WOW THAT WAS SPECTACULAR I LOVED IT! GOOD JOB! IT WAS JUST UNDESCRIBABLE! LOOKIN AND HOPIN FOR MORE!!
Aww, poor Severus. I really enjoyed this, and I'm not even that much of a fan of Severus/Lily. It was so short, yet you packed so much raw emotion into it. Great job.
This was beautiful. Fantastic writing. I loved how you put it from Snape's eyes, it was very effective.
wow rely sweet story...............
Awww...sweet. Poor Snivlley.
Oh my god. that was amazing!! Keep writing i could like feel how snape was as soon as he saw lily and james and harry!
Oh, sad, really sad, but I love Lily and James and I want them to be together - but Severus is so amazing too! Conflicting feelings here, honestly! Wonderful job, really well put-together!
Brilliant!I love that song, and the story and connection to the song is great!I really love it!
I really liked this story. It made me feel pity for Snape, but I really love the James/Lily pairing.
I enjoyed this story. I think you explored the characters nicely, and you softened Sir Snape without making him mushy. Nice.
I personaly liked this fic a lot. I thought the argument between Lily and Snape was well done.
Okay, I've never really liked James Blunt's You're Beautiful, but I must say this fic is really good and I think you did the Lily-Snape confrontation rather well. Excellent!
That was really sweet but also creepy at the same time. GREAT JOB
*sniff* good story!!!
Um. . . Okay. Is this it, or is there more to come?
I am *CRYING* that takes a good story.
U made snape perectly! it was great. By the way, is this before or after the prophacy?
Author's Response: I think it could be either, I don't snape realized the prophacy meant harry when he told voldemort. I like to think of it as before.