I can't really explain how much I am anticipating the next chapter.
The story was well written and keeps the reader wanting more.
My heart was racing the entire time.
(this was also the first story that i read every single word without skippin' a few)
WOW I LOVE IT
Okay, sorry, this is just one of those stories that make me smile :) Maybe it's the foribidden love, I don't know!
Just one thing- maybe you could have been slightly more in depth with the descriptions? But I get that this is the opening chapter, and therefor the "real" story starts after the letter.
But I really look forward to reading more!
Nice plot. Will you put up another chapter please!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
hey, i can't wait to see what happens next...but, did chapter 2 get deleted or something?...well, keep up the great work. 10/10
can't wait till the next chapter. its really good so far.
I know you have at least one more chapter because you keep trying to submit it. Are you going to try again? Or has it been approved on any other fan fiction sights? Please let me know, I would really like to read it. I love this story!
Author's Response: I actually have 5 more chapters. I am submiting the second chapter again right now. I do have it posted on another site but I dont think I can say which one with out getting into trouble on here.
I like this story so far. very interesting, keep it up! :)
Author's Response: Your reveiw made me smile see> *SMILE* < thats me smiling. Thanks:)
i love the way u did your characters, updatew soon
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much. I love getting reviews.
Great work! I wish i thought of it. Plz update....
Author's Response: LOL, thanks. I updated today do cross your fingers for it getting through the Q:)
I wonder what Harry will say? And Malfoy, oh gosh...
Author's Response: you'll have to read and find out. THanks for the review:)
Lily is very well portrayed in this fic! I love how they have that whole Snape/Lily thing going on, except this is a happy ending! well, hopefully...
what i dont understand is why draco would raise his son the way lucius raised him, i mean i think after what dracos been through he would accept his son in any house, including hufflepuff.
anyway, very well written, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Well I was thinking that Draco was never actually good and The way his father raised him is all he knows. Also, the whole Malfoy family has been in Slytherin, so I thought he would want his son to be as well. I hope you like the chapters to come.
I like this, very cute! I cna't wait to see what her parents say!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm working hard on getting Ch. 2 approved by the mods. Hope its on here soon. :)
COOLEST story EVER !
Author's Response: *Blushes* Thank You, I'm glad you think so.
I really like it! just that James is more of a Marauder (JK said that he even sneaked the Map out of Harry's desk one day) than a Percy. He'd make a good head boy. Hope you update soon!
Oh and what was the name of the Rose/Scorpius fic? I vant to read, ja :)
Author's Response: I wrote this before I heard the stuff JK said about James. I hope that since he's not a large character in the story people wont care that much. As for the Rose/Scorpius fic, it wasn't on this web site and I dont want to post where it was cause I dont think Muggle Net would appreciate that. Thanks for the review.
great fic! loved ive never seen a p/m fic unless it slash.ron will hate it
Author's Response: I may agree with you on the whole 'Ron will hate it' thing. I like the fact that theres a way to pair a Potter and Malfoy together without it being slash too. But slash is sometimes a nice thing too.
I just wanted to say thank you! This the first post-hogwarts fanfic I've come across that is even remotely cannon (especially with Harry & Ginny's kid's names). You've got me hooked as well on your plot of not just a Potter/Malfoy ship but a Gryffindor/Slytherin one as well. I can't wait to get to the 2nd chapter! Just a couple of quick notes about the story its self: a) In George's note to Lilly, Ginny encounters Tom's diary in her 1st year, not her 2nd (It was Harry's 2nd though). & b) from what little we get from the epilogue in DH, James just doesn't come off as a "Percy" type to me, but more of a "Fred&George/Marauders"type. But it's your story and I'm nothing more than a measly reviewer! ;) Well, I hope the mods get the 2nd chapter up soon, because you've certainly got me hanging with the brilliant way you left us with Lilly's letter and no response! Cheers & Happy Writing!
Author's Response: THanks for pointing out the fact that Ginny was in her 1st year when she encountered Tom and not in her 2nd. I cant believe nobody else has caught that. Its just a typo, and I going to fix it as soon as posiable. As the whole James thing goes, he might have changed when he was made a Prefect. People change all the time and he could have relized he was getting older and thought about his future and started to see how much he wanted to be like Percy so he start to mimic him. Thats my thoughts on it at least. Thats just how I see him. Thanks for the review and I hope you continue to read the other chapters.
wow, this is really great. you had some brilliant ideas here. you seem to be very talented as a writer. i cant wait till the next chapter is validated, and im looking forward to seeing where this goes.
i think at the very least, hermione will be okay with lily and scorpius, and possibly harry. i don't know, though, this is your story, after all.
and a funny thing: when writing my own fanfic, i had the same idea with the enchanted book. i wanted a way for two of my characters to be able to interact privately in hogwarts, cause its kinda hard to send an owl in the middle of class, and i thought of the mirrors that james and sirius used as marauders in detentions. then i thought of how we muggles use email and instant messaging and texting, and i wanted a way to incorporate that type of communication in the wizarding world. so i thought of a hard bound book enchanted to share messages and it never runs out of pages (like how the test papers are just a single piece that you just keep turning over and over again) so you can use it your whole life and never have to get a new, empty book. and you could somehow erase messages if you didn't want to keep them, just like an email inbox, where you can delete old messages. (in my story, a student created just one pair for his own personal use with his best friend. im sure if someone like george had made it to be sold, he would make it so you eventually had to buy a new one, so he could keep making money.)
but it seems you got to the idea first. great minds think alike, i suppose. i just wanted to let you know that if i ever put up the fic im writing, not to think im stealing your idea. but technically, you published the idea first, so if you would rather i didn't use the book idea, im sure i can figure something else out. but regardless, feel free to use any ideas i just gave you. i dont know how developed your ideas about the book are, but if you want to use any part of what i just described with my ideas, please feel free.
i would like your thoughts on the issue, and if you choose to give it, you permission to use the book idea.
Author's Response: I don't mind at all if you use the idea of the book thing. I didn't think it was that oringanal of an idea. In my head in the book the notes can be erased but only so nobody could read it. Once a spot in the book had been used it looses its charm and is just like normal partchment. That way you can still have use out of the book but you have to continue buying new ones if you want to continue to use the enchantment. Thanks for the wonderful review and I look forward to reading your fic one day when you post it so I can see how you use the book idea.