The thought processes are maybe a little overdone, but it's a good, realistic progression from the events in the book, to what would have happened, but not been discussed later. I can definitely see Harry's slightly overdeveloped sense of honor making him pull away like that, but I can also see him offering to come down and warm her up after months with no "romantic" activities, so that part's quite good. Next chapter??
Being a diehard R/Hr shipper, the only thing I can say is that good, realistic H/Hr
fics make me angry for some reason and this chapter just did that. Excellent!
are you going to write another chapter? Beacuse that was awesome!
that was awesome! i can't wait to read the next chapter. i wonder if she really felt like this.
great just waiting for more chapters :)
OMG, great! I love it!
Please, this is good, you can finish it.
Sorry I didn't review sooner, I've been a bit offtrack since summer began! Anyway, another great chapter and I hope the next one comes out soon! I like Hermione's battle with herself because, well, I think we've all been there at some time or another wehther it was over a boy or something else.
Author's Response: Haha no problem, thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it :D
Please update soon!
Author's Response: I'll try :D
Don't worry about it, I was just wondering! Good luck with it all. Why are they not accepting your chapters?
Author's Response: That is a good question haha. I have no idea, and I've posted multiple entries per se at the MNFF forums, yet they continue to ignore me. : ( So sorry
Are you still writing this story?
Author's Response: I have posted this in comments and on my profile- type thing. MNFF has not been accepting my chapters and will not listen to my pleas. : ( In April, I will finally be free again and will try to persuade them that they shouldn't delete my chapters with no letter. So sorry.
Damn, just when it was getting good, the dang fool gets up and leaves the poor girl high and dry. How rude!
Author's Response: Hehe. Well you dunno what he will be doing in the near future.... XD.
It is always nice, and good for that matter, to have a choice, especially when it comes to choosing a significant other. Why settle for a dud when you can get the stud?
Author's Response: Haha!
Great chapter can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thanks :D
Hey, I saw the chapter up, but now it's down. What happened? I hope they accept it soon!
Author's Response: I have no idea! Ive submitted the chapter four times, each staying on for a week or two, then disappearing. I posted on MNFF forum, but they havent responded and that was a month ago. So sorry to everyone!
Author's Response: ha i wish. I havent received a rejection letter, nor have I received an email for that. I have the chapter all ready to go, but they wont take it. Sorry :/
Author's Response: Ill try again right now, but MNFF enjoys ignoring my new chapters. We'll see though.
again... LOVED it! please update soon!
Author's Response: as soon as i can! i promise!
that was great! i loved it! thanks for a great read and on to the next chapter!
Author's Response: why thank you :D