Reviews For Don't Tell!
Reviewer: pokecharm
Date: 04/29/08 19:11
Chapter: Waiting

the chapters are shorter than I'd like - but interesting story :)

Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk
Date: 03/27/08 8:02
Chapter: Waiting

Kristy, this is such a wonderful start to this fic! It's got me hooked so far!

One of the wonderful things about this fic is that you don't just jump right into the plot. Some writers just take and make the second chapter the start of the plot, but you just ease into it, setting the scene slowly. This is really going to make for a better fic; keep it up!


Also, I love Hermione's parents. Wherever did you come up with the name Raleigh? I love that city in North Carolina, it's really pretty.

You have a wonderful writing style, and I've loved everything you've written. Keep it up, dear!

--Hanni

Author's Response: Thank you Hanni.  I researched British names and just looked until I found one that I thought fit his character description that I had created.  It was fun since there is no real description of her parents anywhere.  I hope you read the rest of it and thank you for the review.

Reviewer: groteskq_fatality
Date: 03/24/08 20:32
Chapter: Waiting

ohhh sketchy.
update soon!
hmmmm gettin very interesting.

:]

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 03/24/08 18:28
Chapter: Waiting

Interesting chapter! I can not wait to read the next one :-) Update quickly pretty please with a cherry on top ;-)

Author's Response: I'm working on it. :)

Reviewer: prettyprincesss
Date: 03/24/08 16:07
Chapter: Waiting

Great job!

Reviewer: prettyprincesss
Date: 03/23/08 18:34
Chapter: Hurting

I'm loving this! Are you going to continue?

Author's Response:

Yes I am, there is one chapter in the que right now awaiting validation and another one being written.  I'm glad you like it.

~Kristy

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 02/17/08 20:03
Chapter: Hurting

Ooo, very good chapter. I can not wait to read more of this. It is most intrigueing. Great Job.

Reviewer: BeyondYourReasons92
Date: 02/08/08 16:31
Chapter: Hurting

I like it so far.

Reviewer: sacred_heart
Date: 01/23/08 9:23
Chapter: Prologue

I like this story and it's really well written. I'm a little confused but i guess it'll make sense later. Keep writing! I wanna see what happens.

Reviewer: NorthernPhoenix
Date: 01/23/08 1:16
Chapter: Hurting

Looking forward to the next chapter. However, I am hoping that the Prologue is not the complete end as that would be awful to be left hanging like that.

Author's Response: there will be an epilogue that will bring closure.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/22/08 13:56
Chapter: Hurting

Wonder what is wrong with Hermione?!?!? Wonderful chapter =)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/22/08 10:58
Chapter: Running

This is starting to get exciting! Great chapter

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/22/08 10:55
Chapter: Caught!

Nicely written chapter :-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/22/08 10:52
Chapter: Prologue

Interesting, though I am wondering where this plot is going.

Reviewer: MrsHorse
Date: 01/18/08 10:03
Chapter: Caught!

Ahh here's the history ;)

Reviewer: MrsHorse
Date: 01/18/08 10:00
Chapter: Prologue

Beautifully written.. though i think people need more convincing or explaination as to how Hermione and Draco ended up together.

Author's Response: not done yet keep reading

Reviewer: xombie
Date: 01/17/08 6:40
Chapter: Hurting

This is nice indeed! But so short. I really wanted more. Your plot is getting really thick and I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm loving this fic =D

Reviewer: groteskq_fatality
Date: 01/16/08 19:18
Chapter: Hurting

lmao.love molly.
stupid draco.lol. gotta love him though.
:]

update :]

Reviewer: xombie
Date: 01/09/08 6:41
Chapter: Running

I loved this story! It's very beautifully written. The emotions that you portray are very well done. I like it that all chapters link themselves even though they may be set in different points of time.

The last chapter has sent the blood rushing into my face. Chapter four has GOT to get validated immediately! =D

*hugs*

Reviewer: hermione_granger4life
Date: 01/01/08 18:00
Chapter: Running

I'm still reading this. I like it a lot. Very well written, nice descriptions, everyone seems very IC. Great job. Can't wait for more. :)

**Emma

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