great story!! i like how remus and sirius are in it too.
aaww!! sirius is so sweet! and james and lily are just so perfect! good chapter!!
lol!! this is going to be an interesting story... good chapter by the way!!
Aww! You should sooooo write more! We (A&H) both love J&L stories! We are currently working on one, but we both get so caught up in reading other peoples (like your's) that we spend all of our time doing that insted! Eventuly we'll have it out though, and we both hope that we can do as well as you, or other authors, have done on theirs.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have another J&L story out (and it's still being written as well) called "Must Be". I hope your story does well, I'll certainly read it when it comes out!
haha its so cute :)
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i loved this story. i really liked the whole compairing sirius to the devil.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
i loved this story. i really liked the whole compairing sirius to the devil.
nice work - it got a bit confusing in parts, you might need to try and lengthen some of the scenes a bit to give us a clearer idea of the who, what , where , how and why but it was still good fun & you pulled it together at the end nicely.
Author's Response: Thanks so much...that's probably the most helpful review I've ever gotten (I need more like these! ha ha...)
this is really one of my favorite lily/james stories! I love it so much.
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much...I'm blushing...
Love the ending Snape tho, probably wouldn't do a unforgivable curse on james tho, bit ooc, but i still liked the story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review....Snape probably wouldn't use an unforgivable, you're right, but he really did _hate_ James, so you never know (and it fit nicely, ha ha).
Awwwwh, This is such a cute story.
I love how in the end part Lily slaps Snape and then kisses James, its such a contrast in character and i love it !
Author's Response: Ha ha, thanks!
Nice and cute.
Author's Response: Cute is what we aim for (ha ha, just kidding...if you got it in the first place xD). Thanks!
nice finish.
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good story
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that was so cute. i really liked how they came together good ending.
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Awww! So cute, I like it!
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Excellent!Really good ending too!I really enjoyed this story, keep on writing!
Author's Response: Thanks...I'm starting a new J/L fic...
Aw I would hate to have someone read my diary! The stuff in there is private... and is intended to stay private. *rolls eyes at Sirius* (he isn't the most skilled socially... )
Author's Response: Ha ha, he could probably use a few lessons...
It's a really good story, so please update soon. I can't wait to read.
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 3 is in the queue.
