that's awesome! great job!
That...was...great! I loved it! Good work!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks. We put in a good two months for this, I think. -Stubby
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Author's Response: Wow... glad you thought it was funny.rnrnTYTYTYTYTTYTYTTYTYTYY>TYTYYTYTYTYTYYTY
wow, random... but very, very nice. :-)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. Random AND nice? That just makes me smile. -Stubby
ohh thats awsome..i love it
Author's Response: :D Thanks. -Stubby
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Author's Response: delete delete ~Lindsay
Author's Response: SPAM SPAM (What, we were all thinking it!) - Katie
Author's Response: True, True~ Lindsay (again again)
Author's Response: Dance, dance! -Stubby
Oh. My. GOSH!!!!!!!!! That was... It had to be.... I mean.... THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sirius, dancing around like that was kind of weird though. McGonagall was still in the room!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm still laughing!!! XD
-Susan
Author's Response: ~And she's traumatized. ;) And getting off subject (no surprise there ;) ) has anyone noticed that McGonagall is never in the Puppet Potter Pals? Yeah, just noticed. ~~So, anyway, thank you for the review! I just love reviews! *winkwink* *hinthint* *shove* ~~~Lindsay
Author's Response: That's a lot of exclamation points. Wow.
Haha!That was so funny!I really liked the part where Sirius shouted that Lily asked James out.The whole hting was really good and funny.
Author's Response: Why, thank you, loveismagicharry!I'm glad that you thought this was funny!Don't forget to check out Harrypotterfangirl2's new story, "Becoming Extraordinary" But make sure to read, "Never Ordinary"!It's awesome and written by our very own Katie *End*! ~Lindsay
Author's Response: Lindsay, I'm not sure if I should be ecstatic or afraid that you like my fics so much! (I think I'll settle for ecstatic.) - Katie
Author's Response: Ooh, yes, Katie IS fantastic! All of her stuff is great- how about 'Going Under' or 'Lord Voldemort and... Book 7?' -Stubby
TOTALLY AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this story especially the flying cow bit! its hillarious and i hope you keep on writing!
Author's Response: Woah, deja vu... ~Lindsay
Author's Response: Double posts. They happen to the best of us. - Katie
Author's Response: *double take*
TOTALLY AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this story especially the flying cow bit! its hillarious and i hope you keep on writing!
Author's Response: Totally. ~Lindsay
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you think we're hilarious, as opposed to insane... :D - Katie
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!!! I love this review, especially the fact that it is nice and actually makes some nuance of sense! -Stubby
"OI! EVERYONE! LILY ASKED OUT JAMES!" Sirius shouted to the entire Common Room.
"BLACK!" Lily shouted. "YOU IDIOT!"
Great job, you guys! I could never write a three word story like this, because mine always go waaaay off the point...in one, my best friend got turned into a lemon poppyseed muffin by filch.
re: the bunnies: will do! :)
Author's Response: Burp! Oops! You mean we weren't supposed to eat that muffin?! Thanks for the review! Say, do you have anymore muffin friends? ~Lindsay
Author's Response: Ooh, I love muffins! Thanks for the muffiny compliments! *is now hungry*
Author's Response: Haha, be glad you didn't read the Great Voldy Wig Scandal.
That was brilliant! A couple (or more) of my favorite lines, and I why I like them:
At that moment, Peter walked in to witness Sirius licking his scratches with his tongue.
I love this line just because of the mental image. I could see Sirius complaining about not being able to taste the hair on his arm in human form. :D
"OI! EVERYONE! LILY ASKED OUT JAMES!" Sirius shouted to the entire Common Room.
"BLACK!" Lily shouted. "YOU IDIOT!"
Sirius definitely has his moments in this story!
He jumped and jiggled, completely naked except for the socks covering up his hairy ankles. Dancing very enthusiastically around, he started singing in a loud voice, a song called Mamma Mia from the musical ABBA. It was horrible.
I'm sure you're all thinking that Sirius is my favorite character by now. Sirius just so happens to be the one to get all the funny moments in this one, while Remus (my favorite character) does not. Anyway, the socks part thrown in really shaped up the mental image (drew my attention away from a specific body part).
Well, if I had to say anything bad (cuz everyone likes critiques) I would say that Lily was a bit OOC, but it is a humor fic, so it doisn't matter terribly. And I promise to save the bunnies! :D Best wishes!
Author's Response: Ooh, thank you! Getting reviews longer than a sentance (although one-liners are still appreciated) really makes us all feel loved. I think everyone loves Sirius. I don't think I've ever met anyone who doesn't. Lily is a smidge OOC, yes. That's what happens quite frequently, sadly. ;) Thanks again!
Author's Response: *snicker* Who was Sirius' FGF?
Wow, we got a review longer than a sentence! I congratulate you on analyzing a fic that I thought was a bucket of nonsense....
-Stubby
WHAT THE HECK????? THAT WAS AWESOME! WHOOOOOOO!
Author's Response: ONE MORE TIME!
Author's Response: OHMUHGODRIC! QUADRUPLE POST! - KATIE
WHAT THE HECK????? THAT WAS AWESOME! WHOOOOOOO!
Author's Response: AND AGAIN!
Author's Response: I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT! PLEASE STOP SHOUTING! - KATIE
WHAT THE HECK????? THAT WAS AWESOME! WHOOOOOOO!
Author's Response: OOH! MODS, I'M SENSING THAT SOMEONE WAS OVEREXCITED AND HIT THE SUBMIT BUTTON A FEW EXTRA TIMES! PLEASE DELETE!
Author's Response: WELL APPARENTLY SOMEONE LIKES THE CAPS LOCK KEY! - KATIE
WHAT THE HECK????? THAT WAS AWESOME! WHOOOOOOO!
Author's Response: THANKS! I LIKE TO SHOUT TOO! SQUEEEE! -STUBBY!
Author's Response: YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: ~LindSaY
That was so wierd...
~Lilys Passion
Author's Response: Yes, and so am I. ~Lindsay
Author's Response: I would agree with the above statements, and reply: I think we're all a little wierd, some more so than others (which would probably be Gryffindor house). -Stubby
Umm. Chaotic.
Author's Response: Umm. Yeah. :D Thanks. -Stubby
Author's Response: Well, I helped. I would be somewhat insulted if it wasn't a bit... chaotic... ~ Lindsay and Remus
Author's Response: Umm. Thank you. We in Gryffindor strive for chaos. - Katie
LOL HAHA THATS HILARIOUS!! I love the fact that u brought mcgonagal into this and irius knows mamma mia..very funny..esp. the house elves painting the common room..haha
Author's Response: Thankees! We wanted it to be hilarious, and believe me: we had loads of fun writing it. We hope it shows, and thanks for reviewing! -Stubby
Author's Response: Actually, the elves were painting the cow! ~Lindsay and Remus
Author's Response: Yups!! Painting teh Flying Cow!!! *ahemcoughFlyingCowmyideacough* :P But yeah!! Like Stubby dear said..We had loads fun writing it...I dunno who came up with painting teh Cow...Genius whoever it was...Anyway Thanks for reviewing!!! ~F&G.
This is for stubby-
The very beginng was a little weird, with James turning into Prongs, and I couldn't really figure out what had happened to who. (whom? ) The part with the cow seemed very odd, like i had missed some connecting piece. But I enjoyed the banter between the maruaders, and this is a good story for so many authors! =D
Author's Response: Thanks, fanofFred. That cleared things up. On our current story, we'll try to make sure the continuity is good and that everything is clear. -Stubby
Author's Response: Yeah... the cow was just something random someone said (I forget who) that we stuck in there. But, Stubby, as for continuity and clearness on our current Volders-wants-a-wig story, I'm not sure that's happening. 'Tis much too random. - Katie (harrypotterfangirl21)
