Reviewer: MaybeOneRaindrop
Date: 01/06/12 7:34
Chapter: In Which the Marauders Spring a Trap, and Lily Becomes Ensnared

hehehe. The marauders certainly are wicked aren't they! haha great story!

Reviewer: harry potter lovee
Date: 12/12/10 18:09
Chapter: In Which the Marauders Spring a Trap, and Lily Becomes Ensnared

this sounds very exciting and im interested to c the outcome! please keep writing!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 12/24/09 17:36
Chapter: In Which the Marauders Spring a Trap, and Lily Becomes Ensnared

This is so good!! You should definitely update soon! Your story is so different from everyone elses, and I really wanna know where you are going to take this!

Reviewer: FlicketyG
Date: 12/21/09 4:28
Chapter: In Which the Marauders Spring a Trap, and Lily Becomes Ensnared

lololololol, tis vair vair funny!!
please update soonysoon!!!
xxx

Reviewer: magic42
Date: 05/16/09 21:57
Chapter: In Which the Marauders Spring a Trap, and Lily Becomes Ensnared

grr i wish the whole thing was up :)
it's sooo good!
how long will it be?
when will chapter 4 be up?
keep writing!!! =]

Reviewer: ct143
Date: 04/26/09 9:33
Chapter: In Which the Marauders Spring a Trap, and Lily Becomes Ensnared

this is awesome! when are you going to write chapter 4???!!!

Reviewer: meldina
Date: 03/16/09 19:40
Chapter: In Which the Marauders Spring a Trap, and Lily Becomes Ensnared

post post post

Reviewer: TonksLupin999
Date: 03/07/09 22:17
Chapter: In Which the Marauders Spring a Trap, and Lily Becomes Ensnared

Please keep writing, this is really good!

Reviewer: Jolia Potter907
Date: 02/03/09 19:17
Chapter: In Which the Marauders Spring a Trap, and Lily Becomes Ensnared

two words. WRITE MORE!!!1

Author's Response: I'm trying!! Thanks

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 01/20/09 13:51
Chapter: In Which the Marauders Spring a Trap, and Lily Becomes Ensnared

thst's such a cool story! c'mon! keep on writing!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 01/09/09 10:51
Chapter: In Which Disagreements Are Had, Shouting Occurs, And Conditions Are (Finally) Set

Oh My! This is fun. What an original idea. I love your characterisation of all the Marauders and Lily. Something you've managed to convey is that they both have to be right, don't they? No wonder they're so well suited.

Minor nit pick at the end of Chapter 2 The marauders looked at each other.. You need to capitalise Marauders.

The other thing I like is how the Marauders are all urging him not to be so stupid - ha ha. Remus, obviously has the right plan, but James is so pig headed. Update soon, this is so much fun! Carole xxx

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, Carole! I'm so glad you're enjoying it, and even better that you reviewed - makes my day! Thanks for the nitpick - I can never remember whether Mauraders is supposed to be capitalised or not, and obviously it is, so thanks! Hope you carry on reading! xx

Reviewer: siilly_bookworm_28
Date: 01/08/09 22:47
Chapter: In Which the Marauders Spring a Trap, and Lily Becomes Ensnared

Please update very extremely soon!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I will. x

Reviewer: PeaceLovePotter
Date: 09/08/08 14:59
Chapter: In Which Disagreements Are Had, Shouting Occurs, And Conditions Are (Finally) Set

That was really good, I wish you would continue...

Author's Response: Thanks! I plan to now, after having had far too long a break!

Reviewer: LilyPotter65
Date: 07/03/08 14:17
Chapter: In Which Disagreements Are Had, Shouting Occurs, And Conditions Are (Finally) Set

Hey! Who told you to stop writing, huh? Who? WHO?! Exactly. Which is why you are going to keep writing this story before I threaten to never read the story again, even when it's updated.

Author's Response: Lol, okay, okay, I'm carrying on writing... Glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: Magical Messrs
Date: 01/28/08 15:58
Chapter: In Which Disagreements Are Had, Shouting Occurs, And Conditions Are (Finally) Set

that story was wicked awesome! PLEASE write more! i need more! i absolutely, without a doubt loved it! it was brilliant bloody brilliant! i could go on forever....

Author's Response: Lol, thanks very much. I plan to write more, keep checking back!

Reviewer: ginnyrox_26
Date: 01/04/08 4:57
Chapter: In Which Disagreements Are Had, Shouting Occurs, And Conditions Are (Finally) Set

Hi. I just read one of your stories a highly combustible situation. I can't beleive that at the end of the 2nd chpt, it cuts right off! Please finish the story, so I can find out what happens next! Forever waiting - ginnyrox_26

Author's Response: I will, lol, sorry it's taken me so long to update the next chapter. I'm planning on writing more regularly from now on!

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 11/25/07 20:43
Chapter: In Which Disagreements Are Had, Shouting Occurs, And Conditions Are (Finally) Set

Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to find out what happens and you have a cliffie here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:( Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I will. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

Reviewer: pinkandgreenqt
Date: 11/17/07 9:23
Chapter: In Which Disagreements Are Had, Shouting Occurs, And Conditions Are (Finally) Set

Awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks. Coming soon!

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 11/16/07 21:59
Chapter: In Which Disagreements Are Had, Shouting Occurs, And Conditions Are (Finally) Set

PPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEE update!!!!!!!!! I am dying not knowing!!!!!!!!!!:(

Author's Response: Hehe, wouldn't want you to go and die now. Next chapter will be coming soon, I promise.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 11/13/07 16:20
Chapter: In Which Disagreements Are Had, Shouting Occurs, And Conditions Are (Finally) Set

This website is driving me mad, every time i click on a story and get into it, the chapters run out. This was excellent! Hope to read the next bit soon. Wonder if another marauder will walk invisible next to James and help him, or Peter could transform into a rat, hide in James' pocket and through a prearranged number of squeeks give him directions. Whatever you have in mind i can't wait.

Author's Response: Hehe, those are some pretty good idea! You'll just have to wat to find out. Glad you're enjoying it!

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