Reviewer: FullMetalLovegood
Date: 05/04/11 4:41
Chapter: Nobody likes Mondays

So, I absolutely love the idea for this story (pure genius!) and Luna is my favorite character in the whole book series. i realize this story hasn't been updated since 08 (thats what it said on the first page :/ ) but i think you should pick it up and finish this thing. It's all around amazing!

Reviewer: Phoenix13
Date: 04/19/08 23:03
Chapter: Nobody likes Mondays

I like the characters in this story. Noah has a very unique personality. He reminds me a bit of my friend in the fact that it's almost painful for him to be silly around people he doesn't know. I'm excited to see what happens next! Please update!

Author's Response: Thanks hun! I find Noah to be a very refreshing character to work with since J.K. doesn't seem to have come up with anyone quit like him in her books. Snape is too bitter, Hermione is too outgoing and . Noah is the ultimate image of what (I think) children boys are really like, and who better to break him of his fear of people than Luna? I really appreciate you taking the time to jot down your simple thoughts and though I doubt I will be updating extremely soon, I do plan on updating eventually. I'm not the kind to give up on a story so don't get worried if it's been a few months and there's still nothing. <3! ~Beauty Fades

Reviewer: Marvalo Gaunt
Date: 01/13/08 12:46
Chapter: Communicating with the life form called friends

great work for a story with no beta can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thank-you for that unexpected, and encouraging review! It may be awhile before I actually update this one because I'm working so hard on finishing this one, but your comment definitely inspires me to see if I can get another chapter up soon. Thanks again for making me smile and taking the time to check this out. ~ Beauty Fades

Reviewer: Vampirella
Date: 09/29/07 12:14
Chapter: Communicating with the life form called friends

Benjamin make look cute but that boy has a very sarcastic sense of humor. Lol. I can see you in him when I read the dialogue and it cracks me up. It was very smart of Luna to steal that kiss, too. -winker-

No mistakes that I can find here, and the descriptions are brimming with originality. Love it, love it. Looks great so far and I'm excited to read more when you.... get it posted. Hint, hint. ;)

XoXo and thanks for making me laugh.

~Sophie: Your Koala Bear

Reviewer: Vampirella
Date: 09/29/07 12:06
Chapter: Muggles, Nargles and Luna

Ahh, Luna! Everyone's one true inspiration for weirdness. You portrayed her wonderfully, m'dear!

I wasn't ready for that make-out scene on the train, though. My eyes were like: (0.o) Lol. Poor Noah will never be the same.

And the spinzie! You actually used it! Lol! I kind of thought you were joking around when you asked me to come up with a name, but there it is.

Reviewer: Vampirella
Date: 09/29/07 12:04
Chapter: Muggles, Nargles and Luna

Ahh, Luna! Everyone's one true inspiration for weirdness. You portrayed her wonderfully, m'dear!

I wasn't ready for that make-out scene on the train, though. My eyes were like: (0.o) Lol. Poor Noah will never be the same.

And the spinzie! You actually used it! Lol! I kind of thought you were joking around when you asked me to come up with a name, but there it is.

Reviewer: Vampirella
Date: 09/29/07 11:56
Chapter: Prologue

Ah! Eriin! -pounces on and hugs to death-

I'm so glad you decided to post this story. You've already heard me ramble once about how cute I think it is, but I am tempted to repeat myself in public, once more. ;)

First, I must admit that Noah sounds ever so cute. A frizzy, ickle green-eyes boy who sits in the corner and reads his books. His parents crack me up as well, and make the plot very more interesting. Poor dady's only smiled once. Lol.

Your descriptions fit the light-hearted mood of the plot and seem to relax me and make me smile. The setting you have created is one of ease and warmth.

Look, baby, see? It says, Love Mom and Daddy, and we do love you, baby. This sentence was the only one that bugged me slightly. It just sounds a little weird with the over-use of 'baby' but maybe I'm just weird. (0.o)

That's about it. I'm off to see how much you changed of the second chapter. I hope you gets lots more reviews full of big hugs and sloppy kisses. You deserve them, girl!

Thanks for your opinions on my own stories and positive comments when I was feeling pretty down. (I still think you should be a beta! -poke-)

Off I scamper to Chapter 2. Hehe...

~Sophie: Your one true love

Reviewer: Summer Rose
Date: 09/28/07 18:56
Chapter: Communicating with the life form called friends

Aww! This chapter was very cute, just like the rest of them. You did a very good job of making Noah's friend's personalities seem original and entertaining. Their names weren't quite so Muggle as the one's in Death Wish, either.

You never seem to have trouble portraying Luna correctly and I love it. She's always been a funky character to me, and I enjoy reading you doing her justice. Let's see what happens in Chapter 4, eh?

Author's Response: Thank-you very much! I enjoyed writing and creating his friends. The way Benjamin contrasts with Zechariahs is very fun to work with and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Chapter 4 should be up soon. When I have time to finish writing and editing it. <3 ~Beauty Fades

Reviewer: Phoenix13
Date: 09/24/07 17:46
Chapter: Communicating with the life form called friends

I assume that as this story is set at Hogwarts, and that the characters are actually in England. Therefore, Benjamin would have no cause whatsoever to imitate his cousin's accent, as he speaks in exactly the same way (unless, of course, Benjamin is American.) Just thought you ought to know. Otherwise, good story!

Author's Response: Lol! Yes... I thought I made it apparent from the sorting hat, him being sorted into Ravenclaw, and the headmaster named Dumbledore that they were indeed at Hogwarts. But yes, when I made up the accents in my head I imagined Noah and Benjamin being American while Zacheriahs was "snooty english boy". Thanks for letting me know. I guess I should have clarified that since (thank God..) people can't read my mind. :) Thanks for your encouraging review! Chapter 4 should be up soon. I want to finish this up so I can start on the 2nd in this series. -wiggles eyebrows- *Beauty Fades

Reviewer: Katie616
Date: 09/13/07 18:40
Chapter: Muggles, Nargles and Luna

Loooooved iiiiiiiit! That was wonderful. Luna was absolutely PERFECT. I loved her spontaneity. It is masterfully done. I can't wait for another installment. I'm afraid I can't say it's VERY funny, but it's also not that. . .erm. . . unfunny. . . so yeah.

Author's Response: Ha! Thanks for the review, Katie-my-baby. Like I said in my author's notes, I know that it probably won't be laugh out loud funny but it is meant to be entertaining and as long as it does that, I'm perfectly happy. As you know m'dear, I'm more about the sarcastic and whitty (-wink, wink-) come backs. It's harder when making up the entire comversation. Thanks again for your support! ~Beauty Fades

Reviewer: Summer Rose
Date: 09/11/07 17:15
Chapter: Muggles, Nargles and Luna

Ha! That was rather entertaining. This looks like it's turning out to be a really cute story and you did a good job of portraying Luna correctly. I've read some stories recently where people seem to be having trouble with her.

Again, I will mention how weird it is that this story is like the exact opposite of your other one, Death Wish. Lol. The chapters are longer, this one's more happy... It just seems opposite. But it's cute. ;)

Reviewer: Summer Rose
Date: 09/05/07 15:10
Chapter: Prologue

This looks like it will bea very fuuny story and from the way you started this first chapter, I think you're doing a great job. I also love your story, "Death Wish" and so I was checking on your profile, saw this story, and decided to check it out. It's almost strange how opposite the 2 are but I really like your writing style and I'm sure this will be just as wonderful as your other one. Hope you get lots more reviews and encouragements!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yea... I recognized your name as a reviewer from my other story. It's appriciated that you show your support here as well. Lol. And yes.. I hope I get "lots more reviews, too.

Reviewer: Katie616
Date: 09/04/07 15:35
Chapter: Prologue

Yay! I have the first review! Hooooooorrrrrrrraaaaaayyyyyyy! Anyhoo.

I like how Noah's mom is so crazy. In a good way. I like crazy people. I think his mom's kinda like Luna, but I think that should make him like Luna a little better, if only because he's lived with a person like her for as long as he's lived.

But the story is coming along very well so far! I like how your characters stay the same, instead of developing a bunch of new talents and characteristics in one chapter, although it is, of course, good to develop them. But not give them super powers. I'll stop now. I'm getting off topic.
Anyway, thank you so much for actually posting this. I know you weren't sure if you're gonna, but I sure am glad you did!
Katie

Author's Response: Katie, my love! I could kiss you at this moment, but I shan't because we're... in a public place and.... I'm not like that. lol. Anyways, moving away from that awkward moment.... Yay! My first reviews! Though technically this one isn't! Because you accidently posted the same one twice! Hehe. I love you anyway, Katie-M'lady. (audience: O.o -whispers- She seems to be getting to worse at this....) Lol. Naw. Thanks for your encouraging comments. They made me have enough courage to let the public view this with open eyes. (Audience: -handslaptoforehead- What else would they read it with? Ok. I shall stop now with our inside jokes and embaressing myself. Thanks for the review. lol. That's what I should have said from the beginning and left it there but I didn't. The End (audience: O.o Well that was gay....... We want our money back...!)

Reviewer: Katie616
Date: 09/04/07 15:30
Chapter: Prologue

Yay! I have the first review! Hooooooorrrrrrrraaaaaayyyyyyy! Anyhoo.

I like how Noah's mom is so crazy. In a good way. I like crazy people. I think his mom's kinda like Luna, but I think that should make him like Luna a little better, if only because he's lived with a person like her for as long as he's lived.

But the story is coming along very well so far! I like how your characters stay the same, instead of developing a bunch of new talents and characteristics in one chapter, although it is, of course, good to develop them. But not give them super powers. I'll stop now. I'm getting off topic.

Author's Response: -poses- The real first review! -randomly walks out again-

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