Reviews For The Cause
Reviewer: shewolf2000
Date: 06/08/08 8:47
Chapter: Very Bohemian

“Secrets, Lies and Deceit: The True Story of Four Hypocritical and Scum-filled Tyrants, and How Their Black Hearts of Evil Lead Eventually to Their Celebrated and Timely Demise”
But Lily, how do you really really feel about the Marauders? :)

I can see why you enjoyed writing this chapter. I love musicals, and I would be cringing at how badly the Marauders could botch one, if I weren't too busy rolling on the floor laughing. James has totally lost it, btw.

I'm kind of also falling in love with Luanne. I think my favorite line of hers this chapter was, “I’d say she’s come to her senses. I only talk to you because I don’t want to be sent to my room.” Teeheehee, the Marauders need a little sass.

Anyway, great chapter! Update soon, I really love this story!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad! I totally love musicals. If life was one long musical (wait, it ISN'T?) then I would be happy all of the time. It would never lose its novelty. I also love James. He's completely adorable. And, yes, also a little weird ... *jumps on James*

Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93
Date: 06/08/08 8:30
Chapter: The Plight of the Pixie

ROFL!!!! funniest fic i have ever read!!! I am reading it while sitting with my laptop in bed and I have literally had to stuff my fist in my mouth so that i don't wake my parents, I'm laughing that hard!! awsum work!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it! I love making people laugh. =D

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 05/27/08 15:43
Chapter: Paginate

Poor Marty.
Stupid boys.
I ship Remus/Marty1!! :)

Author's Response: Stupid boys indeed. Me too! =D Thanks for reviewing, glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: quoth_the_raven
Date: 05/24/08 14:59
Chapter: Paginate

Poor marauders. Lily is being an idiot. "men are evil" Oh yeah right. But Marty will forgive them! Honestly, I was laughing as I read “I vote Marty gets off the pedestal balancing on her high horse, which is galloping across her moral high ground"
But anyways, great story! Really enjoying it.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad! I'll try to update soon, I hope.

Reviewer: Chomione
Date: 05/24/08 5:13
Chapter: Paginate

It's me reviweing for the first time since...well in a while.
Haha, I love brawls! And all the expression descriptions at the start!
Chomione :D

Author's Response: Yeah, it HAS been a while ... and shut up about that stupid corsage. =D

Reviewer: Tariel
Date: 05/23/08 21:26
Chapter: Paginate

What happens next?

Author's Response: I guess you'll have to wait and see ... right?

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 05/21/08 17:23
Chapter: Paginate

Oops, sorry! It cut off the rest of the review! *grumbles* Here it is...

Sirius was quite the pighead in this chapter. It's quite a feat to insult Marty, Remus, James, and Peter all in a couple paragraphs! Lily slightly annoyed me with her drop-the-Marauders-and-be-my-friend thing, but it'll probably clear up.

I totally agree with your end note. The whole chapter was brilliant (I know 'gak' makes it sound otherwise, but I truly enjoyed it), and I hope I can soon read chapter fourteen!

Author's Response: Well ... yeah. Everyone was pretty ... um. Special. In this chapter. Lily and Sirius particularly. Although I honestly didn't take the *gak* to be a bad thing. *gak* can mean many, many things. I hope you get to read then next chapter soon, too, because it's a lot of fun, and definitely my favourite!

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 05/21/08 15:59
Chapter: Paginate


Author's Response: I'm not sure what that means, but I'm going to take it as a good thing. =D

Reviewer: Gin_Wazlib
Date: 05/21/08 10:09
Chapter: Paginate

Say yes, Remus ... yes ... yes ... “No.”
That was wonderful! Is it wrong that I kind of wanted them to get a few more punches in? I was so surprised Sirius was so vicious! But it makes for a good story.

Oh, and I hate it when girls act like girls! Haha! Ignoring the boys is going to be hard. I wonder if Marty will realise that she misses Remus more than the others?

Please update soon!

Author's Response: At the minute, the thought of Remus being more special than the others hasn't occured, but you never know, do you? I think, living in the family he does, Sirius has a very vicious streak, no matter how hard he tries to get away from it. But he's like a naughty puppy, and he will always come back sorry. Even if he never HAS felt truly guilty until now. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: shewolf2000
Date: 05/21/08 9:09
Chapter: Paginate

But, Lily, how do you really feel about the Marauders? :)

I loved this chapter! Marty is just so...Marty. I love her. And, do you know, some of your Marty writing, especially the paginate part, kind of reminds me of Lemony Snicket. I don't know if you consider that a compliment or not, but it is meant as a compliment because I think Lemony Snicket is hilarious, and you are too. And so are teenage boys, *pets Marauders as well* That is, when they are not being complete morons. Or tosspots. :)

Update soon!

Author's Response: =D I love that word. I've never read Lemony Snicket, but I'll take it as a compliment anyway, because he had a book series published that was made into a film so how could that possibly be a bad reflection on me. Hooray! I love Marty too. I'll be sad when this fic's done. Thanks for reviewing! *Wanders off in search of more teenage boys to pet*

Reviewer: x_lily_evans_x
Date: 05/21/08 4:31
Chapter: Paginate

Well, I loved this chapter! As usual, I think you've got everyone in character, and I like how it's Marty who actually makes Sirius feel really guilty. The things about Lily not feeling very comfortable with the other girls seems little sudden to me, though. But otherwise I thoroughly enjoyed reading the new chapters as always.

-Mavis (:

Author's Response: Well, Lily never truly fit in with them because of that Snape guy (sorry, I mean, Severus) and now he's gone, she's been with the other girls more, but it's not the same. Let's be honest, the other Dorm girls are perfectly nice, but not particularly interesting. So Lily would fit in, but not as naturally as she does with Marty. Also, it probably DOES seem sudden because we haven't really seen much of her until now, apart from the occaisional scene. Anyway, I'm just making excuses, sorry. Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyefd the chapter!

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem
Date: 05/20/08 22:28
Chapter: Paginate

Oh, I wish Marty just went back to them. Good chapter, a little bland, but still entertaining. (:

Author's Response: Well, I know this one isn't the best, but the next is definitely my favourite, so hopefully it will be worth it. Thanks for reviewing anyway!

Reviewer: quoth_the_raven
Date: 05/20/08 16:49
Chapter: Asparagus

Marty you rock! I love how she reacted to remus being a werewolf, she was awesome! And ANOTHER cliffhanger? Lily's totally gonna blow up, I know it. But evil cliffhangers aside, this story is awesome!

Author's Response: Yeah ... sorry about those. But it's much easier to end a chapter on a cliffhanger than some kind of poignant and meaningful message, believe me. Hopefully you'll find out Lily's reaction pretty soon!

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem
Date: 05/18/08 11:27
Chapter: Asparagus

Very informative, I loved Marty's reaction to Remus' secret. I also liked the Lily/Marty friendship starting. Very good foundation work for more chapters.

Author's Response: Phew, I thought the review button had broken! I'm glad you enjoyed it, hopefully the next one will be up soon.

Reviewer: carolina_blackk
Date: 05/14/08 16:26
Chapter: Asparagus

Another amazing chapter, as always. =]
Is there going to be a Marty/Remus romance in the future?

Author's Response: =D We'll see, won't we? *Is vague and obscure*

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 05/13/08 15:51
Chapter: Asparagus

Yaay, lovely chapter! Marty handled it quite well, but I figured she would. I had to reread the end of chapter 11, and then I was like, Duh! He tells her he's a werewolf! *shakes head at looniness*

I'm anxious to read the next chapter! This is one of my favorite Marauder stories, if not my favorite.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! =D The next chapter is already in the queue, hopefully it will be updated soon. It's a shame all the long waits had to happen right as I had a big cliffie, but I hope it was worth it anyway! There was never really any question in my mind about whether or not Marty would take it well (after all, if anyone's a sucker for a sob story, it's her) but why not make a cliffie out of it anyway? Fingers crossed the next will be up soon!

Reviewer: moony 4eva
Date: 05/13/08 14:03
Chapter: Asparagus

ooohh...! Love this chapter! i always thought that marty would accept remus for what he was. it would be really cool if marty became minister for magic! she would get the wizarding world up and running in no time! uunlucky that she runns into the marauders threatening snape though, but it'll make a really great next chapter finding out what she says! great job!

Author's Response: To be honest, I love the chapters which follow that little incident. =D Of course Marty would accept Remus, she's far too nice not to - like she said, it never occured to her not to. And I agree. Marty for Minister is a campagin that really IS worthy of some attention!

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 05/04/08 7:33
Chapter: The Trust Test


GRR! I Hate Cliffhangers!

I can't wait for the next bit!

And I love the "Lu Lu" Bit. XD

Author's Response: =D It's not the last you'll see of Luanne, either. The next chapter is already in the queue, it's just a case of waiting for the chapter to be accepted by the mods - hopefully soon!

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 05/04/08 7:26
Chapter: Hapless Slytherins

Yaaay! She has more friends, doesn't she?=D

Author's Response: She's certainly becoming more of a social butterfly, that's for sure. *sniggers at phrase "socal butterfly"*

Reviewer: Winnyy
Date: 05/04/08 7:14
Chapter: The King of Diamonds

I'm so happy for Marty!
A month around the Marauders!=D
I hope they stay her friends at school!

Author's Response: Hmm, let's hope so. Okay, I already know what will happen. But still. Hooray!

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
Tom Riddle and the Cave of Living Waters by alittletiefling 6th-7th Years
What would happen if Tom Marvolo Riddle had been adopted by well-meaning squibs?...
Molly Weasley's Apple Dumplings by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
Molly has studied history and knows the old stories, but she also knows what...
Early, Early Spring: Professor Sinistra Reflects by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
I didn't know much about Professor Sinistra, the Astronomy Professor, until...
It Takes Two to Tango by lucca4 3rd-5th Years
They cannot keep doing this; it is only a matter of whose resolve will break...
In The Heat Of The Morning by welshdevondragon 3rd-5th Years
Summary: In the heat of the morning, Katie and Leanne lie in the grounds...
Can't Fight the Moonlight by Acacia Carter 6th-7th Years
A life-changing disaster at work drives Neville Longbottom to seek aid from...
The History Teacher by iLuna17 6th-7th Years
Maybe he didn’t just love history, maybe he loved being a history teacher.
white on white by Padfoot11333 6th-7th Years
Three vignettes about scars, love, and sex.