I think that you made Marlene a little bit too .... helpful with the OAF thing. Like suddenly fully supporting the scheme in an instant is a little bit too abstract. Its the only part of the fic that's annoying me.
omg, loved it!!!
cant possible wait for the next chapter!!
cupcakes,
Lilia ~*~
that was the best chapter yet! lily sitting on james was soo funny!!
i dont think it was james that made the birds attack lily. i'm afraid it might be dorcas.
pleese continue :P
Author's Response: Don't worry, I don't plan on stopping this fic. :)
eeee thats excting great chapter i have a feeling that dorcas was behidn the birds ... cant wait to see how their date goes :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!
Was Dorcas the one who set the birds on Lily? She seems really set on revenge and I just don't think James is capable of setting a bunch of birds on the girl he loves. Anyway loved your chapter. Update soon!
Author's Response: A great question and comment. Unfortunately, I think we're all going to have to wait and see!
update, quick fast and in a hurry please!
P.S. i hope you dont get offended, but i STRONGLY STRONGLY DISLIKE DORCAS. partially because i can sense what a sneaky pushy poopyface she is and partially because i just finished a Shakespeare camp and one of our teachers names was Dorcas. And i strongly disliked her. The name brings back irritating memories. anyway, update please! good job!
Author's Response: That made me laugh so hard. I would never get offended if a reader did not like my characters! Of course it's your opinion. To be honest, it's hard to imagine anyone liking Dorcas... and I know exactly what you mean with the whole name thing. Some names are just tainted in my mind from past experiences.
You have the most original ideas! This was a really good chapter, I can't wait to see what James has in store for poor, unsuspecting Lily! This should be good! Update quickly, please! {BeccA}
Author's Response: You are so sweet to say that! I'll try my hardest to update quickly. (I won't promise anything though :-P)
What IS Dorcas' motivation for crushing James?
Author's Response: Great question! But no worries, that question will be answered. :)
Ahh! I am hooked on this story. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Nice chapter; it all flows really well.
*gasp* This is an amazing story! I can't wait for chapter 5. That Decoras seems mighty pushy- I think she either hates James or is jealous of Lily.
This was awesome! I loved how it cut from the Heads room to Lily in bed to James in the boys dorm without saying what happened until later. Really good idea, though! I can't wait for chapter 5! This is sooo going on my favorites! {BeccA}
Great job, guys! This has got to be the most original J/L story I have ever read! Although, I do feel a bit bad for James. He deserves it, but still... oh well. Keep up the good work (this is my 200th review... kool!) {BeccA}
Ohhh. Good chapter! I love how the girls were trying to get Lily to wear makeup and everything, it's pretty funny. Great job! {BeccA}
thats great! i think i revieweded already but jsut to be safe--CONTINUE!!!!!! please!!!!!!!!
kk,
me
Eep...this is awesome! Dorcas is insane...I'm guessing it was her who set the birds on Lily? Aww, poor James...can't wait for the next chapter!
