Reviewer: KASK
Date: 09/09/07 18:09
Chapter: Myrtle's a Mess

"Go away, you sick, perverted ghost.”

LOL!

This was really funny. There were a few problems. James didn't have green eyes. Harry said Albus was the only one with them. And Hugo was younger than James, not at school when James was in his third year. He was Lily's age.

Other than that, it was very cute and funny. Hehe. Some of the things made me laugh out loud.


Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out :] I was really fuzzy on the ages, the epilogue was quite confusing for me. But thanks! And I'm glad you liked it :D

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 09/09/07 17:44
Chapter: Myrtle's a Mess

hhaha! Myrtle is crazy! Greatness!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much :D

Reviewer: SilverLily_13
Date: 09/09/07 17:24
Chapter: Myrtle's a Mess

This is really good, but I don't think James had green eyes. The book said "Alone of Harry's three children, Albus had inherited Lily's eyes." You may want to fix that, but otherwise I think it's very funny, in a wierd-ish sort of way.

Author's Response: Yeah, I was kinda confused on that too - I didn't have my book on the time and I'd only read the epilogue once, the night it came out. I wrote this about a week ago and I don't really have the best memory - but thanks for pointing that out! And thanks for reading and reviewing :]

Reviewer: Indigoenigma
Date: 09/09/07 16:26
Chapter: Myrtle's a Mess

Ha! That was great! I absolutely adore good fics with Myrtle in them. (Actually, I have one myself - Miss Myrtle - in the humor section)

/shameless self-promotion.

Anyways, I think that you had an excellent characterization of Myrtle. She seemed just as self-centered and dramatic as she always is. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! :] I'm really glad you liked it; I didn't know how people would react really. haha I'll check out your story! i love Myrtle fics too :D And thanks, once again

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