Reviews For The Cause
Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 05/04/08 7:02
Chapter: The Plight of the Pixie


Author's Response: Yay! See, I told you good things would come of it. *Raves*

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 05/04/08 5:37
Chapter: Hide-And-Seek

Aw wow!
I loved the letters!=]

Author's Response: Yay! I loved writing them! Especially James's, but then, I love James.

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 05/04/08 5:28
Chapter: The Annexe

I wish Remus had accepted help from his friends. =/
Great fic!=]

Author's Response: I know, but he was scared for his parents. Don't worry, though, soon things will get back to their nice, funny self! Hooray!

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 05/04/08 5:23
Chapter: Taffy's

This was amazingly written!

Ohh, poor Marty though!=[

Author's Response: I know! *sobs*. But it's very important to the plot, and it is through this that lots of good things happen. Marty's pretty strong, after all. =D

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 05/04/08 5:06
Chapter: The Bullies

this was great!

Though slightly less funny than the other chapters. XDXD
Poor Marty..=[

Author's Response: Well, I did warn you ... but I'm glad you liked it anyway, despite the lack of funny. Poor Marty indeed ...

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 05/04/08 4:55
Chapter: A Victim

I'm finding it fine, in fact, VERYYY funny!=]

Sorry, you seemed a bit bemused by how funny I found this...
Marty seems a bit like Luna! =D
Oh, and, also, on the last line it should be 'new' not 'knew' I think. XD

Author's Response: =D Maybe a little. But not in a bad way, and I hope I keep it up! You're right about the mistake, it's fixed now - I can't believe I never noticed it before!

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 05/04/08 3:27
Chapter: Trendsetters

Hmm, I don't know if I have submitted a review before, but, honestly, this story is *THE* funniest story- ever!

Author's Response: Yes, you did. =D I hope you keep reading, there are still plenty more chapters to go!

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 05/03/08 15:53
Chapter: Trendsetters


I loved the last bit!

Ohh, this fic is so funny!=]

Author's Response: Wow, thanks, I'm really glad you seem to be enjoying it! And it's not even in Humour ... still, thanks so much, I hope you keep reading! It's not all hilarious, though, but I do try to put in as much funny stuff as possible anyway. And with Marauders, that's just so easy!

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 05/03/08 15:44
Chapter: The Plight of the Pixie


I was laughing my head off!=] This is the first truly funny fic I have found!
Wow! I love it!

Author's Response: Really? The first? Well, there are loads more fics out there which are probably funnier than this, but thanks anyway, I'm really glad you're enjoying it! =D It's always a pleasure to make people laugh.

Reviewer: real_life
Date: 04/29/08 13:49
Chapter: The Trust Test

Yay! he told her.

Now, stop being so smug and tell us what happends.

Author's Response: Sorry, I guess you'll have to wait a little longer ...*is smug*. The next chapter is already in queue though, so hopefully you won't have to wait TOO long ...

Reviewer: moony 4eva
Date: 04/28/08 14:01
Chapter: The Trust Test

Ooohh... You are so evil!!! :D Can't wait to find out Marty's reaction!!! THe suspense is killing me!

Author's Response: =D Sorry about that. The next chapter's in the queue, but I get the feeling you might have to be a while ... sorry! I'm glad you're enjoying it anyway, sorry about being so evil ...

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem
Date: 04/25/08 21:42
Chapter: The Trust Test

Oh, I hope you will update as soon as humanly possible!

Author's Response: It's already in the queue, so don't worry! Now we just need patience. =)

Reviewer: x_lily_evans_x
Date: 04/22/08 7:28
Chapter: The Trust Test

Well, I wish you'd tell us the truth! It's just cruel to leave us hanging. Verily cruel.

Okay, that said, I think this story just keeps getting better and better. I think that the way you've developed all of their characters is simply amazing, and I love how far their relationship has come. I think it's really so sweet and kind of amusing of Marty to get to worried for Remus, especially ironically so because he was the werewolf. Please update soon!

-Mavis (:

Author's Response: I'm sorry. I am. I'm just an all round horrible person, really, but I'm trying to update as fast as I can, don't worry, but I think there are some troubles still with the queue. But thanks for your kind words, really, I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Marty IS sweet and kind of amusing ... it's just her general Marty-ness, really, isn't it? =D

Reviewer: Idiot of ravenclaw
Date: 04/21/08 21:40
Chapter: The Trust Test

you take like a month for an update, and then when u get it in you just have to give it a cliffie, i mean thats just cruel!!! update oh it is still good hehe James potter has two kids harry and the little first year (who's name i forget)

Author's Response: Luanne! I'm really sorry about taking so long, but the queues were SORT of closed, and then they were really long when they did open (and apparently still are, so don't hold your breath). Leaving it on a cliffie was an accident ... I write far faster than it's possible to update, so it was just coincidence that this chapter was put up after such a long break. But I'll definitely keep them coming as fast as possible (which may end up being very very slow).

Reviewer: shewolf2000
Date: 04/19/08 17:34
Chapter: The Trust Test

Damned cliffies! You had better update soon. Great chapter by the way. The Marauder Bonanza Extravaganza! - James really is a dandelion. :) Please update soon!!!!!!

Author's Response: Isn't he? *Loves James* I'll try and update as soon as I can, I promise!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 04/18/08 14:39
Chapter: The Trust Test

You evil evil author!

I loved this chapter so much. James "daughter" was hilarious. I laughed out loud at that. The chapter wasn't very eventful in my opinion, but very funny, and it had this suspense building up that I like.

Please, please, please update soon!
Keep writing! Awesome story!


Author's Response: No, it wasn't very eventful, I'll admit, but never mind, because I'm sure next time that lots will happen and it will all be lovely. This isn't the last you'll see of James's "daughter", I promise. I'll update as soon as I can!

Reviewer: rjlcool
Date: 04/18/08 12:36
Chapter: The Trust Test

AAAARRRGGGHHH!!!!!!!! >:-/ a CLIFFHANGER??!! oh man...! i was really ecstatic to find out what would happen... :( please, PLEASE update AS FAST AS YOU CAN...:(( im begging you on bended knees! I really cant WAIT see what will happen next... thank you thank you for writing another beatufil chapter!:) keep it up!!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much ... I'll definitely update as soon as I can, so you're all right to stand up before you do any damage to your knees ... you may have to wait a LITTLE bit longer, but won't that just make it sweeter? =D

Reviewer: Gin_Wazlib
Date: 04/18/08 10:55
Chapter: The Trust Test

Ah! I was so excited when I got the email that you updated! I love this story! But boo to the cliff hangers! I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Sorry about those ... But I'll try and update as soon as I can! Thanks for waiting!

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 04/18/08 10:09
Chapter: The Trust Test

*gasp* Bad cliffie, brilliant chapter. James and Sirius getting yelled at was hilarious!

Author's Response: Hee hee. I think they just needed a firm hand ... =D Thanks for reviewing! Yay! it's finally up! *dances* Sorry about the cliffie ...

Reviewer: moony 4eva
Date: 04/16/08 13:33
Chapter: Hapless Slytherins

Great chappie! I really love the way you switch between Marty and Remus and give their points of view on different parts of the story! Marty has been through a lot of trauma and tradgedy, facing very real terrors! Well done! You are a very brave author! She's grown alot since Chapter 1, you obviously put an awful lot of thought into each chapter. Congratulations on writing the train scene! All that politics would have killed me if I tried to write that!! Will Marty find out about Remus' problem??? Can't wait to find out!! BRILLIANT STORY, by the way!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! You know, Marty's growth wasn't necessarily planned, it just sort of happened as I went along, which was interesting. And I was worried the politics went on a bit too long, but it all came so naturally that I couldn't figure out which bit to get rid of! I guess I just spend way too much time in the company of teenage girls. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story, and thank you for reviewing. Hopefully the next chapter will be accepted soon!

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