Reviews For With You
Reviewer: HogwartsGirly124
Date: 09/15/07 20:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

WOW THAT WAS SPECTACULAR I LOVED IT! GOOD JOB! IT WAS JUST UNDESCRIBABLE! LOOKIN AND HOPIN FOR MORE!!

SOPHIA

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 09/15/07 12:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww, poor Severus. I really enjoyed this, and I'm not even that much of a fan of Severus/Lily. It was so short, yet you packed so much raw emotion into it. Great job.

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 09/15/07 11:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was beautiful. Fantastic writing. I loved how you put it from Snape's eyes, it was very effective.

Reviewer: marauderine
Date: 09/15/07 10:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow rely sweet story...............

Reviewer: worse_than_death
Date: 09/15/07 9:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awww...sweet. Poor Snivlley.

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 09/15/07 8:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh my god. that was amazing!! Keep writing i could like feel how snape was as soon as he saw lily and james and harry!

Reviewer: FullofLife
Date: 09/15/07 7:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, sad, really sad, but I love Lily and James and I want them to be together - but Severus is so amazing too! Conflicting feelings here, honestly! Wonderful job, really well put-together!

Reviewer: loveismagicharry
Date: 09/15/07 6:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

Brilliant!I love that song, and the story and connection to the song is great!I really love it!

Reviewer: NikaDawson
Date: 09/15/07 4:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really liked this story. It made me feel pity for Snape, but I really love the James/Lily pairing.

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 09/14/07 22:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this story. I think you explored the characters nicely, and you softened Sir Snape without making him mushy. Nice.

Reviewer: lillylover77
Date: 09/14/07 22:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

I personaly liked this fic a lot. I thought the argument between Lily and Snape was well done.

Reviewer: x_lily_evans_x
Date: 09/14/07 21:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

Okay, I've never really liked James Blunt's You're Beautiful, but I must say this fic is really good and I think you did the Lily-Snape confrontation rather well. Excellent!

Reviewer: Potter89130
Date: 09/14/07 20:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was really sweet but also creepy at the same time. GREAT JOB

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 09/14/07 19:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

*sniff* good story!!!

Reviewer: WolfeMoone
Date: 09/14/07 19:38
Chapter: Chapter 1

Um. . . Okay. Is this it, or is there more to come?

Reviewer: ynnig
Date: 09/14/07 19:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

I am *CRYING* that takes a good story.

Reviewer: lilyevans489
Date: 09/14/07 18:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

U made snape perectly! it was great. By the way, is this before or after the prophacy?

Author's Response: I think it could be either, I don't snape realized the prophacy meant harry when he told voldemort. I like to think of it as before.

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