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Name: HogwartsGirly124 (Signed) · Date: 09/15/07 20:29 · For: Chapter 1


Name: Hermione_Rocks (Signed) · Date: 09/15/07 12:30 · For: Chapter 1
Aww, poor Severus. I really enjoyed this, and I'm not even that much of a fan of Severus/Lily. It was so short, yet you packed so much raw emotion into it. Great job.

Name: hpfreak101 (Signed) · Date: 09/15/07 11:07 · For: Chapter 1
This was beautiful. Fantastic writing. I loved how you put it from Snape's eyes, it was very effective.

Name: marauderine (Signed) · Date: 09/15/07 10:58 · For: Chapter 1
wow rely sweet story...............

Name: worse_than_death (Signed) · Date: 09/15/07 9:33 · For: Chapter 1
Awww...sweet. Poor Snivlley.

Name: REMi iS AWESOME (Signed) · Date: 09/15/07 8:33 · For: Chapter 1
Oh my god. that was amazing!! Keep writing i could like feel how snape was as soon as he saw lily and james and harry!

Name: FullofLife (Signed) · Date: 09/15/07 7:44 · For: Chapter 1
Oh, sad, really sad, but I love Lily and James and I want them to be together - but Severus is so amazing too! Conflicting feelings here, honestly! Wonderful job, really well put-together!

Name: loveismagicharry (Signed) · Date: 09/15/07 6:28 · For: Chapter 1
Brilliant!I love that song, and the story and connection to the song is great!I really love it!

Name: NikaDawson (Signed) · Date: 09/15/07 4:11 · For: Chapter 1
I really liked this story. It made me feel pity for Snape, but I really love the James/Lily pairing.

Name: Wicked Wench (Signed) · Date: 09/14/07 22:23 · For: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this story. I think you explored the characters nicely, and you softened Sir Snape without making him mushy. Nice.

Name: lillylover77 (Signed) · Date: 09/14/07 22:11 · For: Chapter 1
I personaly liked this fic a lot. I thought the argument between Lily and Snape was well done.

Name: x_lily_evans_x (Signed) · Date: 09/14/07 21:32 · For: Chapter 1
Okay, I've never really liked James Blunt's You're Beautiful, but I must say this fic is really good and I think you did the Lily-Snape confrontation rather well. Excellent!

Name: Potter89130 (Signed) · Date: 09/14/07 20:01 · For: Chapter 1
That was really sweet but also creepy at the same time. GREAT JOB

Name: JustLikeHermione77 (Signed) · Date: 09/14/07 19:51 · For: Chapter 1
*sniff* good story!!!

Name: WolfeMoone (Signed) · Date: 09/14/07 19:38 · For: Chapter 1
Um. . . Okay. Is this it, or is there more to come?

Name: ynnig (Signed) · Date: 09/14/07 19:35 · For: Chapter 1
I am *CRYING* that takes a good story.

Name: lilyevans489 (Signed) · Date: 09/14/07 18:56 · For: Chapter 1
U made snape perectly! it was great. By the way, is this before or after the prophacy?

Author's Response: I think it could be either, I don't snape realized the prophacy meant harry when he told voldemort. I like to think of it as before.

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