Reviews For Night's Warrior
Reviewer: lovelygurl
Date: 10/09/07 5:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

gud jb!

Author's Response: thanks :)

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 09/08/07 9:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, that was so powerful. I loved the flow, it was really interesting and good. Really great jobs as always! Keep writing, you have too much talent to ever stop. Haylee

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the nice compliments! I am so glad you enjoyed it! ^^

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 09/04/07 19:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. That was fantastic. It was deeply moving and a wonderfull insight into the plight of warewolves in general. Poor Lupin, no wonder he he allways...

I've read poems about this issue before but I can safely say this is the best. You're not one of my faves for nothing. I think the part that really made me tear up was:
I return home

Where family awaits,

Fear and pity concealed

In pupils’ depths.

They fear,

But they lie.

We embrace, automatically

I think mit potrays Remus's pain to perfection. In short, you are one brilliant poet. I'll stop now though I could go on for hours about this poem but that will just bore you. Once again, you did a fantabulouse job* stands up and applouds so loud that passer bys glare and doubt my sanity*=Sammy

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for the wonderful review. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. ^_^ I know that there were other poems on this site about this same topic but the urge to write this type of poem came (this type meaning long, free verse, etc.) and I guess I just had to write it. And the topic that came to mind was Lupin's struggles when he cannot control himself as a werewolf. Anyways, thanks again for reviewing! =D

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