Reviews For Heaven Forbid
Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 09/23/07 18:41
Chapter: Heaven Forbid

aw! Nikki this is awesome! i loved it! you are extremly talented young lady!

Author's Response: Thanks! *blushes*

Reviewer: Gin_PotterGirl
Date: 09/17/07 19:20
Chapter: Heaven Forbid

Sis! Again! Cool story, dude. Just a few suggestions:

Well, I'd like you to take a look at the garden and tell me what you think. Lavender said she loved it, but I'd like another opinion. And after that, you tidy your room, one more time. Go on,."

The last two words bother me. :) Why is there a comma, and then a period? I think it should be just a comma.

she'd rather he marry Hermione

That doesn't really make sense either. Oh well!

Oh yeah, by the way, would you like to do a joint-songfic with me whenever your not busy?

~ Leia

Author's Response: Dangit!! *runs off to go edit that* Thanks, sis! I'm a little bit busy, but I'll tell you once I'm ready!

Reviewer: bling_baby
Date: 09/15/07 23:40
Chapter: Heaven Forbid

that was such a cute story! From Ginny giving her wedding dress to 'Harry' leading Ginny to Neville! There were some punctuation errors but apart from that I truely enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thanks, Kathleen!

Reviewer: iheartharry55
Date: 09/09/07 16:25
Chapter: Heaven Forbid

I had always thought, that should Harry die in DH, Ginny should end up with Neville... it only seemed right. So that being said, I loved this!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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