Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 12/24/13 0:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

At one point not too long ago I realized there were a few stories of yours that I haven't read yet. I loved that Remus had to get past both Ted and Andromeda to get to Dora. Very romantic story.

Reviewer: chooky
Date: 08/25/08 22:00
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh my godlove it

Reviewer: hermionero94cks
Date: 07/14/08 15:31
Chapter: Chapter 1

good, kind of sad

Reviewer: HermionePotter
Date: 12/13/07 10:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is very good!! I haven't really had a chance to read some of your newer stuff, and I honestly can't remember if I've already read this or not. I loved this, i thought it was great! I really love your writing, and I hope you keep writing in the future. ~Zimmy

Reviewer: shewolf2000
Date: 10/30/07 21:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

I loved it!

Reviewer: tonkzie
Date: 10/26/07 9:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow, i loved it but i didn't get something. did he make and unbreakable vow or something else. great story

Reviewer: raquel
Date: 10/15/07 12:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

I thought that they wee marride already? Cool story

Reviewer: Moonyschick25
Date: 09/08/07 20:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great story! Are you writing more?

Reviewer: AurorInTraining
Date: 09/04/07 17:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

What an ingenious title and story! I loved how it related to the bible, but you gave another interpretation of it! I only wish it would have been longer. But please don't wait long to write. I'm writing my own story, right now, about Ron and Hermione. I would love for you to read the story when it's finished. The prologue is being looked at currently. Excellent Job!

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 09/04/07 2:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love the quote! Three is such a mystic number... :) I like how you gave Andromeda her "Black" side...

Reviewer: sinbad
Date: 09/04/07 0:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

What a touching story. I think many fanfiction authors are doing better than J.K.R.

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 09/03/07 17:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was really good! Everything was very realistic. The part with Ted punching Remus in the face particularly was realistic. And here's my favorite quote:
‘If all you want is a shag, just say so,’ she said, her hair going from its soft brown to an angry tomato red, her voice tight with some emotion so painful she could barely speak. ‘I’m not wearing any knickers. You can be in and out in three minutes, if you concentrate.’
That made me laugh and almost cry at the same time. It was funny, but it was very serious too. Very very good job! :D

Reviewer: RemusLapin
Date: 09/03/07 7:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was well written. Good job.

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