Reviewer: LVROCKS
Date: 08/31/12 22:03
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prince Charmingly Gallant

Cool!

Reviewer: JamesandLilyfurevah
Date: 10/12/09 21:40
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prince Charmingly Gallant

Thats pretty good

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/31/09 18:03
Chapter: Chapter 2: I'd Rather Have You

i loved it this way. The timing seemed right. And James is totally redeamed as a character. I quite like this different view of the story.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 07/31/09 17:34
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prince Charmingly Gallant

wow that was a different take on things. quite nice though. I liek that Lily won't be another cinderella but James seems a little to submissive. i guess he is trying to show his maturity. Nicely written all the same i liked it.

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/23/09 13:06
Chapter: Chapter 2: I'd Rather Have You

I really like this story. It's so cute.

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 06/23/09 12:57
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prince Charmingly Gallant

I'm gald she kissed him. She needed to.

Reviewer: Chris_04
Date: 06/13/08 21:55
Chapter: Chapter 2: I'd Rather Have You

....and after reading some other reviews, I'll add that I thought your timing was fine- I went longer than that without talking to someone because I was afraid that I'd fall in love with him.

Author's Response: hmmm...I'm glad it didn't bother you. I don't think it's the way I would have done things, but I guess it could have happened that way.

Reviewer: Chris_04
Date: 06/13/08 21:51
Chapter: Chapter 2: I'd Rather Have You

Thank you for interpreting my favorite character the way I do, and thanks for understanding the way I've felt for a long time.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! It's nice to know that other people see these characters the same way I do.

Reviewer: Hermiones BFF
Date: 05/30/08 17:56
Chapter: Chapter 2: I'd Rather Have You

AWWWWW!!!!! That was great!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Karya
Date: 04/05/08 22:02
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prince Charmingly Gallant

that was pretty good but how lily broke her ankle with a simple fall is confuzling but it is a good plot so far!

Reviewer: rather_be_athogwarts
Date: 04/01/08 19:05
Chapter: Chapter 2: I'd Rather Have You

well, i would comment that their confessions of love didn't quite happen in the way - but i applaud your effort! actually, the way you describe lilly reminds me of ginny...

Author's Response: Thanks for the applause. This is by far the worst (and first) of my fics, so don't judge me too harshly... ;) But thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: rather_be_athogwarts
Date: 04/01/08 18:58
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prince Charmingly Gallant

cute!

Reviewer: lilys fairy
Date: 02/18/08 14:59
Chapter: Chapter 2: I'd Rather Have You

that's a really nice fan fic.

Author's Response: thanks! :)

Reviewer: harryandginnyrock
Date: 02/09/08 15:00
Chapter: Chapter 2: I'd Rather Have You

to much fluff. but otherwise good.

Author's Response: lol thanks I'm inclined to agree with you--this is my first fic and it could have been better (check out my other stories!) thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 01/12/08 12:31
Chapter: Chapter 2: I'd Rather Have You

this is so good i love it
it was sweet and i think that james was portrayed perfectly

XOXOXO
~lola~

Author's Response: thank you! I'm glad you liked the characterization, and thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 01/12/08 12:02
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prince Charmingly Gallant

ohhh poor Jamsie lilly hurt his feelings *sniff*

XOXOXO
~lola~

Reviewer: in love with harry
Date: 01/01/08 1:24
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prince Charmingly Gallant

this is one of the best lily james fic iv ever read


Author's Response: wow--thank you!

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 12/29/07 19:29
Chapter: Chapter 2: I'd Rather Have You

AMAZING!!!! This is honestly the best James and Lily fanfic I have ever teared up over!! If Jo ever read your fan fiction work she would totally fall in love with it just like I have!! Now I definatly have to add you to my favorites and tell my friend alison about this amazingness!!! I wish I could write like you. Well to end my rambling about your greatness you have made me feel so much better about myself and made my night (yet again.) Keep up your amazingness!!

Author's Response: I'm sorry this is the last one of my fics you read (thanks for reviewing them all, btw) because it's definitely not my favorite. It has its moments, but the timing is unrealistic, the first kiss is improbable, and I'm kind of embarrassed by it. But anyway--I'm delighted you like it, Remus is awesome, and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 12/29/07 16:23
Chapter: Chapter 1: Prince Charmingly Gallant

Lily HOW SDARE YOU BE MEAN TO JAMES LIE THAT!! Okay well on to the next chapter...

Author's Response: lol...she wasn't doing it to be mean--it just kind of ended up that way.

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 12/02/07 4:12
Chapter: Chapter 2: I'd Rather Have You

awwwwwwwwwwww! That was so beautiful! Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!

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