Well done. Although Narcy is a bit old to have another kid isn't she?
Author's Response: Thanks! Eh, she's only around 40ish; as a witch, she'd still be plenty fertile.
this is one of the best stories I have read on this site. the way the author captured rowling's character, but yet added a depth that was all at once unexpected but true is truly what made the story for me. well done, I would be interested to see the author's take on other characters.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you found it effective and authentic. I can't say I like Lucius any more after having written this, but I do feel like I understand him a little better.