Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 01/06/08 13:44
Chapter: Chapter 2: A Little Help From My Friends

Wonderful story--I like you're unique take on each of the characters we know so well. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!
Thank you!

Reviewer: Nuts
Date: 01/06/08 9:22
Chapter: Chapter 2: A Little Help From My Friends

This story is really good oh and I'm a girl =) sorry for not mentioning it before.

Reviewer: vasta
Date: 01/06/08 7:35
Chapter: Chapter 2: A Little Help From My Friends

it seems like it's going to be a very good story. you write so effortlessly that reading is a pleasure. please, update soon :)

Reviewer: inluvwid_pdft
Date: 01/05/08 20:25
Chapter: Chapter 2: A Little Help From My Friends

NICE CHAPTER

Reviewer: inluvwid_pdft
Date: 01/05/08 20:06
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Saint in the City

hi!... love this chapter! And my name, though a bit long is Mrunmai. Is the potter family foundation a sort of Charity house, where people donate for good causes such as... funding Hogwarts, perhaps?

Author's Response: Yes. I took the idea of the Carter Family Foundation [from 'ER'] and sort of adjusted it for my own means. The Potter Foundation's pretty much sole purpose is money for Hogwarts...helping pay for kids like Tom Riddle, upkeep of the school, etc.

Reviewer: inluvwid_pdft
Date: 01/05/08 19:27
Chapter: Prologue: Just Sand and Water

I really liked the prolouge. Pit was really good.

Reviewer: Nuts
Date: 10/06/07 13:12
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Saint in the City

Oh lool my name is Naz. :)

Author's Response: Ok, Naz! So, I probably should have mentioned all of this in my note, but... boy? girl? (preference?) Look for your mention probably in Chapter 2 (I think; if not, chapter 3)

Reviewer: Nuts
Date: 10/05/07 14:14
Chapter: Chapter 1: A Saint in the City

Greaat story and John Carter is the correct answer I suppose. :)

Author's Response: Lol, yay! You are now the official winner of my *contest*

Author's Response: So, I forgot to mention...if you want to redeem your "prize" I will need a name...first and/or last or whatever (your choice). :)

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 09/28/07 4:59
Chapter: Prologue: Just Sand and Water

Hmmm interesting characterisation of Lily. Oh how it must suck to always have to behave like a lady, and be all composed... but really nice introduction!

Reviewer: jumpin_jellybeans
Date: 09/07/07 15:21
Chapter: Prologue: Just Sand and Water

Wow, I love the way you are able to convey emotion so strongly, I really feel I can relate to Lily. Cant wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: aub_1344
Date: 09/02/07 16:25
Chapter: Prologue: Just Sand and Water

I think you have a wonderful beginning here. It's impressive how much emotion you were able to include in the first chapter without overdoing it. Lily seems believable and, from the little we know about her, totally in-character. I'm hooked.
I also think this is an interesting way to portray her family; slightly prim and snooty, but also loving and compassionate.
Bravo so far. I hope the next chapter will be coming soon.

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 09/01/07 22:44
Chapter: Prologue: Just Sand and Water

Hmmm, first chapter isn't terribly impressive, but I am going to stick with it. It sounds like a very serious Marauder-Era stroy, and good ones don't come around often, but this has potential. I like it.

Reviewer: lily16
Date: 09/01/07 22:01
Chapter: Prologue: Just Sand and Water

ok. i was just reading the 1st part all the way in the begining. i KNEW the car was gonna crash! thats all i had to say. i'll go read the rest now:-)

... that was really sad. i had tears in my eyes even though lily's mom was a OC. i love how you wrote all the emotion, it seemed very real. i think you also wrote lily's character well, ialways pictured her very strong. i liked the way you started this story-very unique.

can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 09/01/07 19:45
Chapter: Prologue: Just Sand and Water

OH that was so so so so sad!!!!! That ending had me near tears. But I love stories that deal nicely with death, and this is one of them...please post more soon...will there be Lily/James in this...
It's lovely!

Author's Response: Don't worry...there will be plenty of Lily/James in this story...they're my favorites to write about :)

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