Reviews For Lily's Smile
Reviewer: hedwigs_lvr
Date: 09/06/07 22:45
Chapter: The Courage to Write

I think this story has a lot of potential. I am so glad someone has decided to write about Lily and Scorpius. When I finished DH the first thing I thought was that they should have a relationship. I am curious to see where you go with this story. It is good so far! keep it up!

Author's Response: I thought the same thing when I finshed DH. Then I spent the next two week looking for a Lily/ Scorpius story, but all I could find was Rose/ Scorpius. I knew exactly the kid of story I wanted to be so I desided to write it. I'm glad I'm not the only one who though that. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 09/06/07 20:49
Chapter: The Courage to Write

Ohh! Yeay! I really like this! I can't wait to read more about this one! I hope you can update it soon!
Nicole

Author's Response: I am so happy that you like it. I just added the next Ch. to the queue, so hopfully it will be up soon.

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 09/06/07 20:49
Chapter: The Courage to Write

Ohh! Yeay! I really like this! I can't wait to read more about this one! I hope you can update it soon!
Nicole

Author's Response: Oopps, double post.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 09/06/07 20:45
Chapter: The Courage to Write

Wow that's such a great idea! I can't wait to see where you go with this fic. Your writing is amazing too, I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Thank You so much. You make me blush. I am really happy that you like the story idea. I will be adding my next Ch. to the queue today so hopfully it gets through quickly.

Reviewer: botheringsnape
Date: 09/06/07 20:27
Chapter: The Courage to Write

I really like it! It's a great first story, and I can't wait to read more. *Is excited that you're posting the next chapters soon*

I think it's a great idea for Scorpius and Lily to have a relationship with each other. It makes for a really bittersweet plotline, or a really sweet one if you choose to go that way.

I really loved how you put George in the story. The notebook was really cool! It'd be really useful to have one of those in real life...

There were only a couple minor grammar mistakes that I noticed. Other than that, everything was perfect!

Great job, and I can't wait to read more!

~Ashley

Author's Response: Yay, My first ever Muggle Net Fan Fiction review. Thank you so much Ashley. My favorite charaters are Neville and the twins so I had to put them in somewhere, even if its a small part in the story. I'll talk to you later in the chat. Thanks again for the review hun.

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