Reviewer: PolkaDotted
Date: 09/12/07 19:53
Chapter: In Which A First Year Is Lost, An Argument Ensues And A Bet Is Made

Love! :]

Author's Response: Thanks! xx

Reviewer: worse_than_death
Date: 09/12/07 19:03
Chapter: In Which A First Year Is Lost, An Argument Ensues And A Bet Is Made

HURRY UP WITH THE REST!

Author's Response: Lol, it's coming I promise! xx

Reviewer: Aura_light
Date: 09/12/07 10:38
Chapter: In Which A First Year Is Lost, An Argument Ensues And A Bet Is Made

more, more more!!!

Author's Response: Lol, coming up! xx

Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 09/11/07 17:47
Chapter: In Which A First Year Is Lost, An Argument Ensues And A Bet Is Made

hahaha amazing i seriously loved it please update soon i cant wait to see where you take this amazing story! i seriously admire you and your talent! great job looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for such a lovely review! I'll update soon - next chapters nearly ready for submitting to the queue. Thanks, and glad yo enjoyed it! xx

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 09/11/07 17:23
Chapter: In Which A First Year Is Lost, An Argument Ensues And A Bet Is Made

Interesting start... I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! It'll be along soon xx

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 09/11/07 7:23
Chapter: In Which A First Year Is Lost, An Argument Ensues And A Bet Is Made

HA ha! Ickle Jamsie is in for it now isn't he? lol. This is starting off really well. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm so glad you liked it xx

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 09/10/07 21:19
Chapter: In Which A First Year Is Lost, An Argument Ensues And A Bet Is Made

I really like this chapter, very funny!!!!!!!! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Next chapter's just about to go into the queue!

Reviewer: emerald_dolphin
Date: 09/10/07 19:44
Chapter: In Which A First Year Is Lost, An Argument Ensues And A Bet Is Made

ooooh! this is great! i love it, i love it, i love it! such a good idea...update soon!

Author's Response: Hehe, I'm glad you love it. Next update will be along soon! xx

Reviewer: koolio_jollymints
Date: 09/10/07 19:27
Chapter: In Which A First Year Is Lost, An Argument Ensues And A Bet Is Made

Ahhhh! I love this! This is such a good idea! Please update as soon as you possibly can!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to - thanks for your review! xx

Reviewer: koolio_jollymints
Date: 09/10/07 19:27
Chapter: In Which A First Year Is Lost, An Argument Ensues And A Bet Is Made

Ahhhh! I love this! This is such a good idea! Please update as soon as you possibly can!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to - thanks for your review! xx

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 09/10/07 18:51
Chapter: In Which A First Year Is Lost, An Argument Ensues And A Bet Is Made

ooo great start! the whole bet thing is a really clever idea! i like how you r developing the characters its coming along really well! i cant wait for the next chapter update soon!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! Next chapter is just about to be submitted to the queue xx

Reviewer: devil_duckling
Date: 09/10/07 18:42
Chapter: In Which A First Year Is Lost, An Argument Ensues And A Bet Is Made

Nice, very interesting. I like how you characterized Lily, but I think you DEFINETLY need to let some of the air out of James' head. He's not a very likeable character right now.
Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Lol, thanks. To be fair, I don't think James was a very likeable character until he bucked up his act later. I'm writing it more from Lily's perspective so he would seem more obnoxious than is perhaps fair. Thanks very much for reviewing and I hope you continued reading! xx

Reviewer: silleri
Date: 09/10/07 18:13
Chapter: In Which A First Year Is Lost, An Argument Ensues And A Bet Is Made

pertty good in fact it's great this could turn into a really helarious and i'm in need of a laugh ^-^

Author's Response: I'm glad you found it funny! Thanks for your review xx

Reviewer: beautyfades
Date: 09/10/07 17:18
Chapter: In Which A First Year Is Lost, An Argument Ensues And A Bet Is Made

Cute first chapter. This looks like it shall be an interesting story. How many chapters are you planning on having? Shall it be a long or short story?

Loved the descriptions and how you've already made Lily and James not get along but not HATE eachother so that will make it easier for you and not seem so unrashional for us, when you get James and Lily to start getting along better. -wink, wink-

This was truly enjoyable. Update soon and I hope you get many more reviews.

* Beauty Fades

Author's Response: Thanks very much. I'm only planning on about 8 or 9 chapters, so a pretty short story. I'm not a great romanticist so it's only a bit of fun for me really, and I don't expect it to be my best story. I think the plot is going to be fun to play with though, so I hope to write pretty quickly. Thanks very much for your review! xx

Reviewer: Lady Tol
Date: 09/10/07 16:03
Chapter: In Which A First Year Is Lost, An Argument Ensues And A Bet Is Made

I really like this story so far, keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks, I will! Glad you liked it xx

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