That was a rather angsty chapter, but I loved it! Agnst = good! (my spelling of angst = baaaadddd...)
Author's Response: It won't be the last angsty chapter I'm afraid.
*sniff* that's so depressing!! poor mai!!
Author's Response: I cried writing that chapter... I'm such a HP nerd. xD
Author's Response: Thanks. -^_^-
Hmm... Nice Save. So glad she isn't going to be with George. For now...But still. Poor George. Mai should have let him down slowly. But as always...excellent writing.
Author's Response: *nods* Thank you.
I just hate it that JKR killed Fred. The Twins are Wonderful. Poor George and of course Mai. I just can't believe Molly doesn't know about Mai....after all the time they were together.....why did Fred keep it a secret? Is that part of the story line? Lovely but sad....I hope George will find happiness and Mai too. Molly should know about the baby.....a pare of Fred. Goodness......rambling, Looking forward to updates.
Author's Response: I love the twins. Mai being kept a secret will be explained later. How much later though, I can't exactly say. I'm having major issues with the current chapter.
Author's Response: Chapter eight's been submitted now. Sorry it took so long. :/
I'm enjoying the quality of your writing. The story seems to be developing nicely and the characters are kept to cannon very well. My only problem Mai is seeming very Mary-Sue-ish to me. Hopefully this will be fixed in future chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks Nat ;P I do plan to fix that in future chapters though.
NO! GOT BACK TO GEORGE!!!! they DO need to get together. Fred would have wanted it. For his brother and hi girlfriend to be happy. Even if it was with each other.
Author's Response: Honestly, do you think it's realistic for Mai to accept that idea right now? I think she needs some space for now, don't you? ;)
Oh my gosh! I knew this was coming! But, oh, that is just so far out and twisted...yet I am dying to know more. This would be a lot easier to stand if you weren't such a good writer!
Author's Response: War is never easy. ;)
Omg I Loved this chapter! That was remarkable! So good! I have tears in my eyes!
Author's Response: Thank you once again. I'm glad you continue to enjoy my story! What did you think of the cliffhanger? Because it may be a while before chapter seven is ready for submission. :/
Oh my! I've just read five chapters in one sitting, and it stops here! I hope the next chappie gets validated soon, because you really have left me wondering. Poor, poor Mai. I'm absolutely intrigued to find out how she deals with this and what happens with the baby. Good job, Allison, for drawing me so much into the characters' lives. I love this fic :-)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I'm rather happy with this chapter's cliffhanger myself. :D This chapter was actually one of the first ones I wrote, since it's so incredibly important.
Such a waiste......Percy should have been killed off.........NOT Fred....I can't forgive JKR for doing that!....Your story is quite good, you had to work with Her crap!
Author's Response: I agree 100%. She should have killed Percy and not Fred. But If she had, I wouldn't have written this. xD And thank you.
She should NEVER have waited to tell him. What a BAD idea that was!
Author's Response: Indeed. *sigh*
Author's Response: I should make a mental note of that for future reference I think. xD
Goodness...Pregnant....Fred a father. Why hasn't she met Mr. Weasley? That is very strange!
Author's Response: I'll explain that later. ;)
The Twins are just so darn cute. I REALLY hated that JKR killed Fred.....what a shame! I am really injoying this story so far....You never know what the twins will spring on you next!
Author's Response: The twins are cute. And amazing. I have a few more Fred and George stories in my head right now. Hopefully I'll write them out someday. :)
Ooh, a twins story! Gotta love Fred and George.
This looks promising: your characterisation is just right and there are no spelling or grammar errors (that I spotted, anyway).
Just one question: is Mai pronounced like may or like my?
Anyway, this is a great introduction to what is sure to be a great story! Keep it up :-)
Author's Response: Thank you! And Mai pronounced like "my". :)
NO! aw its so sad! I've got tears in my eyes!
Author's Response: Unfortunately, that's what I was aiming for. :'(
this is so good
but i keep crying because i know freds going to die :(
and she has to tell him
Author's Response: Thanks. I miss Fred... :'(
Oh my goodness! You are a mega talented writer! Please, please, please keep it up! I need to know what happens next!
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you. I plan to submit the next chapter this weekend when I'll have a chance to make my final edits. :)
NOOO!!! SHES GOT TO TELL HIM!!! HES GONNA DIE!!!!!
Author's Response: Sadly yes, he is going to die. :'( But other than that, I can say nothing without giving things away. ;)
Wonderful story! Thank You! Grandma Beth
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. ;)