Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 02/08/08 6:53
Chapter: Memories

That was a rather angsty chapter, but I loved it! Agnst = good! (my spelling of angst = baaaadddd...)

Author's Response: It won't be the last angsty chapter I'm afraid.

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 02/04/08 18:50
Chapter: An Impossible Reality

*sniff* that's so depressing!! poor mai!!

Author's Response: I cried writing that chapter... I'm such a HP nerd. xD

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 02/04/08 18:49
Chapter: Congratulations

good story!!

Author's Response: Thanks. -^_^-

Reviewer: violetta
Date: 12/27/07 16:33
Chapter: Mistake

Hmm... Nice Save. So glad she isn't going to be with George. For now...But still. Poor George. Mai should have let him down slowly. But as always...excellent writing.

Author's Response: *nods* Thank you.

Reviewer: gingercat
Date: 12/16/07 11:07
Chapter: Mistake

I just hate it that JKR killed Fred. The Twins are Wonderful. Poor George and of course Mai. I just can't believe Molly doesn't know about Mai....after all the time they were together.....why did Fred keep it a secret? Is that part of the story line? Lovely but sad....I hope George will find happiness and Mai too. Molly should know about the baby.....a pare of Fred. Goodness......rambling, Looking forward to updates.

Author's Response: I love the twins. Mai being kept a secret will be explained later. How much later though, I can't exactly say. I'm having major issues with the current chapter.

Author's Response: Chapter eight's been submitted now. Sorry it took so long. :/

Reviewer: Oni among dementors
Date: 12/04/07 0:29
Chapter: Potterwatch

I'm enjoying the quality of your writing. The story seems to be developing nicely and the characters are kept to cannon very well. My only problem Mai is seeming very Mary-Sue-ish to me. Hopefully this will be fixed in future chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks Nat ;P I do plan to fix that in future chapters though.

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 12/03/07 16:08
Chapter: Mistake

NO! GOT BACK TO GEORGE!!!! they DO need to get together. Fred would have wanted it. For his brother and hi girlfriend to be happy. Even if it was with each other.

Author's Response: Honestly, do you think it's realistic for Mai to accept that idea right now? I think she needs some space for now, don't you? ;)

Reviewer: violetta
Date: 12/01/07 17:37
Chapter: For Mai Love

Oh my gosh! I knew this was coming! But, oh, that is just so far out and twisted...yet I am dying to know more. This would be a lot easier to stand if you weren't such a good writer!

Author's Response: War is never easy. ;)

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 11/29/07 15:32
Chapter: For Mai Love

Omg I Loved this chapter! That was remarkable! So good! I have tears in my eyes!

Author's Response: Thank you once again. I'm glad you continue to enjoy my story! What did you think of the cliffhanger? Because it may be a while before chapter seven is ready for submission. :/

Reviewer: Cirelondiel
Date: 11/28/07 4:42
Chapter: An Impossible Reality

Oh my! I've just read five chapters in one sitting, and it stops here! I hope the next chappie gets validated soon, because you really have left me wondering. Poor, poor Mai. I'm absolutely intrigued to find out how she deals with this and what happens with the baby. Good job, Allison, for drawing me so much into the characters' lives. I love this fic :-)

~ Chelsea

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I'm rather happy with this chapter's cliffhanger myself. :D This chapter was actually one of the first ones I wrote, since it's so incredibly important.

Reviewer: gingercat
Date: 11/27/07 21:42
Chapter: An Impossible Reality

Such a waiste......Percy should have been killed off.........NOT Fred....I can't forgive JKR for doing that!....Your story is quite good, you had to work with Her crap!

Author's Response: I agree 100%. She should have killed Percy and not Fred. But If she had, I wouldn't have written this. xD And thank you.

Reviewer: gingercat
Date: 11/27/07 21:26
Chapter: Expect the Unexpected

She should NEVER have waited to tell him. What a BAD idea that was!

Author's Response: Indeed. *sigh*

Author's Response: I should make a mental note of that for future reference I think. xD

Reviewer: gingercat
Date: 11/27/07 21:13
Chapter: Congratulations

Goodness...Pregnant....Fred a father. Why hasn't she met Mr. Weasley? That is very strange!

Author's Response: I'll explain that later. ;)

Reviewer: gingercat
Date: 11/27/07 20:49
Chapter: Only A Nightmare

The Twins are just so darn cute. I REALLY hated that JKR killed Fred.....what a shame! I am really injoying this story so far....You never know what the twins will spring on you next!

Author's Response: The twins are cute. And amazing. I have a few more Fred and George stories in my head right now. Hopefully I'll write them out someday. :)

Reviewer: Cirelondiel
Date: 11/27/07 2:44
Chapter: Prologue - Before the War

Ooh, a twins story! Gotta love Fred and George.

This looks promising: your characterisation is just right and there are no spelling or grammar errors (that I spotted, anyway).

Just one question: is Mai pronounced like may or like my?

Anyway, this is a great introduction to what is sure to be a great story! Keep it up :-)

~ Chelsea

Author's Response: Thank you! And Mai pronounced like "my". :)

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 11/26/07 15:21
Chapter: An Impossible Reality

NO! aw its so sad! I've got tears in my eyes!

Author's Response: Unfortunately, that's what I was aiming for. :'(

Reviewer: book babe
Date: 11/26/07 11:41
Chapter: Expect the Unexpected

oh wow
this is so good
but i keep crying because i know freds going to die :(
and she has to tell him

Author's Response: Thanks. I miss Fred... :'(

Reviewer: violetta
Date: 11/20/07 20:22
Chapter: Expect the Unexpected

Oh my goodness! You are a mega talented writer! Please, please, please keep it up! I need to know what happens next!

Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you. I plan to submit the next chapter this weekend when I'll have a chance to make my final edits. :)

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 11/19/07 15:59
Chapter: Expect the Unexpected


Author's Response: Sadly yes, he is going to die. :'( But other than that, I can say nothing without giving things away. ;)

Reviewer: damabeth
Date: 11/16/07 8:19
Chapter: Congratulations

Wonderful story! Thank You! Grandma Beth

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. ;)

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