oh my godlove it
good, kind of sad
This is very good!! I haven't really had a chance to read some of your newer stuff, and I honestly can't remember if I've already read this or not. I loved this, i thought it was great! I really love your writing, and I hope you keep writing in the future. ~Zimmy
I loved it!
wow, i loved it but i didn't get something. did he make and unbreakable vow or something else. great story
I thought that they wee marride already? Cool story
Great story! Are you writing more?
What an ingenious title and story! I loved how it related to the bible, but you gave another interpretation of it! I only wish it would have been longer. But please don't wait long to write. I'm writing my own story, right now, about Ron and Hermione. I would love for you to read the story when it's finished. The prologue is being looked at currently. Excellent Job!
I love the quote! Three is such a mystic number... :) I like how you gave Andromeda her "Black" side...
What a touching story. I think many fanfiction authors are doing better than J.K.R.
That was really good! Everything was very realistic. The part with Ted punching Remus in the face particularly was realistic. And here's my favorite quote:
If all you want is a shag, just say so, she said, her hair going from its soft brown to an angry tomato red, her voice tight with some emotion so painful she could barely speak. Im not wearing any knickers. You can be in and out in three minutes, if you concentrate.
That made me laugh and almost cry at the same time. It was funny, but it was very serious too. Very very good job! :D
That was well written. Good job.