Reviewer: peevesforever
Date: 09/16/07 18:04
Chapter: Chapter 2: I'd Rather Have You
This was a huge changefrom the usual Lily / James fics. I liked it a lot. I love haow determined Lily is because that's how I imagine her.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad the final result was atypical.
Reviewer: bluemoon13
Date: 09/16/07 15:31
Chapter: Chapter 2: I'd Rather Have You
I really liked the comparison to Cinderella...I suppose the whole year and a half thing was a tad unrealistic...but I agree that Lily was probably very determinded and I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Yes, bad planning on my part...I wanted the story to start in 5th year and end with them going out, so I had to jump to 7th year. The result was that Lily was far more determined than even I had expected!
Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 09/16/07 15:12
Chapter: Chapter 2: I'd Rather Have You
This is your first fic? Wow, you did a really good job with this. I would check some punctuation in the middle part of this chapter, however. Your personalization is fantastic, you really made James and Lily real. Fantastic story, and I look forward to reading more of your work!
Author's Response: Thank you...check back soon for my next story--a Lily/James one-shot that I like much better than this story. (Sorry, I don't know the title yet.) And I will check the punctuation.
Author's Response: It's called "Purple Ink", but it's not validated yet.
Author's Response: Now it is. Read it please!
Reviewer: Lilys Passion
Date: 09/16/07 15:01
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prince Charmingly Gallant
that was a little mean of her...
~Lilys Passion
Author's Response: She was more concerned with preserving her independence...and she had never really considered James' feelings that much to begin with.
Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 09/16/07 1:02
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prince Charmingly Gallant
ohhh great start to the story!!!! i like how you say that lily doesnt want to be another cinderella. i never thought of it that way and its a really clever way to put it :) the writng was excellent and you've done a good job at establishing the characters and the story line! i cant wait for the next chapter keep updating!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 09/16/07 1:00
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prince Charmingly Gallant
ohhh great start to the story!!!! i like how you say that lily doesnt want to be another cinderella. i never thought of it that way and its a really clever way to put it :) the writng was excellent and you've done a good job at establishing the characters and the story line! i cant wait for the next chapter keep updating!!!!!
Reviewer: koolio_jollymints
Date: 09/12/07 17:28
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prince Charmingly Gallant
Three words: Ahhhhhhh! Awesome! Update!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Right now I'm waiting for ch. 2 to be validated.
Reviewer: lily16
Date: 09/07/07 16:42
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prince Charmingly Gallant
you write really well- the words kinda flow. i love the idea of this story, lily does seem independent. some parts seemed a little unexplained, like the part with the kiss. can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I tried to explain the kiss at the end of the chapter; it's kind of because she's actually starting to like him, and being grateful to him is enough of an excuse that she didn't try to stop herself.
Reviewer: Howie
Date: 09/06/07 12:42
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prince Charmingly Gallant
Are you really finished with this story? I thought it was great -- I'm totally intrigued -- but it must go on! I'm a sucker for a good James/Lily fic, and I think this one's got a lot of potential. I love how you incorporated info from Book 7. More, please!
Author's Response: Thank you! (and sorry, I said it was completed by mistake... there will be two chapters.)
