Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 11/18/07 14:58
Chapter: Goodbyes

aww!! update soon! it's sad!

Reviewer: Vampire Hunter Blade
Date: 11/16/07 21:49
Chapter: Goodbyes

I love it! Update soon.

Reviewer: betsy
Date: 11/16/07 16:39
Chapter: Goodbyes

Oh, craptastic! My heart is racing here, I do hope you've got Ch. 4 up and ready!

Great storytelling, suspensful and it flows beautifully. I knew this would happen (Remus leaving), of course, but it doesn't make it any easier to take! Please update soon! :)betsy

Author's Response: Craptastic is one of my favorite words. Thank you. :-)

Reviewer: i love prongs
Date: 11/15/07 15:30
Chapter: Goodbyes

loved it update soon!

Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus
Date: 11/13/07 10:09
Chapter: Goodbyes


good job!

first of all, i didnt see that quote from last time, or did i just miss it? and then where do u say is the inconsistency of timeline. with oyur narration, i didnt even think about it.

okay, back to business then, hehe. i must say the pace of the chapter was slow *coughs* and there was no significant racing of my heart beat. HOWEVER, i'd love it if u could comment on this a bit:

Andromeda choked a little, wiped her eyes, then looked up into her husband’s eyes. “It’s not enough,” she whispered. Tonks got the feeling that they were having a very private conversation that had nothing to do with her mother’s crying or her beauty.

the parting of remus and tonks was VERY original and realistic. i'd have hated him though, if i didnt love him as much as tonks does *grins*

also, though a bit of remus' eagerness to visit tonks' parents left unexplained. or was it because he had been planning to leave all along, perhaps ted's move was just a trigger for him?

the next quote is as heart-wrenching as its precedor *sighs dramatically*

*winks* keep it up and update as soon as you can!

another good one...


Author's Response: The inconsistency in the timeline is only in that Ted actually leaves well after Remus does. In DH, when Harry overhears Ted talking with Dean and the Goblins, he mentions that he left home about a week prior. Harry's been camping out for awhile, and had his encounter with Remus well before that, so my story is slightly AU in that respect. But I loved my chapter far too much to change it. The comments that Andromeda makes to Ted as he's leaving are something between the two of them, possibly a reference to everything that they had to go through when they first fell in love. It's one of those things that kids may never notice about their parents, which is why Tonks doesn't quite understand the moment that her parents are sharing. In my original plans, Remus was eager to get Tonks to her parents so that she could be comforted by them when he left. However, as the chapter developed, I decided it would be much better if Ted inadvertently encouraged Remus's reasons for leaving. The thought had been there all along, but Ted's arguments for leaving justify it. Glad you're enjoying!!

Reviewer: koolio_jollymints
Date: 09/21/07 16:33
Chapter: Similar Arguments

Ahhh! Such a great chapter!!!!

Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus
Date: 09/21/07 5:02
Chapter: Similar Arguments

oh wait...

i reread it...

the quote i mentioned may not necessarily be said by remus... is it said by ted?

*shakes her head* it is said by ted, i think... oh Merlin...

i have changed my mind really... u NEED to update!

Author's Response: I appreciate the fervor of your arguments! I'm glad you're getting into it. :-)

Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus
Date: 09/21/07 4:57
Chapter: Bittersweet

i had no idea that the quote u posted last time was said by tonks rather than umbridge... it was very touching how tonks says it (possessive of her child... *hums* I like it) and i'm happy to be wrong.

the best part was how remus reacts at tonks' news...

and the worst part... hmm... well rard there is a worst part too, u noe... and that is the quote for the next chapter...

*wails* please dont do this to me! if i'm correct remus is obviously leaving them then and i noe u've never heard this before... but really... u can delay writing the next chapter for as long as u want...

please DONT update...

and let me enjoy the love this loving couple share before u decide to snatch them apart with the power of ur pen!!!

absolutely loved it! keep it up...


P.S: just kidding abt the update, buddy!

Reviewer: tonks_the_dreamer
Date: 09/20/07 22:24
Chapter: Similar Arguments

omg, awesome!

Reviewer: Ryelle
Date: 09/11/07 9:00
Chapter: Bittersweet

This story sounds like it has a lot of potential. Keep it up!

Reviewer: Moonyschick25
Date: 09/08/07 19:47
Chapter: Bittersweet

Great start! Cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus
Date: 09/06/07 2:28
Chapter: Bittersweet

Trust me buddy, my stomach was already in knots before Tonks even woke up. I loved how u showed that she was very possessive of him. Cuz usually guys are like that but the gesture was well suited to whatever she went through the year before.

Remus was charming and for once *glares mockingly at the werewolf* had some sense, in spite of the fact that it was half through the night!

After submitting this, I’ll first press the favourite tab and then go check out ur author page… *ties her fingers together… and prays there is more stuff for her to read*

Keep it up… very well done!

Author's Response: I <3 charming Remus. I just know that he would be the best man in the world to Tonks, if he would stop thinking so much. *Sigh* I suppose everyone has to have a flaw. Thanks for the favorite add! I'll be heading over your way soon to check out your stories.

Reviewer: tonks_the_dreamer
Date: 09/05/07 20:26
Chapter: Bittersweet

ahhhh!!!! awesome start!

Author's Response: Thanks!! The next chapter will be up soon!

Reviewer: koolio_jollymints
Date: 09/05/07 16:36
Chapter: Bittersweet

Oh, my goodness! This is such a good idea and a good plot! I loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter should be up soon, I just have a few more minor tweaks to get it right.

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