Reviewer: Theloonyhermione
Date: 07/08/12 0:04
Chapter: Chapter:Hermione’s Dilemma

Awww, so cute! I love the relationship between Hermione and Harry, and I also love even more the relationship between Hermione and Ron. One mistake I found:
In this section, '“I know Harry.” She smiled slightly and blinked rapidly to chase away the tears that threatened to escape.' I think that there should be a comma between 'know' and 'Harry'.

Reviewer: dungbombs
Date: 08/20/11 8:03
Chapter: Chapter:Hermione’s Dilemma

Very welll-written. Ron's jealousy is hilarious

Reviewer: shaggy_muggle
Date: 09/05/07 20:36
Chapter: Chapter:Hermione’s Dilemma

very good. it was quite moving, but i laughed, too. yes, ron really is an idiot, but thats what makes him such a likeable character, i suppose.

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 09/05/07 19:05
Chapter: Chapter:Hermione’s Dilemma

Great fic! I couldn't help but to laugh and smile the whole way through. ~MJ

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 09/05/07 18:04
Chapter: Chapter:Hermione’s Dilemma

*sniff* good story! i loved the last line. sigh, so true!!

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