Reviews For Unrequited
Reviewer: Hogwarts Alumni
Date: 10/21/07 0:07
Chapter: Falling

oh, poor Sirius! And James is soo stupid and callous! Sirius needs a girl, quick, give 'im somebody he'll like for a little while. its so sad to see him taking one for James like this without even saying anything about it!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Hogwarts Alumni
Date: 10/21/07 0:06
Chapter: Jealousy

ok, not feeling too bad for Sirius now, but keep up the good work!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Hogwarts Alumni
Date: 10/21/07 0:06
Chapter: Jealousy

ok, not feeling too bad for Sirius now, but keep up the good work!!!

Author's Response: You don't feel ad for Sirius? I think I do. And I will!

Reviewer: Hogwarts Alumni
Date: 10/21/07 0:00
Chapter: Falling

oh, poor Sirius! And James is soo stupid and callous! Sirius needs a girl, quick, give 'im somebody he'll like for a little while. its so sad to see him taking one for James like this without even saying anything about it!!

Author's Response: Sirius has a girl! Well, okay, no he doesn't, but he doesn't want anyone else. As for James, I always have seen him as pretty oblivious.

Reviewer: Hogwarts Alumni
Date: 10/20/07 23:51
Chapter: Prologue

omg! this seems taboo!! Sirius and Lily?!?! SERIOUSLY?!?! however, i am curiously intrigued, and cannot wait for the next chapter. (which i am going to read now)

Author's Response: Yeah, it's Sirius/Lily. I know, it's a little weird, but who's to say it couldn't happen?

Reviewer: cyt_potter
Date: 10/20/07 19:20
Chapter: Jealousy

Oh good job I like this new twist to the James and Lily story! Sirius so has it bad! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Apparently everyone seems to be in love with Lily, so why not Sirius? Yeah, Sirius is in a pretty bad place, but it'll get better for him... eventually...

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 10/19/07 15:40
Chapter: Jealousy

thats a really nice change! i mean, i have never read lily and sirius although i have read rosmerta and sirius. good work!

Author's Response: I'm guessing that the Rosemetra/Sirius fic that you read was Semi-Charmed Life? I don't think I have ever read a Marauder Era fic that wasn't Kerichi's... Anyway, I'm glad you like this! And update should be soon!

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 10/18/07 22:50
Chapter: Jealousy

This starts off well, and I really like Sirius telling his story. First person can be tricky to write sometimes, but you are doing it very well.

I was no worse than Snape than I ever had been before, and even Moony didn’t notice any difference. This is a little off, I think you might have meant to say, “I was no worse to Snape than I ever had been before, and even Moony didn’t notice any difference.”

I really like how he starts to notice her presence before James does. That in itself shows how much he cares for her. You are doing a great job setting up his anger at Snape. Giving him plenty of reasons to point to and say, that is why I hate him. Or that is why I tried to kill him.

The taunting was perfectly executed my dear. You did excellent on the tone and the sneering directed at Snape this time, and I say bravo.

The reaction from James, and the nonchalance from Sirius, was so spot on, that I just have to end this review with telling you… UPDATE SOON!!!! I have to know where you are taking it. And just how in Merlin’s name are you going to get Sirius out of this jam. Excellent work, and I look forward to more.


Author's Response: I fixed the error—thanks! As for updating, the third chapter is already in queue, so the wait won't be long. And, really, thanks for your help, not just your review!!

Reviewer: Love_is_4ever
Date: 10/18/07 18:41
Chapter: Falling

Ahh... This story just keeps getting better and better!!! You're doing a great job, and you're even updating soon, wish I just love!!!

Yay!!! =) 10/10

~ Samarie

Author's Response: I can't stop writing this story! That's why it's being updated so quickly! ^_^ Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 10/04/07 13:37
Chapter: Falling

Awww...I hate seeing Sirius hate James...so sad. But I like this. You described it vey well. The timing, the conversations. All very good. Lol, after going on your duelling thread I remembered I'd read this. I didn't even know it was yours...

Author's Response: lol, I'm glad my dueling thread made you come back! ^_^ And I'm glad you like this, even though Sirius *is* in a pretty bad predicament.

Reviewer: Hermionespinksweater
Date: 10/03/07 19:34
Chapter: Falling

Very excellent Al-Dee. Bravo. I'm quite intriuged ^_^ Keep it coming and yah know hint hint if you want to send it to me early you can hint hint. I

Author's Response: Al-Dee?!? I'll never forgive you for calling me that! But *I guess* thanks for your review! ^_~

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 10/01/07 18:58
Chapter: Falling

Oh my word, you have the two of them exchanging confidences, and Sirius promising not to tell James? Absolutely freaking brilliant!
I have to say, being the go-between for two people whom you really like has to be a tough spot to be in. I know Sirius is James’ best friend, and now he likes Lily himself, but having to step aside, even if it is just in your own mind and heart has to be so hard. The extremes he has pushed himself to just to get James off his back were perfectly done. I am enjoying this story so much, I cannot wait to see where all of this leads. I am wondering if you are going to skew off into the world of AU, and let Sirius get the girl, that would be great, but then again I have a tender spot in my heart for the J/L ship. I hope the next chapter comes soon, I want to finish, and I can’t do that until you update some more. Lol.


Author's Response: If only I could tell you the ending! ^_~ I must admit that since I started writing this fic, I've developed a huge love for the Lily/Sirius ship. Thank you so much for your review!!!

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 10/01/07 18:45
Chapter: Prologue

I finally got here to read and review. You have no idea how much I have read and reviewed today… Anyway on to your chapter, or rather Prologue.
So far, so good. I would have to say Sirius is pretty believable, as he really would be good at masking his real feelings behind a fake smile or evil expression. James and Sirius fighting while not wrong, wasn’t exactly what I was expecting. When I started to read that part, I was actually expecting either wild insults, or maybe even a little shoving each other off the seats. I guess that would be a cliché since everyone else does that too.
Peter just irks me, so I was glad to see him quiet and not trying to wheedle a truce. I am looking forward to the next chapter so I am heading there now…


Author's Response: Like I said in my Author's Note, I'm SO ridiculously unfamiliar with the Marauder Era clichés and such. This is all how I interpret the characters. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: hannahabbot2007
Date: 09/30/07 3:29
Chapter: Falling

SO Sirius likes Lily? This should be interesting!
~ Hannah Abbott

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: hannahabbot2007
Date: 09/30/07 3:24
Chapter: Prologue

Pretty good, but I want to know who he will fall in love with!
~ Hannah Abbott

Author's Response: You'll find you! ^_~

Author's Response: Wow, I think I meant to say "out". Sorry about that one.

Reviewer: mugglechicka5565
Date: 09/28/07 16:54
Chapter: Falling

i hope that you update soon. this seems like it will be a very interesting story and i would very much like to read more

Author's Response: Thanks!! Chapter 2 is with my beta!

Reviewer: Love_is_4ever
Date: 09/21/07 11:04
Chapter: Prologue

Great job with this fic! It only has the prologue, and it still was good enough for me to like and wait for the rest to be posted, and I must say that that's a first since I usually read fics that are completed or have a fair amount of chapters...

Someone around here (in one of the previous reviews) that Sirius secret love was Lily, is it? I missed it completely! I have absolutely no idea who it really is, and it has me intrigued! Great job!!!


~ Samarie

Author's Response: Well, if it has you intrigued, perhaps I shouldn't tell you! ^_~ But no, if you go back and reread it there are some serious hints Sirius is in love with! I hope you keep reading and reviewing! Thanks!!

Reviewer: Soap
Date: 09/15/07 8:54
Chapter: Prologue

I like it so far! I'm always a sucker for Sirius-secretly-loves-Lily stories, and there aren't enough of them out there.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope you'll read more! ^_^

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 09/13/07 19:48
Chapter: Prologue

Well, no this isn't cliche. You hardly ever see James and Sirius fighting over simple things, but change is good. I look forward to later updates. ;-)

Author's Response: Thanks! An update should be pretty soon!

Reviewer: Hermionespinksweater
Date: 09/13/07 14:52
Chapter: Prologue

Hohoho... intrigue! I am like so gonna keep reading this one. Teehee Teehee. Sorry, for reviewing you. Teehee. Your'e hopes were probably like totally so high that it would be a good one. LIKE YOUR FIC!

Author's Response: Gee thanks Cecilia (my best friend for all of you who care!)... Oi, with the poodles already...

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