Woah...lol. I am uber confused. So is this like starting from a point in the future and the rest will be like a flashback because of the Draco giving her a ring thing? So they are together in this chapter? Lol..wow..very well written. I like it a lot.
**Emma
Oh, this is going to be a great story. You have definately got a wonderful plot going on from what I can tell. I loved this chapter even more. They just keep getting better! I can't find more words to describe such greatness other than EXCELLENCE
Ooo, intense. I love this story, its wonderful. The way you describe the scene and the character's emotions are so lovely. I adored Lucius' reaction, and the punches to Draco's nose, they were so... realistic to their characters.
In one paragraph there is an extra period at the very end.
Brilliant story, dear. Again, I must keep reading.
Oh this is an amazig start to a story. I love the descriptiveness and how believable this seems. Amazing job, but I must continue reading...
oo i like it the supence good please update soon
Good
not AS good as chapters before
but, i still loved it =]]
update soon
x
ohhh shit.ahhh i thought some distant relative of teh malfoys live in the muggle world now.
hmm.interesting.yay!
That was good...shame on Malfoy :P But if he felt shame then he wouldnt be a Malfoy, now would he? lol. Anyways, update soon, please??
~WendyPotter
Author's Response: It's in the que right now. Keep watching. ~Kristy
Very Very good. I love the "damn it stop doing that"
Very Very good. I love the "damn it stop doing that"
Very Very good. I love the "damn it stop doing that"
Author's Response: I thought it was a good way to end the chapter. ~Kristy
haha
keep the nose punching coming
:]
Author's Response: well, now all three have had a go at him. ~Kristy
Only read the first chapter
its already in my favourites
and i hope it stays there! :]
*SH*
Author's Response: I just got back from a week long trip but I will start editing ch 2 on Monday, I'm glad you like it. ~Kristy
ha! draco got his nose broke twice in two minutes!
Author's Response: serves him right! doesn't it :)
Please update soon
Author's Response: I have the next chapter in que, they are just really backed up. It's Draco's pov.
wats the warning for?
Author's Response: warnings will be for later chapters, keep reading. ~Kristy
ooooooooooo! very effective first chapter! I can't wait for the next!
Author's Response: Got your attention did I? That was the whole point. The next chapter will be almost 1 year before the events in the prologue.
i LOVE this story so far! keep writing! when's it gonna be updated??!!!
Author's Response: The prologue just went up today, I am working on the next chapter and will get it in que as soon as I can. I'm glad you like it.
