1st chapter is confusing
Author's Response: Thank you for the review x
What a cliffhanger! And Lily being in Hufflepuff? Oh Merlin.
Author's Response: Thank you for the three reviews that you've sent, and I'm glad that you enjoy the twist and turns that have occured so far! Keep reviewing when I get more stuff out, I really appreciate it! x x x
A dementor attack? Oh dear, poor James. I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
Oh dear! I am intrigued. What is this all about?
GOD!!!! i need to know what happens!!!! im dying to know!!
Author's Response: Thank, you, for the enthusiasm! The next chapter shall be up as soon as possible. x x x
Wow, this was entrancing. It was so intriguing and I can't wait to see what happens next and what James has to do with it all. Great Work. Hope to see the next chapter soon. *off to add to my favs*
Author's Response: The next chapter is in the que!
hey, u've got the suspense growing on my nerves!!! Brilliant writing! Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 1 will be here as soon as possible!
??? lol good but im a little confused
Author's Response: It'll all become clearer later on, I promised.
hey, dying for the actual story! when are we going to get it?!
Author's Response: I have written the next couple of chapters already. I'm just posting to my Beta and then it will be in the que
That was really good, Kathleen! I loved all of the mystery. My absolute only nitpicks were small puntuation mistakes, and sometimes I would've liked some descriptions after the dialogue. But, this fic was still really really good! Congratulations on your first fic!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I really appreciate the support! And hopefully writing this will help my with any errors I have in the future. =)
wait, what about james?
it's good though, dont get me wrong, very suspenseful.
Author's Response: I understand you thoughts =P. James will be coming in the next chapter!