Reviews For Waiting
Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 02/15/12 0:42
Chapter: Waiting

I love this, it really captures the sense of the tension and worry, and its totally in canon! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. cj

Reviewer: GinnyPotter711
Date: 08/22/11 20:41
Chapter: Waiting

I almost cry when I think of what it would be like to be Ginny between Dumbledore's death and Voldemort's. Luckily, things got better.

Author's Response: I *know* she must have been so lonely, and felt so out of the loop! cj

Reviewer: charmaine23
Date: 01/23/11 21:49
Chapter: Waiting

Amazing one shot. i love your writing, after i read your story As Happily Ever After As They're Gonna Get i was hooked to fanfiction and had to make an account.
It's amazing how your writing feels like it belongs in the book.

For some reason, probably because she and her mother had just been talking about him, she felt very close to Harry this morning, as if he were somewhere quite nearby. She shook her head, realizing how silly she was being; he was probably hundreds, even thousands, of miles away.

This is when Harry, Ron and Hermione were headed to the Lovegoods house right? Great story and can't wait for others this good.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Nothing like starting the day with a positive review, especially when I just sat down to write some more. This certainly gives me a boost! I am thrilled that you think my writing belongs in the stories themselves. And you are exactly right - that moment is supposed to be when the trio is heading over to the Lovegoods. Of course, the timing doesn't fit perfectly, as the trio goes later in the day, but still ... Thank you for your review! cj

Reviewer: sophis-reinis
Date: 01/21/10 18:20
Chapter: Waiting

Loved it so much!!!

Author's Response: Excellent! Thanks for letting me know. cj

Reviewer: Madame Lestrange
Date: 12/10/09 21:12
Chapter: Waiting

Awwww... that was very sweet. I love how Molly can understand.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed my portrayal of Molly. I figured she would 'get it'. She was young once too. cj

Reviewer: My Wicked Quill
Date: 09/12/09 22:12
Chapter: Waiting

i dont knw why, but when Mrs. Weasley said, "You're in love with Harry" i loved it. i absolutelty loved it, maybe because i;ve always wanted and imagined her saying that to Ginny, because throughout the entire series we never saw that conversation, the one u just wrote. and i mean it is a rather important conversation right? especially since mrs weasley loves harry soooo much. great job, i adored it!!!

Author's Response: I am so pleased you liked that part. I really enjoyed writing the conversation between the two of them, as I like to think that they have a close relationship despite their bickering. To me, it shows how astute Molly is, that she really does understand her daughter. For the same reason I like the part where Molly stands to hide Ginny from her brother's view to avoid awkward questions. Thank you so much for the review! cj

Reviewer: jellyvb25
Date: 07/25/09 17:45
Chapter: Waiting

That took place when Harry, Hermione, and Ron went to the Lovegoods didn't it? I loved how you did the mother-daughter relationship, Ginny and Mrs. Weasley always seem to be fighting, this was a nice change.

Author's Response: Yes, you're right, it did take place when the trio is off at the Lovegoods. Unfortunately, the timing doesn't work extremely well, as the trio is in Ottery St Catchpole in late afternoon, and the fic takes place in early morning, but I fudged it. Close enough! Thanks for the praise about how I portrayed the relationship between Ginny and Molly. It's funny with the characters in HP, I am meant to sympathise with the young 'uns, as they are the main characters, and yet I also have a strong connection to Mrs. Weasley as I am a mother myself. I am sure that although they fight often, their bond is strong; the nature of families, I'm afraid. Thanks for the review! cj

Reviewer: debulaclark
Date: 06/22/09 21:37
Chapter: Waiting

This was great! I can't wait to read your other submissions.

Author's Response: And my SP and fanfic worlds collide! Hi Debbe! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it. cj

Reviewer: natholius
Date: 01/26/09 1:00
Chapter: Waiting

hmm. chrismas break. the trio is just a bit away down at lovegoods. nice bit there.

Author's Response: Yes. You got it! Thanks for the review. cj

Reviewer: esondie
Date: 09/29/08 17:03
Chapter: Waiting

Are you sure that you're not JK Rowling in disguise? :D I enjoyed this one-shot and I'm looking forward to reading your other stories!

Author's Response: Emily!! Thanks for popping by! Alas, I am not Ms Rowling herself *snort* If so, I could use my many millions to purchase a decent computer! :) Glad you enjoyed it sweetie. Stop by anytime. cj

Reviewer: ravenclawmoon2001
Date: 09/11/08 14:28
Chapter: Waiting

Sherri (the slytherin): i don't think anything... we're not that clever!

Amy (the marauder): nope....

Ceana (the peacemaker): i thought you just signed amy and sherri...?

Amy (the marauder): oh yeah!

Sherri: Any way, could you email us at

Ceana: I made the account for us to share...

Amy: And we have some AWESOME news!

~The Silver Trio

Author's Response: Will do. cj

Reviewer: ravenclawmoon2001
Date: 09/10/08 16:43
Chapter: Waiting

Amy: That was really good, cj, we loved it!

Sherri: yep! oh, and we have a bit of a surprise for you...

Ceana: hi, there! Amy and Sherri have told me a lot about you, cj; you sound wonderful! Oh, I'm being terribly rude. My Name's Ceana (KEH-Nuh) McKenizie. my dormmate and I were having "issues", so they assigned me to room 708, which happens to have Amy and Sherri in it!

Amy: Heck yeah! Cj, you're going to love her, she's the funniest girl on the planet.

Sherri: Yeah, she came up with a new slogan for us... The Silver Trio!

~The Silver Trio

Author's Response: Hey guys! I'm thrilled you liked the story. And howdy, Ceana. Nice to meet you. Silver Trio, huh? What did you guys call yourselves before? I can't remember. cj

Reviewer: Bee AKA Ted
Date: 08/10/08 15:14
Chapter: Waiting


i do think poor ginny is neglected in the books

Author's Response: I completely agree. That was one of my complaints with DH: I wanted much more Ginny 'screen-time'. Thanks for reading and reviewing. cj

Reviewer: Bee AKA Ted
Date: 08/10/08 15:14
Chapter: Waiting


i do think poor ginny is neglected in the books

Author's Response: And again. cj

Reviewer: Bee AKA Ted
Date: 08/10/08 15:14
Chapter: Waiting


i do think poor ginny is neglected in the books

Author's Response: See above. cj

Reviewer: aragrn
Date: 04/23/08 10:59
Chapter: Waiting

Very sweet story-Could have been longer tho-

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Sorry it was too short for you - I'd run out of things to say with that idea ;). Thanks for reading and reviewing! cj

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 04/04/08 19:56
Chapter: Waiting

aaawww!!! that was so sweet!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! cj

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 03/29/08 14:17
Chapter: Waiting

awwwwwww i love that sooo cute i love how you put fred in the story you just can't get enough of fred


Author's Response: Thanks Lola. Yeah. Fred. {sigh} I started writing this fic before my daughter and I had read all of DH. I had toyed with using another character to play that role of interrupting their chat, but after we finished DH I just knew it had to be him. cj

Reviewer: ginnygirl16
Date: 03/26/08 21:50
Chapter: Waiting

An excellent one-shot. I really liked how calm and understanding Molly was. I really enjoyed it ;)

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I enjoy writing Molly; as a mother myself, I really 'get' her. Take care! cj

Reviewer: Sundevil6
Date: 02/03/08 12:30
Chapter: Waiting

really good, I enjoyed it a lot!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Check out my other stories if you like.

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