Reviews For The Copan Moiré
Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 09/20/07 20:31
Chapter: The Copan Moiré

I looked hard and I couldn't find anything wrong with this fic. Therein lies your greatest achievement.=Sammy

Author's Response: You really think that? Is that a good thing? Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: Athenas Quill
Date: 09/12/07 13:32
Chapter: The Copan Moiré

Wow that was really good, it did jump around a little and I didn't really understand it much, mabey you should try and explain more in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Cwiddy
Date: 09/09/07 13:40
Chapter: The Copan Moiré

Really enjoyed your story about Rowena! It is a great twist on mythology and adds much to the Hogwarts story!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 09/04/07 22:26
Chapter: The Copan Moiré

Ooh, great job! I liked the little side story about Aileen feeling like she had all the knowledge in the world. And you also made Rowena seem like a real person, not just the smart, wonderous woman we like to think of her as (even as a girl). She had real insecurities, which made it very realistic.
A couple of nitpicks, although I'm not entirely sure if they're wrong:
“As if I need anymore knowledge!” scoffed Aileen, a friend of Rowena’s mother, “I know how to card wool, weave my clothes, and feed my family, what else canna I need in this life given by God!?”
In this case, I think 'anymore' would be two words, but I may be wrong (so don't hold me to it :D). And I'm not sure if 'canna' should be 'can', or if that's just the accent.

“Ainsley! Ainsley!” she called to her friend, “have ye heard the new about the Green Lady?”
'New' should be 'news', but then again, it might be the accent (which by the way, you did a wonderful job on).

Another great story from the fabulous Azalea! Keep up the great work, and keep an eye out for a humorous Voldy coming from me soon. And a Remus/Lily (check my bio for a full explanation). *shameless advertising over*. Awesome job! :D


Author's Response: I had it betaed, so I know that everything is okay. Heehee!

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