Reviews For With You
Reviewer: you_know_who_m
Date: 06/18/09 9:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow... "e+" exceeds plus! great job!

Reviewer: Roonil_Wazlib125
Date: 06/14/09 19:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

That. Was. By. Far. One. Of. The. Most. Beautiful. Pieces. I. Have. Ever. Read!

Quick tip though: try to lengthen out the confrontation of Lily and Snape a bit. I thought it was a tad abrupt, but that's just me. Keep writing! :)

Reviewer: Susan2100
Date: 03/29/09 16:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

The most beautiful and sad love story EVER...

Reviewer: ZippyWeasley
Date: 11/02/08 16:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

AWWWW! I love fluff, and this is so fluffy! I'm sorry if it wasn't meant to be like that, but AWWW! It is SO sweet!

Reviewer: lilys fairy
Date: 02/09/08 20:38
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was awesome!

Reviewer: colour_queen
Date: 12/17/07 19:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awww... I still don't feel any pitty for Snape. I think nothing could change my mind...

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 11/08/07 18:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awww...this was so sweet, and so sad. I love the idea of Severus/Lily, that love really can go miles beyond hatred. This was very nicely written and the characters were sweetly portrayed. Very nice job, my fellow Puff! Good luck in future writings too!
Mia

Reviewer: hermybabay82
Date: 10/10/07 3:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

Absolutely gourgeous!!

Reviewer: mrsJP4ever
Date: 10/06/07 21:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

awwwwwwwww that was soooooo sad! :.( im practically crying!! I actually feel bad for Snape! (doesnt mean i think he should have gotten lily but still!)

Reviewer: Prongsies_Girl_93
Date: 09/27/07 23:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

That is so SAD!! *bawling* Great job!

Reviewer: Wicked_Quill
Date: 09/27/07 7:38
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. this is amazing I can see it like it is an actual scene or a memory from snape. Keep it up!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 09/19/07 10:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

Sorry, I meant in you. I'm having a stuped day.=Sammy

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 09/19/07 10:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was a very sweet fic in a sad kind of way. It was good but I think I found a mistake.

“I don’t think I can see the good you anymore.”

Shouldn't it be

“I don’t think I can see the good you in anymore.”

Anyway, good job.=Sammy



Author's Response: Your right! Thanks for telling me. *runs off to fix terrible grammer*

Reviewer: KJRowling
Date: 09/18/07 14:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awww, nice fic! I like the fact that you have done it from Sanpe's POV, it makes it different and gives an interesting spin on it. It also worked well with the song (I usually don't like song fics) and you tied it in nicely with the writing.

I can't really critizise anything...

Great fic!

Reviewer: KJRowling
Date: 09/18/07 14:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awww, nice fic! I like the fact that you have done it from Sanpe's POV, it makes it different and gives an interesting spin on it. It also worked well with the song (I usually don't like song fics) and you tied it in nicely with the writing.

I can't really critizise anything...

Great fic!

Reviewer: Lilys Passion
Date: 09/16/07 11:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

I actually feel bad for Snape!!!! You've managed to make me feel bad for Severus Snap! You are skilled at this...

~Lilys Passion

Reviewer: lily16
Date: 09/16/07 10:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was really good. i loved the end when james comes home and snape watches through the window.

He should hate it: it was Potter’s flesh and blood. But his eyes were bright green and curious. Lily’s eyes.

That was my favorite par. you're the first author that made me see how wrong james/lily seemed through snape's eyes.

one thing that seemed kinda wierd was that snape even got in thier home. even if it was before the prophacy, i think there'd be some spells protecting the house. both lily and james were in the order, so they'ed be targets.

but i still loved this story! i'm gonna read another one of yours right now. (:

Reviewer: Marauder Wannabe
Date: 09/16/07 8:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is a lovely story. So sad, as well; there were tears in my eyes when I finished reading. But don't take that in a bad way; it's a good sign. Any story that makes me so sad is absolutely amazing.
In three words...I loved it.

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 09/16/07 2:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow that was really good but I really can't see Lily letting a known Death Eater in her house, ex-best friends or not, especially with her baby. But all in all, that was super and the song fit in perfectly with the story!

Reviewer: silleri
Date: 09/16/07 2:27
Chapter: Chapter 1

different but it's bit too stalkerry for but it's good and i will read your other work or is this your first one

Author's Response: yes, this is my first fic

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