short, stop with the cliffies, ppllleeeaaassseee, come on she needs to go over to remuses house and cry into his shoulder, it would be soo cute

Author's Response: Lol, wouldn't it? Well, I'm not saying what's going to happen, because I'm eeeeeevil, but I will try to update soon. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Spadekitty
Date: 11/29/07 7:09
Chapter: The Annexe

Awww....poor Marty. :[
I do hope things get more cheery, but still, this chappie was nice- I noticed most people discribe their character after they lost someone by crying and shouting but not paying much attention to their emotions. great work! :)
please continue!

~Spadez


Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad I was able to pull off her emotions, instead of the standard crying and shouting. Because Marty just isn't the shouting type ... she's like me in that way. I hardly ever shout, and anyway, I think losing your mother ... the emotions would go a lot deeper than just a tantrum. So yeah. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 11/29/07 1:26
Chapter: The Annexe

I don’t mind it being short! This is probably my favourite chapter so far, even though I do say that every chapter. :]

I feel so sorry for everyone! Marty … Aunt Tabby … Remus … Remus’ mum … James …

I loved the part about Remus’ transformation (well, not really, because it’s sad) and you wrote it really well. It’s not very often you see fics where he undergoes his transformation alone, and I think you described it brilliantly. You’re amazing at description and people’s emotions.

I really love Remus. I have suspicions that this story will make him overtake Sirius in my “Marauders I want to marry” list. Not that I actually have a list like that, of course. :]

I can’t wait for the next chapter! *fangirl squee*

Jennifer


Author's Response: Thanks! I love your reviews! They're always so nice ... I feel sorry for a lot of people, too. Poor them. At least it's in my power to make things work out for them. Thanks so much for saying I describe people's emotions well, you're the second person to say that, and I do struggle with it sometimes. So it's really great to hear. Thank you!

Reviewer: emmie4is
Date: 11/28/07 17:11
Chapter: The Annexe

An interesting chapter... I like how James is worried about Remus before his transformation, I haven't read many fics where one of the other marauders will check up on Remus during the summer before he transforms, Update soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I think James cares very deeply about his friends, no matter what. He's very loyal like that ... remember how he trusted Peter with his family's lives? Even though that wasn't the best idea. But he obviously cares a lot about them. Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: emmie4is
Date: 11/28/07 17:06
Chapter: Taffy's

Poor Marty! How horrible! It would be interesting to know what Sirius is a hiding. Are you going to do like a flashback later on or seperate short-story for that?

Author's Response: ....... Sirius is hiding something? I don't remember that ... when did it say that?

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 11/28/07 16:12
Chapter: The Annexe

poor Marty! wait- who killed her mum? I'm a little confoozled at that. Aweosme but sad chappie! can't wait for the next!
~Padfoot

Author's Response: Death Eaters. Because her Mum was holding meetings against Voldemort, and being very opinionated about it all, so he sent the Death Eaters over. Glad you're enjoying it, though.

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 11/28/07 14:58
Chapter: The Annexe

so sad... but i loved it!! your really good at describing dramatic things, and emotions. i've read other fics where the emotions are said, not really described. this isnt like that. it excellent. update soon!!! :D

Author's Response: Wow, thanks. That's really nice of you, especially as I often struggle with the emotions and dramatics ... so thanks. =)

Author's Response: Wow, thanks. That's really nice of you, especially as I often struggle with the emotions and dramatics ... so thanks. =)

Reviewer: Idiot of ravenclaw
Date: 11/25/07 18:14
Chapter: Taffy's

i sorry for taking so long to reviea, sigh, nooooo stupid voly stupid stupid voldy, i mean it is so sad, aawww does she fly to remuses house and then cry into his shoulder?

Author's Response: I guess you'll have to wait and see ... =D Yes. Yes, I am evil.

Reviewer: jmd_1739
Date: 11/20/07 19:50
Chapter: Taffy's

yay! all stories need some misery, or their too floofy. yes floofy. great job, anyway.

Author's Response: Hey, I have no problem with the word "floofy"! =D But I agree. It would be boring with too much ... well ... floof.

Reviewer: moony 4eva
Date: 11/17/07 6:16
Chapter: Taffy's

oh no!! poor marty!!

Author's Response: *sniff* Poor Marty indeed ...

Reviewer: KaileeA42
Date: 11/13/07 20:27
Chapter: Taffy's

OMG! evil cliffie. That was so sad. I reallly like this story, Marty is a very interesting character and she kind of reminds me of Luna. I also love how you write the Marauders. Also, this is just a weird random theory, but is Marty going to end up being Luna's mom.

Author's Response: Um. No, she's not. But she is very similar to Luna, isn't she? But there not related I'm afraid. I'm glad you like her (and the story) because I love writing them!

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 11/13/07 19:18
Chapter: Taffy's

YOU KILLED MARTY'S MOM!??! NO!!!!! er, yeah, lol... but i really like your story, besides that little death scene at the end. i like your characterization of Sirius- how you mentioned what he posts on his walls and how he actually cares about Regulus... cant wait for next chappie!
~Padfoot

Author's Response: *grimace* Sorry about that ... It had to happen, though. I'm glad you like the story and the Marauders ... *loves*

Reviewer: KaileeA42
Date: 11/13/07 19:18
Chapter: Taffy's

OMG! evil cliffie. That was so sad. I reallly like this story, Marty is a very interesting character and she kind of reminds me of Luna. I also love how you write the Marauders. Also, this is just a weird random theory, but is Marty going to end up being Luna's mom.

Author's Response: Um. No, she's not. But she is very similar to Luna, isn't she? But there not related I'm afraid. I'm glad you like her (and the story) because I love writing them!

Reviewer: LadyCassandra
Date: 11/13/07 15:34
Chapter: A Victim

great story. great chapter.


Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem
Date: 11/12/07 20:23
Chapter: Taffy's

NOOOOO NOT MARTY'S MUMMMM! aw, so sad. great job.

Author's Response: Thanks. And yes, I'm afraid it is. But she'll be okay! *huggles Marty*

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 11/12/07 14:57
Chapter: Taffy's

oh no... poor Marty!!! i have a question, is Marty Luna's mom? i luv ur story, its very unique. i feel bad for sirius. ur very good at updating on a regular basis, please dont stop now!! :D


Author's Response: No, Marty isn't Luna's Mum, although I can see why you might think that. But she's not, they're just similar in personality. Glad you like the story, I'll update as regularly as I can!

Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 11/12/07 5:08
Chapter: Taffy's

Oh my Godric.

You've rendered me speechless (something that is practically impossible to do!)

Oh, look, there I go again. You can't keep me silent for long!

Merlin, what on earth am I rambling on about? I'm tired. Give me some credit. I'll start reviewing now.

My favourite part of this chapter was the Sirius bit, becuase you showed really well how hard it must have been for him to leave. Most fics you just see him all happy, but I liked the way you made him care about his family. Especially Regulus. After all, he wasn't bad in the end, was he? :]

I loved the leafy water bit. My thoughts on tea exactly. I can't stand the stuff!

Oh no, here I go rambling again. This was a rather weird review, hey? I was up for twenty eight hours straight on the weekend, though. Great chapter, anyhow.

Jennifer

Author's Response: =D Sometimes, the weird reviews are the best. Love that you love the Sirius bit, and the tea bit (I'm with James on that one, too). Twenty-eight hours? Maybe you should get some rest ...

Reviewer: x_lily_evans_x
Date: 11/12/07 4:29
Chapter: Taffy's

OMG. I can't believe Marty's mum's dead! OMG. I'm still in shock. Poor, poor Marty. I wonder what's she going to do now? Hopefully something that'll draw her and Remus closer. :D Hmm, the shock must have worn off. Hehh. Anyway, excellent story, you brilliantly described the Sirius-running-away-from-home part, so kudos to you. I can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm pretty sure Sirius would have felt SOMETHING for his little brother, at one point, even though it wasn't much. And hopefully your wish will come true ...

Reviewer: noname227
Date: 11/11/07 23:38
Chapter: Taffy's

cheer up, cheer up, it's a wonderful day.....
did it work?


Author's Response: Uh ... not really, it would take a lot more than that to cheer up MY horrendous day. You know, you really shouldn't leave spam reviews, the mods really don't like it, and I wouldn't want to get you into trouble.

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 11/11/07 19:03
Chapter: The Bullies

Argh! RL still has me absolutely swamped. And band season's over! *sigh* And apparently I missed the obscure Ravenclaw reference. Whew, I must be out of it!

No interview today? Not that the beginning wasn't insightful and all, but I really like those interviews. I don't know, I guess you didn't want to fall into a pattern, or something.

That little thing between Remus and Marty in the beginning is so cute! Sorry I can't provide an excerpt (it would be of Remus asking, "Are you flirting with me?"), but my mouse isn't working (I'm navigating the internet with only the keyboard). But that part was really cute. :D

Marty helped Remus, and he did nothing in return except make her life even more miserable. At first glance one might say that Remus would have defended her, but one must remember that he loved his friends. And he was afraid of losing them again. So, I congratulate you on thinking through that, when others might have not.

Gay Points?...*laughs* Teenage boys are hilarious! I'm glad I'm friends with so many. :D And James' pastry fetish is so hilarious. And the way he acts with Dooky just proves how out of it they were.

I love this chapter. There's was Marty/Remus interaction, teenage girl angst, teenage boy angst, teenage boys fun... and it was all perfectly balanced for my favorite chapter. Awesome job! I just wish I knew what that Ravenclaw reference was...:D I'm sure you'll tell me. *hopeful grin* Best wishes!

Author's Response: Obscure Ravenclaw reference = the Turnip. When Marty picks up a load of objects to drop, thus grabbing his attention, one of them is a turnip. I'm glad you understood Remus's reasons for not sticking up for Marty - you're right, I did think them through a lot. I'm really glad you understood. Thanks for the fantastic review, I'm glad you liked the chapter!

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