MuggleNet Fan Fiction
Harry Potter stories written by fans!
(Signed) · Date:
08/27/07 9:59 · For:
Very good job with this story as an explanation of how Malfoy got away. However, some details were a little unclear, for instance the murder of Callum Keelan. When did that happen? Why is it mentioned in particular? Also, I think there are some other crimes Malfoy has to answer to-escaping Azkaban, for instance, that are pretty important. Otherwise, though, you did a good job and I love the character of your OC Isabel Keelan.
Author's Response: Thanks! =)