So, so so so so so funny. I LOVED it.
Hahahahaha. Scarred for life. Lol.
Cute story. Not much plot development - but then, not much was needed. I really enjoyed this, and it definitely made me laugh more than once! A lot of fun! (Also a great introduction back to Schmergo... before I go reread Potter's Pentagon! I'm so excited for the rest).
I have already written a revew for this, (approximately 2 minutes ago) but you should write more humor fics. that is all.
Author's Response: Yeah, I always want to write more humor fics. But humor fics are basically an extended joke, and it's hard to think of a 'joke' that I can stretch out into a story. It's so much easier to slip humor into a more complicated narrative, so I tend to get lazy and do that. But I really should write more humor stories.
Ron appreciated the present so much that he sent back a thank-you note-- one that buzzed incessantly until the recipient either went insane and burst their own eardrums with fish forks to make the madness stop or burned it at exactly midnight on a full moon.
I wish they sold those at Hallmark. That would be some fun beans.
(This particular clock screamed, “IF YOU DON’T GET OUT OF BED THIS INSTANT, RONALD, THE DARK WIZARDS WILL TAKE OVER!” in a voice suspiciously similar to his mother’s.) this is funny. Wooow...I'm eloquent today.
It took him a minute to realize that his mother wasn’t there, and so couldn’t answer his question.
Good, Ron! This is what we call Logic!
One was Harry. The other was not. The one who was not (as opposed to Nott, who they had caught and captured for an attempt on Kingsley Shacklebolt’s life the previous week)
This is fabulous. :-)
(including a sandwich so moldy that it greatly resembled a chia pet)
ch-ch-ch-chia! I had to say that.
That night, Harry awoke with a start. “I get it!” he exclaimed aloud. “Ron wasn’t writing about a…” But before he could continue the thought process, he fell back asleep, his revelations totally forgotten by morning. Lol.
Completely fabulous, as per usual.
btw, I went to your website thingy today. I read your posts (whatever you call 'em) on bad summaries for stories. I laughed so hard. My dad got mad at me. Where did you find those?
Author's Response: Bahaha, yeah, I'd totally send one of those thank you notes to my sister, only we share a room...I'm glad you like this. It's not as 'funny' as my other humor stories-- I originally submitted it as 'General,' but reviewers made me move it to humor. And the summaries for bad stories came from Mctabby's livejournal (mctabby dot livejournal dot com.) Those made me laugh HYSTERICALLY the first time I read them!
Hah ha!! funny. harry looks a bit thick too.and hermione doesn't have chestnut colured hair.its sorta light brown.but good job
Author's Response: Ahh, thanks! Weirdly, though, the books never specifically said what colour Hermione's hair was-- it just said it was 'brown.' I remember the old Harry Potter trading cards I had before the films came out, her hair was dark brown, so that image always stuck in my head, I guess. I know it was light brown in the films, though.
I'm crying, I'm actually physically crying! This was one of the most hilarious things I've every read. Oh thanks ever so for posting this.
Author's Response: As a certain snake once said, thankssssss amigo! I'm pleased that you like this, because I always felt this was my weakest piece of writing. Thanks so much for all the great reviews you've been leaving me!
Yet another of the funniest fics of all time...
Author's Response: Really? I thought this was by far my worst fic. Thanks so much!
This story, I must admit, is not one of my favorites of yours, but I still enjoyed it. It was chuckle-worthy, for certain, and the only reason I'm not too partial to it is my personal bias against Ron. *shakes head* I don't understand the younger-child mentality, as I've always been the oldest. I love your work!
Author's Response: This is not one of my favourites, either... can't really remember why I posted it. (Actually, it's my least favourite.) Oddly, and contrary to the rest of your review, Ron has always been my very, very, very favourite character, and I love him and I really wanted to write a story about him. *Shrug* I think I do him a little more justice in the third Potter's Pentagon book... you'll have to wait 'till then.
Heh heh heh. Ron writes poetry. that's a new one. I'm not so sure "chestnut mane" is exactly the way to describe Hermione's hair, but whatever. If it makes you happy Ron.
Anyways, i think it's genius! actually made me chortle.
lol *chortle chortle*
-may the muffins be with you.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I think "big poofball of fuzz' is the best way to describe Hermione's hair, but people in love have their own weird ways of seeing things...
Author's Response: And more giggles? I'm a lucky girl!
Author's Response: Wow, I didn't think this fic was worthy of an 'awesome.' Cute username, by the way.
Author's Response: Thank you!
It is just too bad Master Potter couldn't finish that thought; it would have been very instructive and would have explained many things about his world which had hitherto been utterly incomprehnsible to his rather unimpressive mind. But what the hell.
How are you my good woman?
Oh, and I enjoyed the story. A pleasant little read.
Author's Response: Whoa, Zoheb! How lovely to see you again about the site! I am just fine, thanks. And... when I submit the next chapter of one of my stories, you will actually be specifically mentioned in the Author's Note for teaching me the word "Niflheim," without which said story would not exist. So it's interesting that you should show up around here just when I was typing your name. HMmmmm.
oooh and our poor sweet Harry... gotta love him! Though that much more Ron-ish than Harry-ish, that last part... clueless boys, those two.... but I'm sure Hermione knows!!! OH, and I have set myself a purpouse, to read All of your stories (except the musical stuff, I'm as clueless as Ronnikins about that) I have read most of them, so I'm almost there... Insane congrats, me
Author's Response: Thank you! Actually, I always thought Harry was pretty dense... but hey, that's just me! Your reviews are so entertaining to read.
Oooh that was so cute! I love Ron-Hermione!!! Favorite characters, followed by Seamus Finnigan and Ginny.... the nice thing about it is that it was the compete lack of mushiness... not really into corky stuff!! Ok, I'll go read Potter's Pentagon and BOB again, cause I love it sooo much. Always loving your work, me.
Author's Response: I love the Ron/Hermione ship too, and this is the only thing I've written with them actually featured... it's so weird that I got 3 reviews for this in one day when I haven't had any in months...
AHAHAHAHA. My gut is actually busted.
Author's Response: Hehehe, hope you feel better soon, then?
That night, Harry awoke with a start. “I get it!” he exclaimed aloud. “Ron wasn’t writing about a…” But before he could continue the thought process, he fell back asleep, his revelations totally forgotten by morning.
^^How can Hermione not realize that Ron was writing about her? She's supposedly the smart one! Great job! You're really good at writing humour (Don't ask why I use British spelling when no one in my family was at any point in time British, i don't really know why I do myself) and I hope you keep it up!
Author's Response: I think Hermione realized that Ron was writing about her but was too tactful to say anything! ^_^ As for British spelling, I use that, myself!
poor poor naive harry, poor poor unorganized ron... great fic!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! This one doesn't get much love...
ha i loe this its hilarious RU gonna write more? or is that it?
Author's Response: Thanks very much! This is it for that story, but I'm definitely going to write many, many more stories!