Reviews For Echoes
Reviewer: yorocketgirl
Date: 09/11/07 18:31
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is awesome! I love everything you write, friend, but I was completely blown away by this one. The descriptions were so vivid, and yet it wasn't a copy cat version of that chapter in DH. They keep within the story and characters from the series, and yet you manage to make them completely your own. Major props to you and keep up the good work!

~Yorocketgirl

P.S. If you can't figure out who this is for some reason, lets just say that I know you through Jenny and my initials are EEF.

Author's Response: Yeah, I knew it was you!! Thanks so much for the support; I'm especially proud of this story. When are you going to submit something?

Reviewer: SJZuhlsdorf
Date: 09/04/07 23:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aw poor Sev.

Great story. I really enjoyed reading it =]

Author's Response: Glad you have sympathy for Severus! Even though he's a slimy git and I really don't like him, you have to pity him and I'm glad you could see that.

Reviewer: beautyfades
Date: 09/04/07 21:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. That was very deep and very sad. You did a good job of showing how their relationship crumbled slowly by slowly, by switching between past tense where time would fly by and then the present, showing what part we were up to.

Enjoyed it very much and I hope you get more reviews. As a fellow writer, I know how important those are. Lol.

*Beauty Fades

Author's Response: Thanks. I thought about all the switching and explaining really carefully. I wanted to provide a lot of detail, and really freeze the moments of their friendship, but I wanted to explain how and why it happened, and I'm glad you thought it worked.

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