Reviewer: Nevilles Girl
Date: 07/01/08 16:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

I am sure I am going to regret saying this, but are you implying she is Rowena's and Salazar's daughter?

The poem was very good and it pulled me along tempted me to read the next word the whole time. The repetition was very nice but not over the top. The free-verse was very nice and not so "free" that it felt like you left the reader behind.

It was so good, I did not notice how long it was for a poem.

Smiles,
Luna

Reviewer: slytherins_queen2
Date: 09/10/07 6:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! Very well written, and made me a little teary. You're a fantastic writer, keep on writing!

Author's Response: Oh thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it (although it did make you teary).

Reviewer: Flobberworm93
Date: 09/08/07 10:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was amazing. Absolutely amazing.

BUT you know what else is amazing? You know what I'm talking about . . . send in your prologue!!

Author's Response: haha! Thanks so much! The prologue is currently waiting to be validated. I'll let you know when it is.

Reviewer: MistressOfTime
Date: 08/29/07 15:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

This came out so good! I'm so glad we messed with that ending as much as we did...simple, yet perfect! Great job, again!

Author's Response: I'm super glad we took the time to get it right too! Thanks again for your help!

Reviewer: turtles_rock
Date: 08/29/07 8:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

AWWW
So sad (sniff)
So good though it rocked
Yay first review


Author's Response: Yay!! Thanks for reviewing! I'm so glad you liked it.

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