Please Please hury up with this story its been like forever and u havent posted a new chpter!!! Come come now
I love it! I really like how Lily isn't the boldest of her friends. I don't know why though! Also, (please excuse my memory which is having a colossal blank) is Snape Lily's friend in this story? Again, I am having a massive blank right now. Plus it's been awhile since I read the first chapter and am feeling lazy.
Author's Response: I know that Lily is constantly portrayed as the strongest of her friends, and though I want her to be strong in this story, I wished to add something new by Dorcas being a tad more.... forceful than Lily. Oh, and, no, Snape is not one of Lily's friends in this story, up to this point.
by the way, i wanted to say that i like your penname: the REAL weasley twins! this matches the story!
that was soo fun! cant wait for more!
oh and 'hi!' by the way!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm hoping that all my readers are having fun experiencing this with Lily. :) Chapter Four in quene, and I'm hoping for a validation really soon!rnrnAnd hello to you to!
i like this story! this is going to be fun seeing Lily go out with James for revenge... i really look forward to some fun! this sound a really good story and i will be sticking to it!
You got the characters personalites quite good. I'm looking forward to reading more
i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!-OMG YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS SO GD
Author's Response: Thanks a million! I'll try to post a new chapter up soon!
horrifying first sentence. YUCK!
Cute chapter, keep it up.
heheheheh Yayy update
nice chapter i wonder whats going to happen
poor jams he kept choking on his breakfast thats no fun
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, dear, James.... dear, dear, James :)
Nice story, so far. I will keep checking back to see how it goes.
I like this, especially the portrait, very inventive! Update soon!
hahahah operation april fools
i cant wait till you post the next chapter
Pretty OK but I still want more!
Author's Response: New chapter just came up! Hopefully another chapter can be submitted after the quene problems are solved. Thanks for waiting!
This seems interesting so far. I'm intrigued about what's going to happen. If Lily will actually dump James and break his heart, or if she won't. Hope for the next chapter soon.
Author's Response: We're glad you're intriguied :)
ooh, hurry up w/ chapter two... i want to know what happens!
Author's Response: I'll try to update quickly :)
This is really good! Update soon!
Author's Response: I'll do my best to update soon!
Wonderful start. I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Excellent! I'm glad you're going to continue reading.
O.A.F.! Ha! It's genius!
Author's Response: :-)
This is really good. I love it! =D
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you continue reading!