Reviews For To the Victor
Reviewer: coolh5000
Date: 12/29/08 18:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

A great one-shot, I loved this little snippet from the Malfoy challenge. Not having been around for the challenge, I don’t know what your brief was, but I really liked the way you used to prove Malfoy was innocent.

The naming of Addison was interesting, and also unusual. It’s not a name I’ve ever heard in the UK before – however the same could be said of many wizarding names. Being my usual British self, I did notice one or two American spellings but no complete Americanisms, which was great.

I found some of the technical stuff a bit confusing at times, though that is more likely to be my own stupidity than your writing.

I found the Addison’s ‘punch line’ in the trial quite amusing and I don’t know if this what you were going for but if so, it definitely worked and I found myself smiling as I read it. I thought the whole piece was very entertaining.

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 06/30/08 14:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

Leah, again with the brilliance. I still really love Addison. She is such a great character.

Only nitpick is that things sometimes got a little confusing because there are a few quotation marks missing.

So no biggy, keep up the work, dear!

Hugs,
Haylee

Reviewer: Leahr
Date: 12/03/07 18:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

cute! really interesting idea to accquit malfoy, and i like addison's character. The legal terminology i felt was a little confused at points, though. BAD DOG!! :-) I liked this a lot.

Author's Response: Yep... The middle was a bit confused, too, but thanks for the nice review, and for getting BAD DOG!

Reviewer: Lover of Luna 9462
Date: 08/30/07 7:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

Yay!!!! First post!!!!! Very well done. Interesting the fact that Harry wanted to call Lord Voldemort Tom Riddle!! I really think you did well!!!


Author's Response: Thanks. First five house points, too!

Author's Response: Thanks. First five house points, too!

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