I wish you'de finish this! It was the first story i read on this sight and I check on it every once in a while to see if it has been updated.... I joined in 2007 and again. FINISH THIS STORY! Please.
ONE OF THE BEST MYSTERIES ON THIS SITE!!!
Oooh, please post the next chapter very, very soon, I can't wait to find out what happens. And just one thing, I'm not sure if this is a mistake or not, but in the article that Hermione was reading in the last chapter, it said that Jonathan and his family went through something in 1984. I think you may have switched the numbers, you might just want to check.
Author's Response: The 1984/1948 thing was done as a cover for the Muggle world- remember Hermione's reading this on the Muggle internet. I'm working on the next few chapters, but it might be July before I get the next one up- the floppy disk that had the next few chapters on it was stolen/lost, and finals are coming for me. Sorry! I'll do my best to make the wait as short as possible.
That's so sad. I'm glad Hermione is on the right track though.
Author's Response: I know it's sad... The whole story's sad, but I love it anyway. I just hope other people do too!
Oh no! Poor little Elizabeth/Anna. I hope Hermione finds out what happens and gets revenge.
Author's Response: ;) Sorry, you'll just have to wait and see!
I love Candyland! I'm so glad you used the old version, I was babysitting this summer and they appparently just came out ith a brand new board that has Princess Icy or something and the Lollipop Girl instead of Princess Lolly, and they didn't even have Plumpy! I was like why on earth did they do that? But now that I've vented about the new game, your story is amazing, I can't wait to read the next chapters.
Author's Response: I love Candyland too- that's one of the reasons I decided to use that instead of another game. They came out with a new version? With different people? How could they?! And thank you!
Oooo I love ghost stories and well written fan fiction. And yours is both!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Awesome story! I am really enjoying reading this. I loved the interaction with Teddy. The image of Ron with the diaper bag and holding Teddy was priceless...and so natural! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
ARGGHHH!!! You giveth and taketh away! Hurry and write please!! I love this story!
Author's Response: Chapter Six will come... All in good time... ;)
TEH BECCA! *tacklehugs*
Yay! Chapter Five is up! The chapter where Hermione gets more information on everything! Chapter Six in my fave, though, even though 'tis the least happiest (is that a word? Ah, well, it is now.) chapter.
But this one's great too! Especially the ending. . . . (CLIFFIE TIME!)
- Teh Katie
Author's Response: Now, now, Katie, teasing the poor little readers who haven't read the next chapter yet is just cruel. (Chapter Six is my favorite too! Me? Taunting? I have no idea what you're talking about. And happiest is a word.) Maybe there'll be a Chapter Six as a present for the readers (and Chapter Seven as a present for Teh Katie...)
Well, I'm wondering if you are start to wrap this up. This chapter was a little breif but still added to the story. I like the fact that Hermione uses "Muggle" technology and yet still uses the Hogwarts library. A little Cameo from McGonagall would have been nice, perhaps she can be in another chapter.
~Kristy
Author's Response: Mwahaha... I'm not wrapping up yet! There's more mystery around the corner. Look what you started, Kristy! I'm not sure about McGonagall- her character has always been beyond me. Maybe I'll try to squeeze her in, though. She is quite awesome. ~Becca
This story is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter's going into the queue soon.
Oooooh good mystery. I really love wizarding Candyland by the way- it's so creative!!!:)
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Wow, you've got me hooked with themystery!
great story!!!!!!
Author's Response: :) Thanks!
Yay to teh Becca for getting up another chappie! :D
I lurved the ending to this one - the article is SO sweet and sad!
Patiently waiting for the next chapter you send me...
- Katie
Author's Response: Yay for teh Katie for being so awesome!
Next chapter's coming soonish, I pinky-swear.
~Teh Becca
wow Becca,
This one was just a little disturbing and brutal, you might consider changing the rating. I hope you explain why he is so brutual in a future chapter. I just finished a book about two ghosts and why they could not move on and how they needed someone to solve the mystery before they could, if you some ideas send me a PM and I'll be glad to pass them on. I can't wait for the next one, hopefully it won't be so disturbing ; )
~Kristy
Author's Response: Kristy-
Yeah, this one was the worst chapter as far as the violence. And don't worry- all will be explained... later. :) I think I've got the plot all worked out, but thanks for the offer! Next chapter is *hopefully* coming soon!
~Becca
Becca! The angsty chapter is up!
(And you still need to send me Chapter - I think it's 5? - m'dear.)
This is my favourite chapter that I've read so far. I loved the flashback, I love the descriptions, and I love the characters, who are more real than some people I know in RL.
Great job. (Again.)
- Katie
Author's Response: Katie! I know- I'm so glad. *lurves the angsty chapter*
(Check!)
Aww. No matter how many times you tell me you love this chapter, I never get tired of it. *basks in Katie-praise* Thank you, Katie! ~Becca
Omg! This is super interesting. Update soon!
Author's Response: :) Glad to hear you like it so much!
OMG thats so sad it made me cry, I hope she can recover from it! cant wait for the next update
Author's Response: *giggles* I'm actually glad to hear I made you cry- I was crying when I wrote this chapter, and I really wanted to make people understand what happened to Elizabeth. Life isn't always rainbows and flowers. Anyway, thanks for the review!
